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The Sun Down Motel
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bookshelves: paranormal-mystery, canadian, riedel-titles-2023, standard-mystery
Apr 20, 2023
bookshelves: paranormal-mystery, canadian, riedel-titles-2023, standard-mystery
Simone St. James� first novels were deliciously mysterious. After “The Broken Girls� giveaways surged internationally, I hoped Simone would maintain what makes her unique. Alas, this was another crime thriller. ‘Paranormal mysteries� should exude life enduring wonderment.
I love that �The Sun Down Motel� is modern, blended with the recent past most of us know, only 35 years ago. I prefer our authors promoting Canada and our language along with it. We call secondary education, meals, and footwear: university, supper, and runners.
We bought DzԱ’s novels new. I am surprised to be giving two stars. This joyous era was forced with disdain rather than rendered with accuracy; outwardly stating how “outdated� things purportedly were. In 2023, my landline gets me on-line and is a phone that works in a power outage. If the internet doesn’t connect, I need a phonebook! Even though this was ‘horror�, I have never seen the 1980s lack vibrancy before.
There are jerks who look askance at colour but it was not particular to the 1980s. I grew up with black best friends, neighbours, and teachers. I was upset by the push to make this era sound archaic, when a passerby “looked twice at black & white girls talking in a park�. I dropped a third star for spoiling a joyous resolution with a depressing addendum. In fiction, happy endings are possible!
Editing is essential. We heard how wet characters were too often. Simone said the hotel owners were 30 in 1982 and dead in 2017: in their 60s? The year their son was said to be 50? Authors, we love your compelling, compassionate adventures. Please never mind fabricating characters twists, which too often cause you to lose focus on the finer attributes and coherence of your stories. This fresh, original story would have been enough.
I love that �The Sun Down Motel� is modern, blended with the recent past most of us know, only 35 years ago. I prefer our authors promoting Canada and our language along with it. We call secondary education, meals, and footwear: university, supper, and runners.
We bought DzԱ’s novels new. I am surprised to be giving two stars. This joyous era was forced with disdain rather than rendered with accuracy; outwardly stating how “outdated� things purportedly were. In 2023, my landline gets me on-line and is a phone that works in a power outage. If the internet doesn’t connect, I need a phonebook! Even though this was ‘horror�, I have never seen the 1980s lack vibrancy before.
There are jerks who look askance at colour but it was not particular to the 1980s. I grew up with black best friends, neighbours, and teachers. I was upset by the push to make this era sound archaic, when a passerby “looked twice at black & white girls talking in a park�. I dropped a third star for spoiling a joyous resolution with a depressing addendum. In fiction, happy endings are possible!
Editing is essential. We heard how wet characters were too often. Simone said the hotel owners were 30 in 1982 and dead in 2017: in their 60s? The year their son was said to be 50? Authors, we love your compelling, compassionate adventures. Please never mind fabricating characters twists, which too often cause you to lose focus on the finer attributes and coherence of your stories. This fresh, original story would have been enough.
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Reading Progress
December 25, 2022
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December 25, 2022
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to-read
December 25, 2022
– Shelved as:
canadian
December 25, 2022
– Shelved as:
paranormal-mystery
April 19, 2023
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Started Reading
April 19, 2023
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riedel-titles-2023
April 19, 2023
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standard-mystery
April 19, 2023
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15.34%
"These would be higher calibre gems if Simone St. James set her books in our own country. Some of our least known towns did wonders for "Corner Gas" and "Schitt's Creek". There is enough about New York and American states. However, I'm glad she creates 'paranormal mystery'. I especially commend her for modernizing them. Never mind compounding the novels about war or the past. Let our generation encounter ghosts!"
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"Oh, gosh, I am going to have to give up Simone St. James if she is an authoress who doesn't add an S to "backwards" and "towards"!!!! Where was her editor generally? EVERY time rain is mentioned, she goes on about dripping, coats, or hoods more than mystery details. We need the ambiance of FEELINGS more than body gestures ALWAYS. Finally, using a US location doesn't mean chucking our vocabulary and spelling, gee!"
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April 20, 2023
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I fondly remember 1982 as the year my longest-lived childhood cat was born, lasting until 2003. Then came McCartney & Spirit, whom I have had all this time. I painfully lament their ascension dates. Their birthdays and all memories, I cherish and hold them as close to me as I can. We make a flowerbed of their resting place. Love, Carolyn.

To be honest, I would love if she would set the stories in Canada.
Not that I am complaining, but we do not need every single story to be set in the USA. Take Europe, Africa, Asia, etc. we have so many lovely, eerie, serene, scary places on this planet, right?
In general I liked the book, but I can see how there were so many no goes for you.
Maybe her next one, next year, will be more to your liking. Or not... ;)
No matter what, I like your honest review!

I can't think of any nice stories about Germany. Please leave a note anywhere (except messaging or recommend button), if you know translated books that are not about war. Germany must be a beautiful place and is a part of my heritage! Modern instead (whenever it was published) instead of fake historical fiction is even better.
Simone using words like "college" when we say "university" irked me enough to suggest promoting Canada but that did not lead to 2 stars.
Turning the potential of 'paranormal mystery' into a 'thriller' was disappointing. Inaccuracy of people's ages and our continued need for solid old technology was bad. Finally, we have the joy of finding out that Viv is okay. She fought in self-defense and can be happy now. Did she need to offer to go to jail and have cancer? What a downer!