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Pretty Little Liars (Pretty Little Liars, #1)
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I'm ashamed to admit I've read this book, and the only reason I'm copping to it is because I need it for my reading challenge. Pretty Little Liars is not the type of book I usually read, but after a friend admitted the show was one of her guilty pleasures, I decided to check out the book. Unfortunately, I got no pleasure from reading this, only guilt and frustration.
Pretty Little Liars tells the story of Aria, Spencer, Emily, and Hanna, four girls whose best friend, Alison, disappears one night during a slumber party. After their devastating loss the four girls drift apart, leading their own separate lives. Aria spends two years abroad in Iceland, Spencer immerses herself in her academic and extracurricular actives, Emily focuses on swimming, and Hanna loses weight and becomes the new "it" girl at their posh private school, Rosewood Day. Three years later, each of them begin receiving ominous text messages from someone named A, who threatens to expose their secrets鈥攕ecrets only Alison knows.
The best thing about this book is the premise. In the hands of a good writer, this could have been an engaging read, but there is not one aspect of the story, other than the mystery, that was handled well. The characters are vapid and shallow, and an extraordinary amount of time is spent describing their appearance, in particular their designer clothing. The messages are appallingly unhealthy. One of the main romances is between Aria and her English teacher, which is presented as "true love" rather than an inappropriate affair between a young girl and a much older man, who as her teacher holds a lot of power over her. There are also implied messages about the importance of being thin, wealthy, and wearing designer labels.
The writing was very clunky and unpolished. The dialogue was unrealistic, particularly when it came to the parents. There was an excessive use of dialogue tags and an excessive use of words other than "said." Characters "squeaked," "whispered," "spat," "murmured," and "threw in" all on one page, in the course of one conversation. While I'm hardly a stickler for the "only use said" rule, I found it very distracting here. Instead of relying on the dialogue itself to show how the characters are speaking, the dialogue tags tell us how the lines are being delivered. Shepard also tends to abuse adverbs throughout the text. Most times they were unnecessary, and sometimes they were downright awkward. In one example, a boy "messily dribbled" beer down his chin. The word "messily" is unneeded because it's implied by the situation.
I won't be reading on in the series, although I'm mildly interested to know who A is. The mystery is intriguing, but I don't care what happens to any of the characters, and I can't suffer through glorified student/teacher relationships, or poor writing to satisfy my curiosity. Those who enjoyed the Gossip Girl series will probably enjoy this one.
Pretty Little Liars tells the story of Aria, Spencer, Emily, and Hanna, four girls whose best friend, Alison, disappears one night during a slumber party. After their devastating loss the four girls drift apart, leading their own separate lives. Aria spends two years abroad in Iceland, Spencer immerses herself in her academic and extracurricular actives, Emily focuses on swimming, and Hanna loses weight and becomes the new "it" girl at their posh private school, Rosewood Day. Three years later, each of them begin receiving ominous text messages from someone named A, who threatens to expose their secrets鈥攕ecrets only Alison knows.
The best thing about this book is the premise. In the hands of a good writer, this could have been an engaging read, but there is not one aspect of the story, other than the mystery, that was handled well. The characters are vapid and shallow, and an extraordinary amount of time is spent describing their appearance, in particular their designer clothing. The messages are appallingly unhealthy. One of the main romances is between Aria and her English teacher, which is presented as "true love" rather than an inappropriate affair between a young girl and a much older man, who as her teacher holds a lot of power over her. There are also implied messages about the importance of being thin, wealthy, and wearing designer labels.
The writing was very clunky and unpolished. The dialogue was unrealistic, particularly when it came to the parents. There was an excessive use of dialogue tags and an excessive use of words other than "said." Characters "squeaked," "whispered," "spat," "murmured," and "threw in" all on one page, in the course of one conversation. While I'm hardly a stickler for the "only use said" rule, I found it very distracting here. Instead of relying on the dialogue itself to show how the characters are speaking, the dialogue tags tell us how the lines are being delivered. Shepard also tends to abuse adverbs throughout the text. Most times they were unnecessary, and sometimes they were downright awkward. In one example, a boy "messily dribbled" beer down his chin. The word "messily" is unneeded because it's implied by the situation.
I won't be reading on in the series, although I'm mildly interested to know who A is. The mystery is intriguing, but I don't care what happens to any of the characters, and I can't suffer through glorified student/teacher relationships, or poor writing to satisfy my curiosity. Those who enjoyed the Gossip Girl series will probably enjoy this one.
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The show and the books are different; that much I know for sure. But now I just have to read them. So I'm going to pick them up again and give it another go.
BUT. . . In those two chapters, I agreed with everything that you've put into this review. Cut down on the crap and the entire story could probably be told in 4 or 5 hundred pages. The writing is juvenile and I felt like it was meant to be presented to a ten year old and not a teenager. Still, the story was compelling, so I'm going to keep reading.

I'm watching the television show now and I think it's better than the books, although the relationship between Ezra and Aria is even more creepy and inappropriate. I have a higher tolerance for bad television than I do for bad books.
I agree that this story could have been told in far fewer pages and in far fewer books (actually, the author extended the series because it was so popular, which almost never works out). Good luck in getting through the books.


I can only compare the first book to the first season of the show (which is as far as I've gotten) so maybe the later seasons aren't as good as the later books. I've heard the story lines are different too. They say that A isn't even the same person, and I've read the the Ezra/Aria relationship goes down a different path. I'm admittedly a little curious but I don't know if I can get through fourteen more books.


I agree with you on the Sookie Stackhouse series. I'm still reading them but only because I know there's only one more book and I want to finish the series. The last few have been awful and if there wasn't a sure ending in sight I would not have read the last one nor would I read the next one.

(Sorry for the jumbled words I am on my android and my phone does not show the whole message I've typed)

I actually enjoy the television show in a guilty pleasure sort of way. I think that I too have a higher tolerance for bad TV than I do for bad books. The relationship between Ezra and Aria actually creeped me out more in the show, though. I think it's even more inappropriate because the show really presents them as being soul mates more so than in the first book. Other aspects of the show (e.g. the relationships between the girls) were more compelling than the books.
I enjoyed the early Sookie Stackhouse books. In my opinion, the fourth book was the best and the peek of the series and it's sort of down hill from there. I still enjoyed reading them until book nine but after that it became a chore. Those books are geared to an older audience than this one, that's for sure.

It seems to be a trend in popular fiction now, for teen girls at first--you're either into supernatural romances with brooding lead characters (which isn't bad if it's at least well written, which it usually isn't, even then, the relationships are usually still unhealthy), or there are these superficial story lines that play off some of the oldest cultural stereotypes: stories for girls which are all about clothes, being popular, being pretty, and being dramatic. All surface, no substance, and not a single female character who actually acted like she had a brain in her head or any spunk whatsoever. If someone hasn't already told you who A is, just Google it. The actual mystery storyline in the book is so small that it's not even worth it.

Yes, it's a long standing trend. I remember reading the Sweet Valley books when I was a tween and that too was filled with a bunch of shallow girls obsessed with popularity. Thankfully there are better books out there with girls who are intelligent and compelling. I prefer to spend my time with them.


Idk about how they did it in the show because I don't watch it...there is more in the show that is different from the books than similar and I am very stringent on that kind of stuff. They didnt even cast the 4 protagonists accurately, but that's a rant for another time haha.

Thank you. Audrey Hepburn is one of my favorite actresses. As for whether or not you should read the book, it really depends on your reading tastes. Until last season, the show was one of my guilty pleasures, but I still didn't like the book. I don't think it would be too confusing, but the characters aren't as likable as they are on the show and the relationships between the girls aren't as compelling.


He's a recent college grad in the TV show too, So he'd only be 22-24 or so. I don't know how the relationship pans out in the books, but from what I understand, it's very different from how it goes in the show.