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Pretty Little Liars by Sara Shepard
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it was ok
bookshelves: young-adult, contemporary

I'm ashamed to admit I've read this book, and the only reason I'm copping to it is because I need it for my reading challenge. Pretty Little Liars is not the type of book I usually read, but after a friend admitted the show was one of her guilty pleasures, I decided to check out the book. Unfortunately, I got no pleasure from reading this, only guilt and frustration.

Pretty Little Liars tells the story of Aria, Spencer, Emily, and Hanna, four girls whose best friend, Alison, disappears one night during a slumber party. After their devastating loss the four girls drift apart, leading their own separate lives. Aria spends two years abroad in Iceland, Spencer immerses herself in her academic and extracurricular actives, Emily focuses on swimming, and Hanna loses weight and becomes the new "it" girl at their posh private school, Rosewood Day. Three years later, each of them begin receiving ominous text messages from someone named A, who threatens to expose their secrets鈥攕ecrets only Alison knows.

The best thing about this book is the premise. In the hands of a good writer, this could have been an engaging read, but there is not one aspect of the story, other than the mystery, that was handled well. The characters are vapid and shallow, and an extraordinary amount of time is spent describing their appearance, in particular their designer clothing. The messages are appallingly unhealthy. One of the main romances is between Aria and her English teacher, which is presented as "true love" rather than an inappropriate affair between a young girl and a much older man, who as her teacher holds a lot of power over her. There are also implied messages about the importance of being thin, wealthy, and wearing designer labels.

The writing was very clunky and unpolished. The dialogue was unrealistic, particularly when it came to the parents. There was an excessive use of dialogue tags and an excessive use of words other than "said." Characters "squeaked," "whispered," "spat," "murmured," and "threw in" all on one page, in the course of one conversation. While I'm hardly a stickler for the "only use said" rule, I found it very distracting here. Instead of relying on the dialogue itself to show how the characters are speaking, the dialogue tags tell us how the lines are being delivered. Shepard also tends to abuse adverbs throughout the text. Most times they were unnecessary, and sometimes they were downright awkward. In one example, a boy "messily dribbled" beer down his chin. The word "messily" is unneeded because it's implied by the situation.

I won't be reading on in the series, although I'm mildly interested to know who A is. The mystery is intriguing, but I don't care what happens to any of the characters, and I can't suffer through glorified student/teacher relationships, or poor writing to satisfy my curiosity. Those who enjoyed the Gossip Girl series will probably enjoy this one.
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February 12, 2013 – Started Reading
February 12, 2013 – Shelved
February 12, 2013 – Shelved as: young-adult
February 12, 2013 – Shelved as: contemporary
February 12, 2013 – Finished Reading

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booksofthedead If you want, I can tell you who A is?


message 2: by Becki (new)

Becki I started reading this book a while ago and put it down after two chapters because I just couldn't do it. I'm going to give it another shot, mainly because I can't do the television show any more. It is so boring that I'm losing my mind. Maybe I'm too old for this now that I'm in my thirties and not a youngster any more, but I still really want to know how the story ends.

The show and the books are different; that much I know for sure. But now I just have to read them. So I'm going to pick them up again and give it another go.

BUT. . . In those two chapters, I agreed with everything that you've put into this review. Cut down on the crap and the entire story could probably be told in 4 or 5 hundred pages. The writing is juvenile and I felt like it was meant to be presented to a ten year old and not a teenager. Still, the story was compelling, so I'm going to keep reading.


message 3: by Lisa (last edited Mar 17, 2013 01:15PM) (new) - rated it 2 stars

Lisa Becki wrote: "I started reading this book a while ago and put it down after two chapters because I just couldn't do it. I'm going to give it another shot, mainly because I can't do the television show any more. ..."

I'm watching the television show now and I think it's better than the books, although the relationship between Ezra and Aria is even more creepy and inappropriate. I have a higher tolerance for bad television than I do for bad books.

I agree that this story could have been told in far fewer pages and in far fewer books (actually, the author extended the series because it was so popular, which almost never works out). Good luck in getting through the books.


message 4: by Becki (new)

Becki If the show is better than the books. . . I might wind up passing. I'm just so bored by this point and it's being so dragged out. But I know that the storylines are different between the two, so I'm lost on what I ought to do. I've heard that there are five seasons of the show and maybe a movie after that. I don't know that I can stomach that much more of it.


Lisa Becki wrote: "If the show is better than the books. . . I might wind up passing. I'm just so bored by this point and it's being so dragged out. But I know that the storylines are different between the two, so I'..."

I can only compare the first book to the first season of the show (which is as far as I've gotten) so maybe the later seasons aren't as good as the later books. I've heard the story lines are different too. They say that A isn't even the same person, and I've read the the Ezra/Aria relationship goes down a different path. I'm admittedly a little curious but I don't know if I can get through fourteen more books.


message 6: by Becki (new)

Becki I had no idea that there were going to be that many. I had to go and look it up. I'm seeing that there are fourteen in the series, plus two side-books based on the series. Wow. I don't know that I'm going to be willing to follow this through that far for sure. Sookie Stackhouse lost me for the same reason. By book 10 I was just totally done in and stopped after that.


Lisa Becki wrote: "I had no idea that there were going to be that many. I had to go and look it up. I'm seeing that there are fourteen in the series, plus two side-books based on the series. Wow. I don't know that I'..."

I agree with you on the Sookie Stackhouse series. I'm still reading them but only because I know there's only one more book and I want to finish the series. The last few have been awful and if there wasn't a sure ending in sight I would not have read the last one nor would I read the next one.


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Ronnie I am just finishing up the first book. Quite honestly I hate it. If it were a 400-500 page book without all of the crap, I might have liked it more. Ezra and Aria's relationship repulses me and so does the fact that these girls to me just seem so entitled...I don't know why those things are making it so difficult for me to get through the book....I don't really mind the TV series for the same reason I can handle bad TV much better than a bad book....plus I find Ezra and Aria's relationship much less creepy for the fact that Lucy Hale (Aria is 23 or 24 years old in real life) I usually enjoy both reading and watching the show to see the differences however I doubt I'll finish this book series even though I really would like to know the ending. I am actually about to read the Sookie Stackhouse novels and side stories so that is good information to know. I am hoping the Sookie novels will be more my age(20's)then this series. I honestly don't quite find this series appropriate for young girls, it might have been different with the girls being older, I'm not sure

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Lisa Ronnie wrote: "I am just finishing up the first book. Quite honestly I hate it. If it were a 400-500 page book without all of the crap, I might have liked it more. Ezra and Aria's relationship repulses me and so ..."

I actually enjoy the television show in a guilty pleasure sort of way. I think that I too have a higher tolerance for bad TV than I do for bad books. The relationship between Ezra and Aria actually creeped me out more in the show, though. I think it's even more inappropriate because the show really presents them as being soul mates more so than in the first book. Other aspects of the show (e.g. the relationships between the girls) were more compelling than the books.

I enjoyed the early Sookie Stackhouse books. In my opinion, the fourth book was the best and the peek of the series and it's sort of down hill from there. I still enjoyed reading them until book nine but after that it became a chore. Those books are geared to an older audience than this one, that's for sure.


message 10: by K. (new) - rated it 2 stars

K. Dawidowicz YES. Someone else who thought there were bad messages for teen girls in the book, too. I kept waiting for the characters to do something (seriously, anything) to show some common sense, but no. There was nothing, and I chalk this read up to temporary insanity from waiting for fall classes to start.

It seems to be a trend in popular fiction now, for teen girls at first--you're either into supernatural romances with brooding lead characters (which isn't bad if it's at least well written, which it usually isn't, even then, the relationships are usually still unhealthy), or there are these superficial story lines that play off some of the oldest cultural stereotypes: stories for girls which are all about clothes, being popular, being pretty, and being dramatic. All surface, no substance, and not a single female character who actually acted like she had a brain in her head or any spunk whatsoever. If someone hasn't already told you who A is, just Google it. The actual mystery storyline in the book is so small that it's not even worth it.


message 11: by Lisa (new) - rated it 2 stars

Lisa K. wrote: "YES. Someone else who thought there were bad messages for teen girls in the book, too. I kept waiting for the characters to do something (seriously, anything) to show some common sense, but no. The..."

Yes, it's a long standing trend. I remember reading the Sweet Valley books when I was a tween and that too was filled with a bunch of shallow girls obsessed with popularity. Thankfully there are better books out there with girls who are intelligent and compelling. I prefer to spend my time with them.


message 12: by Avital (new)

Avital Simone I feel like you should keep reading..I mean the character development in my opinion is pretty well done..I was initially frustrated with some of these characters as well, but shepherd did a really good job of making them more relatable...they all have different insecurities and I personally cared if they lived or died. Also I don't think you should be so nitpicky with the adverbs and "said" rule mostly because this series isn't meant to be a work of art, but simply something fun to read, a time waster. If you keep going it's certainly worth it. I have to admit that there may be one or two things that become a bit too convenient or unrealistic later on in the series, but my love for this series compels me to forgive them :).


message 13: by Avital (new)

Avital Simone Oh also, about Ezra and aria, in the book he's like 22 or so, recently graduated from college. He's not in his late 20s or 30s. Even so, it is inappropriate but they never have sex or anything too extreme. In the books it's more emotional than it is physical. Of course they do kiss and hug, etc. but I didn't find it too creepy.

Idk about how they did it in the show because I don't watch it...there is more in the show that is different from the books than similar and I am very stringent on that kind of stuff. They didnt even cast the 4 protagonists accurately, but that's a rant for another time haha.


message 14: by Lisa (new) - rated it 2 stars

Lisa Isabella wrote: "I don't know whether to read pretty little liars or not, would you reccommend it, i watch the tv show so i don't know whether it would be confusing or too different from the books or something, wha..."

Thank you. Audrey Hepburn is one of my favorite actresses. As for whether or not you should read the book, it really depends on your reading tastes. Until last season, the show was one of my guilty pleasures, but I still didn't like the book. I don't think it would be too confusing, but the characters aren't as likable as they are on the show and the relationships between the girls aren't as compelling.


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Melanie Glad to see I'm not the only one thinking along these same lines about the first PPL book. I couldn't stand some of the horrible behavior they had or how shallow they were. Honestly the only thing that kept me reading to the end of even just this one (not that I've read any of the others) was wondering if any of the mystery was going to be solved at all and to sed if "the Jenna Thing" was ever gonna get explained. I was sorely disappointed.


Melanie Avital wrote: "Oh also, about Ezra and aria, in the book he's like 22 or so, recently graduated from college. He's not in his late 20s or 30s. Even so, it is inappropriate but they never have sex or anything too ..."

He's a recent college grad in the TV show too, So he'd only be 22-24 or so. I don't know how the relationship pans out in the books, but from what I understand, it's very different from how it goes in the show.


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