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Redeeming 6 by Chloe Walsh
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it was ok
bookshelves: romance, romance-mf, romance-high-school, romance-pregnancy

Well, this was painful. Just not only for the reasons I was hoping it to be 😭😭


*Note: in order not to repeat myself, I won’t be talking about the blurb again, you can read my review of Saving 6 if you are interested :)


I understand the author was restricted to fit everything that happened in K13 (book 2) so there wasn’t always room to do what the story needed. But having all the drama of K13 on top of the situations regarding Joey and Aoife was too much. In contrast to the other three books in the series, there wasn’t any balance between the good and the bad; there weren’t any moments to breathe and get ready for what was yet to come. It was like going free fall for over 800-hundred pages, which ironically made the emotional impact smaller. You need to stand up in order to fall again. That was something Chloe Walsh mastered in K13, where I was shaking with laughter at one chapter and with fear at the next. There was nothing more than angst here and I needed some equilibrium to stay attached to the story.


The pace was off. It follows a similar timeline to K13 but the summarizing of dialogues and actions that happened in K13 made it feel like we were jumping from one scene to another. Maybe to compensate, Aoife and Joey spent the first 80% of the book walking in circles, copying what had already happened in S6 but getting worse and worse with time. It would probably have worked better if we didn’t know what was going to happen at the end- I still remember how my heart raced with fear in K13-, but here I just wanted to know what was going to come next. Only to realize that ‘next� was only 20% of the book, with more scenes about other characters than the main couple and with way too many problems that were left to imagine were solved in the epilogue.


While I still adore how Aoife loves Joey unconditionally, how strong she is during the whole process, I missed having more growth on her character. It pains me to say this, but the constant back and forth between them tired me so much that I finished this book feeling less into them than I did at the end of K13-and they were my favs just after Gibs. I finished the book thinking ‘that was it? After so much pain and tears, that’s all we are going to see of them happily together?�.


As a side note, I don’t get why Aoife was so adamant to know how many girls Joey had been with before dating her. And don’t get me started with the amount of violence. I can give Joey a pass, but all the others? Is there any male leader that it’s not going to solve problems by beating them?


It also rubbed me the wrong way how many characters were either ‘evil characters� or ‘good characters�, how even the scenes between Johnny’s mum and Joey got me out of the story. We didn’t have the time to let the secondary characters bond with Aoife and Joey, it felt they were just there to fulfill a role and that’s it. I never felt that way when I was reading Shannon’s story. If anything, it was the other way around: the secondary characters stole so many scenes, it was the whole reason why K13 is one of my all time favorite books.


Again, most of the problems were regarding the structure/pace and that couldn’t have been easily solved due to the restrictions of the timeline. I’d even argue that the pregnancy trope was an unnecessary added drama to an already crowded tragedy, but that wasn’t something the author could have changed. However, I think it could have been partially solved if the majority of the story happened after K13, instead of just the 20%, giving the author more room to give new content and a more satisfying happily ever after.


Overall, it may not feel like it but I love this series, I love these characters, I will continue to look forward to every single volume (Gibbs and Claire-bear’s the most). It’s just that, sadly, this didn’t live up to my expectations and left me with a rather bitter aftertaste.


Series:
1. Binding 13: 4 stars
2. Keeping 13: ALL THE STARTS❤️
3. Saving 6: 4.25 stars
4. Redeeming 6: 2.5 stars
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Reading Progress

February 17, 2023 – Shelved
February 17, 2023 – Shelved as: to-read
February 27, 2023 – Shelved as: tbr-unreleased
March 26, 2023 – Started Reading
March 29, 2023 – Shelved as: romance
March 29, 2023 – Shelved as: romance-mf
March 29, 2023 – Shelved as: romance-high-school
March 29, 2023 – Shelved as: romance-pregnancy
March 29, 2023 – Finished Reading

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Matilda aoife had zero growth and it was so disappointing! i could have overlooked some of her behavior if she matured but she only seemed to go backwards. this book should have been 50% in the past and 50% in the present. only a fifth of the book was interesting 🫥


Lau ♡ @Matilda After seeing the character growth in Shannon I was expecting that here too. And we had six years of Aoife, she should at least change a bit 🤔 but yeah, my main problem was the pacing, i agree with you about cutting down the 'past' part and adding more about the present, it felt too rushed and so bittersweet after looking forward to seeing it for so long 😭😭


message 3: by Rain (new)

Rain What a beautiful and honest review. The more I keep hearing about this book, the more I’m thinking I’m going to skip this story. I’m so sorry it didn’t work for you!!


Lau ♡ Thank you so much, @Rain!💛 I really enjoyed the other three books, that's why I was so underwhelmed about this one 😭But i've seen other people still loving it, maybe you need to be more into drama than me 🤔


message 5: by ellie (new)

ellie eurgh im sorry this one let you down, Lau! :( a lot of my friends were so pumped for this second book and the amount of them who are just as disappointed as you is such a bummer😔 least you’re not alone in the fact this didn’t work! hoping your next read is better<3


message 6: by ⚔Iܲí� (last edited Mar 31, 2023 11:57AM) (new) - added it

 ⚔Iܲí⚔ I'm so sorry Lau the fact that they were your fav couple and their own books (or rather this one) sucked. 😔 I'm actually postponing reading this book because I wasn't that impressed w the first one and I kinda hoped the 2nd book would be everything I needed it to be but deep down I doubted that.

Honestly I think the author should have covered k13 timeline in the first book and this one could be about Joey and Aoife in their twenties? W new events new dialogues etc. Chloe single-handedly limited herself to this timeline.

And I already know I'm gonna agree w you on strictly good/bad characters coz I already felt that way about the 1st book. Joey is the only properly fleshed out character imo that's why I basically couldn't connect to Aoife and I really need to be connected to the h to enjoy a romance book


Lau ♡ @Ellie Yeah, it seems like people are either loving it or feeling disappointed. You're right though; it's stupid but i felt a bit relieved that I wasn't going to be the only one not writing an ode about this. We are together in this pain lol it's not like it was horrible, more like it was nowhere what I was hoping it to be.
Thank you so much, Ellie!!💛 I'm reading Beneath the Stain and I'm really enjoying it so it's all good😌


message 8: by Lau � (last edited Apr 01, 2023 02:02AM) (new) - rated it 2 stars

Lau ♡ @Irunía Thank you so much! From the original blurb, I think the author had originally planned on continuing where Keeping 13 was left, but she decided to change it. I agree with you, I think one book about then before was needed because i wanted to see those moments when they fell in love, but this way we didn't really have anything (that was not seeing their HEA, and that was a giving) to surprise us. Part of the reason why K13 was so good (at least for me) was suffering the suspense of knowing something bad was going to happen but not knowing what or when. CW destroyed that here. As for dialogues... There are whole scenes here that are copy-pasted from K13 but written in a summary way to compensate, so it didn't feel coherent as in K13. I don't know, I was left wanting to see them after K13 as I did when I finished K13... And we didn't have that even after 1800 pages. I really hope you enjoy it at least a bit more whenever you feel the strength to try it 💛


message 9: by lila � (new)

lila ⋆ GOSH im super sorry this was so disappointing!! idk if i even wanna read it now (who am i kidding, im gonna read it if only for joey 😭) but im super wary now. but the fact that so many people were disappointed by the turn this took! and i actually thought this was gonna be a LOT better than book 1. the pacing problem sounds... bad, to say the least. great review tho, laura! hopefully gibsieclaire don't disappoint us as much 💛


preoccupiedbybooks Ah what a shame, after you enjoyed all the others! Know how that feels!


Lau ♡ @Lila i also thought this was going to be better, i wanted to see them okay after K13 but we spent most of the book in the same timeline ad K13 and it didn't work for me. It seems like some people did love this one more than S6, hopefully you are among them! And yeah, I need to see Gibsie and Claire, he's my fav and i loved seeing them interact here so much (same as in B13-K13). It was worthy if only for that 😌 thank youuu 💛


Lau ♡ Thank you, Fran!💛 It was a bit frustrating but one out of four is still a good proportion. Probably i wouldn't have been as disappointed if I hadn't loved the others. Hopefully the next books are amazing too 🤞🏼


EmBibliophile There was no balance or a moment to breathe indeed!! I totally get your point about that! I also get what you’re saying about Aoife, but I blamed it on the pregnancy? I don’t have any experience but I guess that’s how pregnant women react? I don’t know I just thought she was being typical Aoife plus the hormones, lol! However, I also wanted more of them! I so wanted more of their HEA! I still loved the book so much. I totally understand why it wasn’t a hit for you tho. Great review, sweetie. Can’t wait for Gibsie and Claire’s book. Those two will be the death of me!!😭♥️


Lau ♡ I'm so glad you loved it, Em!!💛 Yeah, maybe it was just a new mom being worried and having loads of hormones... But at least one chapter of her realizing that would have been better, not just an epilogue. And in Shannon's POV! I loved seeing the girl again but i would have preferred at least one epilogue/happy chapter with Joey/Aoife POV.

Gibsie and Claire are going to be the best of the best. Part of me is worried we'll have to wait for their book because the author knows that's the one we are all looking forward to and they tend to put the best last. But i really hope it's the next one 🤞🏼🤞🏼 thank you so much, Em 💛


Nicoletta Mura I wanted the story to move forward, instead I felt I "wasted" my time.


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