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Kusamakura (Penguin Classics)
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Pure simple enchantment, with a healthy helping of farts. Soseki set out to write a “haiku-novel� and Kusamakura does bear many resemblances to Basho’s haiku travel book, The Narrow Road to the Deep North; but it is less a novel than a treatise on “aesthetic living�, which in the context of this book is akin to a path to enlightenment. So it is filled with asides, with brief discourses on how to live “non-emotionally�, free from petty social entanglements, so to clear the way for reaching the “heart of things�.
The nameless narrator, who is a painter on a journey through the mountains, realizes the heart of things on occasion throughout the book, and these moments are described exquisitely. Many of these moments occur in the natural world amid flowers and trees and streams, but the true heart of things is embodied by a woman he encounters at a hot spring. This woman, Nami (whose name means “beauty�), is considered mad or loopy by some, but to the narrator she embodies spontaneity and enlightened aesthetic living (without the need to even practice an art). She has lived her life with a crazy innocence upon returning to her small village after a disastrous marriage. Throughout the book she haunts and teases the narrator, sometimes intentionally, sometimes unintentionally, goading him to refine his quest for non-emotional living. There is no real hint of sexual attraction, though at times I suspected that just by being herself she would dismantle his carefully cultivated and refined way of life. Instead he ponders how to paint her, but there’s always something missing in her expressions, some vital component. He doesn’t figure out this missing piece until the very end when her cousin is heading to Manchuria for the Russo-Japanese war, and she looks at him with a look of “pitying love�. The war itself has acted as a distant but ominous shadow throughout the book.
The narrator never completes a painting in the book, though he writes quite a few poems, but in his philosophy being an artist is not an end in itself, it is a practice that can help one perceive the heart of things, so to paint or not to paint is of no consequence. In the end he feels a sense of deep completion when he completes Nami’s portrait inside his own mind with this expression of pitying love.
I mentioned farts because one of the chapters is positively fixated on them. The narrator is griping about city living where people “count your farts�. I don’t know if this is a Japanese idiom or whether it was coined by Soseki, but it reminded me of another highly refined Japanese artist, Yasujiro Ozu, who was also fixated on farts in one of his last movies, Good Morning.
The nameless narrator, who is a painter on a journey through the mountains, realizes the heart of things on occasion throughout the book, and these moments are described exquisitely. Many of these moments occur in the natural world amid flowers and trees and streams, but the true heart of things is embodied by a woman he encounters at a hot spring. This woman, Nami (whose name means “beauty�), is considered mad or loopy by some, but to the narrator she embodies spontaneity and enlightened aesthetic living (without the need to even practice an art). She has lived her life with a crazy innocence upon returning to her small village after a disastrous marriage. Throughout the book she haunts and teases the narrator, sometimes intentionally, sometimes unintentionally, goading him to refine his quest for non-emotional living. There is no real hint of sexual attraction, though at times I suspected that just by being herself she would dismantle his carefully cultivated and refined way of life. Instead he ponders how to paint her, but there’s always something missing in her expressions, some vital component. He doesn’t figure out this missing piece until the very end when her cousin is heading to Manchuria for the Russo-Japanese war, and she looks at him with a look of “pitying love�. The war itself has acted as a distant but ominous shadow throughout the book.
The narrator never completes a painting in the book, though he writes quite a few poems, but in his philosophy being an artist is not an end in itself, it is a practice that can help one perceive the heart of things, so to paint or not to paint is of no consequence. In the end he feels a sense of deep completion when he completes Nami’s portrait inside his own mind with this expression of pitying love.
I mentioned farts because one of the chapters is positively fixated on them. The narrator is griping about city living where people “count your farts�. I don’t know if this is a Japanese idiom or whether it was coined by Soseki, but it reminded me of another highly refined Japanese artist, Yasujiro Ozu, who was also fixated on farts in one of his last movies, Good Morning.
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I'm finishing up his Kokoro right now, which has been a nice change of pace from the Dennis Cooper I've been reading. It's tragic, but also calm and serene, even dry. A real classic tale, slowly told.

I was blown away by Kobo Abe's Woman in the Dunes which is just shattering - slow and dreamy and terrifying.
If you haven't read him yet, I think you'd really like Edogawa Rampo. Creepy, odd short stories - a bit of horror genre here.
Speaking of Dennis Cooper, do you read his blog? I actually haven't read any of his books yet (on the ever-growing list...) but I do read his blog which is pretty interesting. It probably goes without saying that it is frequently work-inappropriate if that's a concern...

Thank you for the Edogawa Rampo rec! What a name... never heard of him. Definitely looks like something I'd like.
And, yes, I do visit Cooper's blog. I've arranged my desk here at work that nothing is "work-inappropriate". I just read three of his novels in quick succession. What a wild ride...

Edogawa Rampo is really interesting and sadly not too well known here. His name is supposed to be a Japanese pronunciation of Edgar Allen Poe.

Hahahahaha a healthy helping of farts. What a way to open a book review. Hahahahahaha

hahahaha! I don't generally appreciate scatological humor.

Anyway, just wanted to say, hey, I've never warmed to Mishima either. Partly because he's the 'go-to' Japanese author for so many westerners, but partly just cos I don't get it. I don't think his stuff hangs together, or at least I don't see what it is binding it. So I wondered, have you warmed to him? Any works in particular?
Oh, and have you read Tanizaki's 'Secret History of Lord Musashi'? Really a unique book in Tanizaki's ouvre - very influenced by Poe, I would guess, and dark and twisted-sexual as hell. But funny! One of my favourites.

Mishima, or at least the thought of Mishima, used to really turn me off. All that melodramatic posturing and self love! At least that's how I saw it... But as I've gotten older I've developed more of a taste for, what, histrionics? or at least keyed-up role playing, so when I finally got around to actually reading him just a few years ago I was ripe to enjoy it, and did. Loved The Sailor Who Fell From Grace With the Sea, Confessions of a Mask, and especially The Temple of the Golden Pavilion which I'd gladly read again and again. I started his Sea of Fertility tetralogy but only read the first, which I liked, but it did seem a mite overblown and maybe even too dry and detailed, but still... very interesting material. I don't have a full grasp of him either, but I think his stuff only gives the impression of not hanging together because he was so legitimately complex and varied, and so ambitious with the subjects he wanted to tackle - I mean sexuality, politics, general culture, religion, you name it - he seemed intent on encompassing all of Japan past present and future and reconfiguring it into a whole new beast ready to carry Japan into the 21st century and beyond. If you haven't seen Schrader's film based on his life, I really recommend it.
Haven't read that Tanizaki, but did read a couple others. Of course I dug the darkly twisted sex of it, so I'll definitely check out the one you mention.

Yeah, I read Mishima's 'Sailor...' when I was a teenager and liked it, but I guess later I doubted that impression after being nonplussed by the other stuff. 'Mask' didn't grab me and I tried 'Sea of Fertility' last year, only to stall after one too many noblemen-strolling-in-lavish-gardens scenarios. Will earmark 'Golden Pavilion' for my next attempt. Histrionics, huh? Not sure if I'm old enough for that yet. Maybe. Will try the film too. Cheers.
Re Tanizaki - yeah the other stuff's good if a bit flat, but to me 'Lord Musashi' is on another level. (Haven't read 'The Makioka Sisters', though.) Kawabata I like, though I'm not sure I've fully grasped him, and I guess I find him a bit too careful at first reading. But a re-reading may put him in a whole new light.
Oh yeah, and that intentness on encompassing all of Japan that you speak of in Mishima - I actually think that's part of what puts me off about him. I've never been a Pynchon or De Lillo fan either (to pick two possibly random examples) - or really much of a fan of any broad-tapestry socio-political sort of fiction (unless I'm missing something). Whenever I have a crack at Thomas Mann I think of Walser's comment to Hoffsmansthal: 'Can't you just forget that you're famous for a while?' Probably unfair but it just pops in there - it all just seems a little overwrought. But maybe that view will mellow with age. Still, for now I wonder if I see the point in 'the novel of ideas'.

I like what you say about mixing perfect shape with improvisation to get genius.
I never thought I'd ever be into anyone who engaged in melodramatic histrionics and radical self-absorption, but it happened and I don't know why. I also didn't get into Punk, in a modest way, until I hit my 40's. Not a mid-life crisis exactly, but perhaps a widening of my embrace of freedoms.
Being such a Walser devotee I'm surprised I give the time of day to any huge self-important novels of grand ideas, but I do. Though DeLillo's recent stuff, or rather his portentous tone, esp in an essay he wrote after 9/11, has started to wear on me. I don't put Pynchon in his camp though, as he can be so damn silly. I love Pynchon! But hear hear! on Walser's comment to Hofmannsthal (though I like some of his stuff also).

Punk? Yeah I came to hate it after being force-fed the Sex Pistols and Radio Birdman (Australian band) on late night TV as a teenager, but in my mid-20s I discovered The Stooges and never looked back. Always loved Joy Division though, if you can call them punk.

Check out Pynchon's later stuff - Mason & Dixon, Against the Day - which explore similar ideas as GR but aren't as crazy dense and have higher quotients of silliness and humor.
So what kind of music do you make?

As to the music, these days I find almost every musical term so undermined/devalued and sometimes outright changed from its original meaning that it's basically impossible to describe it unless you know the background of the person you're describing it to. It's a problem. But as you're an oldster like myself I'll say I mostly play old-fashioned indie rock, not the fey kind, but the kind that stems from Joy Division (who were, after all, one of the first UK indie bands in the true sense of the word) and leads through The Jesus & Mary Chain to My Bloody Valentine and kinda jumps the Atlantic with Slint in the 90s. You might put it under the umbrella of post-punk. If you were under 25 you might even call it 'shoegaze'. Also I dabble with home recordings of various genres and with varying levels of seriousness. If you want to have a listen here's some links. Please excuse the sound quality - it's getting there but on my budget (and with my Walserian/Bartlebyan lack of self-promotion) it's taking a while. No pressure at all for a critique of any kind.
Time for bed. Good chatting with you. Did I read that you're from Philadelphia? I have a taste for those gothic Eastern metropolises.

Not from Philly, but I've lived here since '94. It's a great old complicated place where I manage to live rather simply so to have time for long slow reads. I'm from a small town in Delaware.
I am not sure you'll like M&D, so pencil in ever so lightly.

I loved Pittsburgh, was fascinated by Detroit but haven't seen much more of the east than that, outside of New York.
Don't worry, the pencil is light. Just wanted to make sure the recommendation was heartfelt. 3 heartfelt word-of-mouths from folk with good taste equals a must-read.

Pynchon is one of my desert island authors so the recommendation is certainly heartfelt.

On another note, I think I read in one of your reviews (or maybe I inferred) that you're a writer? Granted, I'm sure half of the people on ŷ are writers, but I'm wondering what you write, if it's been published (incl on the net) or if you plan to publish it, etc.

I write poetry. Have been at it for a good 25 years. The nature of it has changed quite a bit over the years, and I tend to follow it wherever it wants to go. At this point, and for the last quite a few years, it's been primarily concerned with playfulness and improvisation, but with me being me there's usually an undercurrent of seriousness, however unspoken. To me it's very different from most of the reviews I've written here, in that I don't explicitly pursue ideas and (coherent!) thoughts, but rather improvise above and beneath them (if you will). I hate submitting stuff, but I have, and I have had quite a few poems published online and in print, but never a book, though I have over the years "self-published" chapbooks, though more for the purposes of organizing my output than for worldwide dissemination and domination.
I listened to a couple of your tunes and liked what I heard, though I'll have to listen to more to get a grasp of what you're doing. I'm typically very slow when it comes to absorbing things - like a sun-baked sponge that's become almost pumice-like - but then once that first spot of wetness occurs I absorb so quickly I can hardly keep up with it.




Some links - most recent first (some are years old, though):
And a sample of a long sprawling poem I'm working on this year:
Fractured, elephantine
boxes front the garage in
miniature. Huts frozen
by western omens. Peanuts
turn to favored grubs and
pounce on acres of mileage.
We prod the lost horseman
asking for beads. A cord
comes down from silvery trees
and tops our plentiful
jerky stations with sawn-off
increments of cats. Tattoos
turn from us and pass over
the bitter and reluctant
garbage-topped instruments.
Machinery then opens itself
to mold our heads into
decorative shrubs, or recently
it pours our yearnings
out and garbles delinquent toast.
Earth remains our donated stance
and we gaze footward, stations
collapsing and collecting
in tiny designs. Mops
come out to answer any holes.
Briefly I tend toward clouds
scooting by leopard skins and
quickly minted rags. I puzzle
Jenna as I puzzle Max but we
fit in the same pan
cooking as a single stew. Tainted
beds curve outward from our
unpremeditated goggles. Bent
food verging on cascading slivers
a corrosive plane of standard
feelers unclicks itself and
feathers into green gobbling.
etc. etc. etc.


And thanks Noran! didn't see your comment (#29) until just now.


I've actually toyed with the idea of having a blog, and even started one - with poems, reviews, random thoughts, etc. - but I lost interest for reasons that aren't clear to me, though it could be some form of Bartlebyism in that I have little interest in forcefully and consciously projecting a self-image, which seems to be required with a personal blog. Of course there's the whole backdoor way of passively projecting an undefined self-image, but I didn't stick with it long enough for that to develop; though who knows, maybe I'll go back to it.
Well, if it's good and of interest to others you would think a publisher wouldn't care if it had previously appeared in a blog. I'm probably old-fashioned at this point, but if I'm into a writer I'd buy his/her book regardless of whether I'd read some of the content online. I still want to have that "thing". But if the nature of the business is that online content is untouchable by publishers then I'd probably play the damn game, if I were you.

Yeah, I wouldn't have thought a publisher would care about the blog scenario either, but this friend seemed adament. Me, I love having the 'thing'. And this is the only future for publishing - to make 'things' desirable enough that people long to have them despite whatever content is available digitally. Truth is, I thought maybe having a blog would encourage me to finish something! Do it in serial form, Soseki-style, with a deadline. But I sure would like to see my stuff thingified again.
ŷ to consume my life? Luckily my internet connection's too intermittent for that, but it helps to pass the time during the quiet moments at work. I'm really surprised at the level of commitment to this site, actually. And at some of the books that, though the publishers can't keep them in print, appear to be widely-read here.

Of course any time we express anything we are projecting a self-image, and I do get off on the exhibitionist nature of expressing one's self in words online; but it's weird for me because I have expended quite a bit of energy in my life writing, and as part of writing is having the ability to create strong images and make strong statements I have cultivated that aspect of it, so that in writing I project a much stronger "public self" than I do in the flesh, where I am seriously self-effacing. With poetry I think (though I've never really thought of this before) I like to project something strong while being simultaneously self-effacing. Maybe. I think a similar quality attracts me in others also. It's a kind of humility, I guess, but then I like plenty of egomaniacal writers too.
I've always felt that if I had a blog (it is partially up by the way, but only because ever since I opened a gmail account I can't even figure out how to log on to it so I can take out all the content!) that in the absence of anyone actually reading it I'd lose interest. I don't have a problem writing stuff in private that no one reads, but to have it floating around unread online depresses me. But then you never know who's reading what once it's out there. I also think blogs require a certain blabbermouth quality (not to disparage blabbermouths who actually have something interesting to say) that I simply don't have. I don't know. I encourage you to do whatever it takes to finish something. The Soseki-style blog sounds like a good idea. Limit yourself to two paragraphs a day or something. Keep it small. Keep it going.
My first two years here on ŷ were a time of near total immersion. I could hardly let a day go by without writing a review, and I got involved in all kinds of drama, etc., but made friends, had great extended conversations, so quite often even as it consumed my life I was getting big payoffs, but then all of a sudden I cut the cord and stopped participating for a while, and while I have come back and have written reviews here and there I'm just not into it like I once was. It's still a great place for discovering books and discussing them, though. No place like it that I've come across.


As to the blog, I don't see why it absolutely has to be blabbermouthy - couldn't it just be a bunch of poems? My idea was an epistolary type thing - in my case it's a starship captain trapped on an alien planet where some Borgesian-idealistic paradox is playing out, told via log entries. That way each blog entry is a log entry and there's no need for anything else. But surely there'd be other ways around the form aside from just telling everyone what you had for breakfast and how heavy traffic was that morning.
And the music... I'm glad to hear you liked the lo-fi stuff (actually Adelaide 2011), cos it was the cheapest of recording set-ups and we were pleased with the result too (apart from the vocals, which are better on the Manchester stuff, but then the cost of the microphone really does make a difference). Also the lo-fi stuff was done with my best buddy from high school and we've been playing together for over 20 years, so it's probably got a little extra spice. Glad you like the songs - they also have been saved up over many years, stretching way back to the mid-90s. After my first band dissolved in my late teens I gave up on bands for a long while, just playing alone, jamming and occasionally jumping on stage with some outfit or other but basically not doing any serious gigging for over 15 years. Really it was going to Manchester that got me back into it - it seemed like make or break. All of which is to say that these 'Shadow History' songs are a certain type of beast - that is, pop songs, written as much as anything I've ever done with one eye on 'the charts' (but in a fantastical, bedsit-romantic kind of way), and dating mostly from a certain period. If you want to check out some more experimental noodly stuff there's my other bandcamp site - the COQ Bros might appeal (mostly plug-in-and-play random jamming), or the Ben W song 'Quiet Pleas' (quite meandering, though built around loops and mostly a one-man band thing), or even W.COQ's 'Breaking Rocks' (not shoegazey at all, but). Still, the reality is that most of the noodling I've ever done has floated out uncaptured into the ether, and when it comes to effects and electronics I keep it pretty basic. Have been jamming with a virtuosic/experimental/effects-loving lead guitarist in Sydney recently though and have plans to introduce his spacey sound into Shadow History when we finally play a gig up here.
Are you a musician yourself, by any chance?
What made you pull back from ŷ?
Thanks for your messages!
Are you on a bit of Japanese lit jag now?