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The Merchant of Venice by William Shakespeare
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Although the most famous speech from this piece is, deservedly and understandably, Shylock's 'prick us' monologue, I think that the more useful speech to talk about what I felt about the play is Portia's only slightly less famous 'quality of mercy' speech in the court room scene:

The quality of mercy is not strain'd,
It droppeth as the gentle rain from heaven
Upon the place beneath: it is twice blest;
It blesseth him that gives and him that takes:
'Tis mightiest in the mightiest: it becomes
The throned monarch better than his crown;
His sceptre shows the force of temporal power,
The attribute to awe and majesty,
Wherein doth sit the dread and fear of kings;
But mercy is above this sceptred sway;
It is enthroned in the hearts of kings,
It is an attribute to God himself;
And earthly power doth then show likest God's
When mercy seasons justice. Therefore, Jew,
Though justice be thy plea, consider this,
That, in the course of justice, none of us
Should see salvation: we do pray for mercy;
And that same prayer doth teach us all to render
The deeds of mercy. I have spoke thus much
To mitigate the justice of thy plea;
Which if thou follow, this strict court of Venice
Must needs give sentence 'gainst the merchant there.


That speech above is the reason why this play has received three starts instead of the five that it deserves for the brilliance of its rendering, the writing, the amazing commentary, the bravery of putting it out there, complication of its presentation... and really, everything else about it. Actually, let me be more precise: the fact that none of the characters in this play lived up to that speech is the reason is the reason for the three stars.

Here's the thing: I did not like a single person in this play. Not one. It was an absolute chore to read this play, and took much longer than it should have to get through- the same reaction I have to reading Russian novels or George Bernard Shaw plays where the characters are mere mouthpieces, and their sometimes jaw-droppingly awful actions should be excused by their overall 'message'. There were so many absolutely horrifying things going on in this play, and not one plotline to redeem it, or attach me to the story. Not one. Piles of racism, nationalism, religious preaching, a Christ complex or two, mildly offensive gender politics, the whole thing was an absolute morass- there's, as always, too much to deal with in a Shakespeare play to cover it all, which is why I have chosen the quality of mercy speech, and perhaps I'll be able to touch on everything spiraling out from there.

Not one person in this play particularly stuck to the above defined, idealized presentation of justice or mercy. Nobody particularly deserved mercy, either. Shylock (as subversive a condemnation of anti-Semitism as he might be), is forced to take his revenge too far for the sake of wrapping up the plotline so that the Jew doesn't win. Antonio, despite his surface presentation of goodness is a deeply cruel, probably racist prick who plays the martyr as it benefits him, and, I have a deep suspicion, gave to his friend Bassiano due to the fact that he is in love with him (and so, is selfish, not selfless). As for our supposed 'romantic' leads: Bassiano is one selfish jerk who teaches the audience that its totally cool to cheat people and take advantage of people if you're young and hot, Gratiano expresses his desire to lead a lynch mob, and thinks going off on racist rants is fun, and Lorenzo can't wait to spend the rest of his life lording his 'generosity' over what he believes will be his slavishly grateful Jewish wife. As for the women, Jessica cares more for rising in the world out of her 'inferior' Jewish position than her father or, really, anything else, and makes a sickening speech about how awesome her Jesus-lovin' fiance is, Nerissa starts off potentially interesting and winds up very quickly as a mere shadow and eventually literal echo of her employer, like Shakespeare forgot what he put her there to begin with.

And as for Portia... she's the only character in this play that I have a bit of a struggle with. I do want to like her- I certainly appreciate the fact that she starts off as independent as it is possible for her to be- supposedly living her life in accordance with her dead daddy's wishes, and yet her own mistress for what seems to have been a very long time. She's smart, witty, quick, and definitely not afraid to stick up for herself. She pretends the submissive wife when her husband runs off five minutes after they get engaged, pretending to go to a convent, and instead goes on a cross-dressing, everyone-saving adventure. But here's my thing with Portia- she is not merciful. She's mean, man. I started to feel sorry for all those poor princes who show up to try to claim her hand- I know they're just plot points and there to be made fun of, but good God. They're not people at all- they're just countries, being made fun of, 'cause dumb national stereotypes are fun. Shakespeare was in all likelihood playing to his audiences' nationalistic sympathies at the time- the two Princes who actually appear are of Arragon and Morocco. The English were not huge fans of Spain at the time given the current and past political situation, and making fun of black people... well, why not? The ones who are just talked about are Palatine, French, English and Neopolitan Princes- all (except for the English, which is dealt with below), countries I'm sure England was totally cool with them looking a bit ridiculous.

(I did actually love the description of the English prince- it was a humorous, sharp commentary on English power and imperialism.-"What say you, then, to Falconbridge, the young baron
of England?
You know I say nothing to him, for he understands
not me, nor I him: he hath neither Latin, French,
nor Italian, and you will come into the court and
swear that I have a poor pennyworth in the English.
He is a proper man's picture, but, alas, who can
converse with a dumb-show? How oddly he is suited!
I think he bought his doublet in Italy, his round
hose in France, his bonnet in Germany and his
behavior every where.
)

...Anyway, just another example of the cardboard people thing that helped to add up to a deeply unlikeable play- even if the observations were funny, and did help to set up Portia as a witty woman, their other uses cannot be ignored. (The above is the nicest thing she has to say about anybody, btw.) And after she gives an admittedly brilliant performance in the courtroom, Shakespeare feels the need to end the play with her as the nagging, scolding wife, who deliberately sets her husband up to be caught. 'Cause that's what the wimmens are like! Just waiting to claw your eyes out at any opportunity, dontcha know? Also, the action directly contradicted everything she had just said in the courtroom, as it was exactly like or worse than what Shylock supposedly did to Antonio. She spends this whole speech talking about how mercy does not mean keeping to the letter of the law, and it means understanding human frailty and how mercy is better than justice, etc, etc, and then, literally two scenes later, she's all, "but Bassianno, you saaaaaaid...." and takes huge self-righteous delight in ripping down the man she supposedly loves after setting him up to lose.

I suppose you can make the feminist argument that at least she doesn't give in totally to her man, and she still reminds him constantly who is in control- it is her money that allows Bassiano to put on a brave face in the courtroom, it is her words that get him out of it, it is her ring that shows him how close he can come to being tossed the fuck out. Even if she can't do that once she's married, she's made her point. But I don't know if this is a more positive stereotype of women than the woman who wilts into her husband immediately after her marriage.

As for the anti-Semitism in this play... it is a delicate subject, but I definitely come down on the side that Shakespeare meant this to be a subversive commentary on the popular views of the day. If the 'prick us' speech didn't open that window, the treatment of Shylock and how other characters talk about him throughout the play does. Shakespeare gives his audience exactly what they want (or what he believes they do) and believe, all while showing them why it is wrong, every step of the way. Even the way that Shylock is caught is absolutely wrong- these Christians, are, as mentioned above, worse than anything that Shylock could possibly have been- even with the exaggerated traits given to him by Shakespeare. His punishment is elegant, and far more cruel than just shooting him in the face would have been. And it certainly does not have that quality of mercy, whatever Antonio would like the audience to think. Shakespeare's poignant rendering of the realities of life as a member of an inferior sect in domestic or world society, and what those in positions of power feel entitled to do to you, is both subtle and in your face, and draws both laughter and anger at once. Beyond brilliant, really.

In any case- this is worth reading, as a brilliant, very brave, social commentary, as an interesting historical document, and as a beautifully written treatise on a number of very touchy subjects. It is absolutely worth the read, and I will probably read parts of it again as I wrestle with what I feel about it- but don't come in here looking for a story, or for people, for you will walk out quite disappointed. I don't think this is a bad thing- knowing the play's focus and limitations, rather (at least for me), allows one a window into appreciating a hidden, manic brilliance that might otherwise have remained hidden in the muck and sewer rotting garbage.

And such a want-wit sadness makes of me,
That I have much ado to know myself.


Antonio's lines open the play- I choose to read this as a disclaimer from Shakespeare, perhaps a statement of his own mind in setting these sometimes ugly, complicated thoughts to paper. A plea to look under rocks and among the worms, if we must, to find the beauty.

Do. It is worth it.

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June 1, 2009 – Finished Reading
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message 1: by Sarah (new)

Sarah You always write the best reviews, Kelly! Well done.


Kelly Thank you, Sarah, so nice of you, much appreciated! :)


message 3: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Vegan Kelly, I know I also loved one of your other reviews of another Shakespeare play. When I have some time I should check your shelves for Shakespeare's name to make sure I don't miss any of these reviews! Brilliant! Brave to review Shakespeare! (something I've still not done and might never do because I wouldn't do it as well as you do!)


Kelly Lisa- I actually have a specific 'Shakespeare' shelf, so that should make it easy for you to find, if you're interested. Thank you for expressing interest in reading them, its always so so nice to know that I'm not just writing these for the empty tubes of the internet, and that they are useful to someone. :)

I hope that you do review Shakespeare as well! Everyone has their own thoughts on him- part of why he's so wonderful is that his writing allows for that. I would love to see your interpretations as well!


Lori Bravo Kelly! I've always had a problem with Merchant, and you've nailed it perfectly.


Kelly Thanks Lori- I'm glad you agree. I did feel a bit odd for being held back from being deeply attached to it due to the things I stated above, since it is so brilliant on every other level. But it is a play, and I can't help but judge it at least partially on that format. Anyway, glad I'm not the only one. :)


Lori Nope you are most definitely not the only one! It's been years since I read it or seen a production, but there's a scene that has always left me baffled, the one where Jessica and her now-husband are talking about, uh, the weather or something, on their balcony? They just woke up? gah, this is NOT very clear! :D Anyway, when I first read it as a teen I thought it very poetic, but then later on I read it as they were having a fight, and there was definitely trouble in paradise. Do you know the scene I'm talking about?


message 8: by Kelly (last edited Jun 16, 2009 11:13AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Kelly Yes, I think I do- is this a scene that's towards the end of the play? Where they do the "in such a night," thing back and forth at each other? This?:

If so- I think you were right the first time. I read it as a mischevious game that started intellectual and turned into more personal barbs quite quickly. I didn't read it as a fight- just that Jessica started teasing him (like one does to people one loves), and yeah, Lorenzo has absolutely no sense of humor about himself, so he turned it ugly. Unsurprising!


Lori Yep that's the scene! I've just reread it, and I think it's this that made me wonder:

In such a night
Did young Lorenzo swear he loved her well,
Stealing her soul with many vows of faith
And ne'er a true one.

But on reading it now, I think you're right - it's teasing. They probably just had sex, and Lorenzo needs to be told how great he was in bed but instead is getting mocked, ha!


Kelly Sounds perfectly in character for that rat bastard. Steal a girl, insult her family and her background, and then take all her father's money. Ah, Prince Charming!


message 11: by Oriana (new)

Oriana Kelly I just have to tell you how very much I've been enjoying all these Shakespeare reviews. You do such a thorough, fascinating analysis of each one. They're a complete joy to read!


message 12: by Kelly (last edited Jun 17, 2009 11:35AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Kelly Thank you so much, oriana! I really so much appreciate knowing that these reviews are useful to someone else besides me. It makes me very happy to hear that you're enjoying them. Thanks again for letting me know you're reading! :)


Mnaya Jossy Kelly my name sake, you've given me a taste of Shakespeare's play I have to read it believe me


message 14: by Kelly (last edited Oct 08, 2012 08:30AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Kelly I appreciate her intelligence and why she would have been cynical about her situation. I can appreciate why she'd go for the juglar and why a lot of what came out of her mouth might be bitter. However, what I doing is just stating that a) a lot of her dialogue is, in fact, bitter and harsh- if hilarious and understandable at times. Her remarks on these guys are pretty thorough and mostly unnecessary take-downs. And b) she never overcame that to show mercy at any point in the play, which is just interesting to me considering she's the person who makes that speech.


message 15: by Kelly (last edited Oct 09, 2012 02:23PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Kelly It's so hard to have arguments like this when my evidence and impressions are three years old. I don't even know if I would think differently now if I re-read it. I should check it out some weekend and see.

But going off of what I do remember... Well first, ouch! It's pretty hard to beat the thorough character assassinations Portia does of her suitors. You have met some horrible ladies! I would agree that nobody in the play is getting their heart broken because that scene is certainly played for laughs. However, my problem is with how utterly unnecessary it was. She went after them because she could. I got the sense that some of them weren't bright enough to understand, which ups the mean factor. Yes, as a woman in that day and age, you have to use what tools come to hand, and yes, I would imagine that you have to be firmer with your rejection when you're a prize to be won. However, it is all throughout the play. I think that it is an observant choice to show her as suspicious and bitter, given her situation, all I'm doing is stating that she is those things.

I like your comment about how the ring thing was "a demonstration of her abilities to ensure she would be accepted as an equal and not taken for granted, in an age where marriage was generally not an equal partnership." That is not something that I had considered before, given that the way that their story is set up, she's set up to have most of the power. But I can see how with ideas of marriage she might have wanted to remind him. I guess I'm just not a big fan of setting up your marriage to be a power game, particularly not if you're going to be hypocritical and pretend otherwise with speeches like mercy. I guess maybe where we disagree is that I don't see her mercy speech as being consistent with her character? It is a great speech, and I love her courtroom scene, but.

But maybe even that is a good lesson to draw from the play! Mercy often all comes down to who we like and don't in the end. I had this conversation with Sparrow recently about Tolstoy. We both understand where he's coming from to a certain degree. But I love his writing and I believe in the essential goodness and sincerity in his work, and she doesn't (at least not with Anna K, I can't say as to her opinions about the rest of his work). I just don't believe in that with Portia here. I understand her, but I don't believe some of those qualities that you see with her are there. It's all about whether you've got those rose colored glasses or not though! :)


authorial In my humble opinion, you are judging the play (the plot, the characters) from a very modern point of view and not taking into account that racism, nationalism and anti-semetism were very much a part of the Shakespearean Europe.


Kelly And obviously I get that. But, and this is generally my feeling on this subject, there are two objections to this subject:

1) People who are modern-day viewers sometimes do like to know that they are going to encounter some ideas that can act as "triggers" on certain subjects, or things that they feel strongly about. Anti-semitism is one of them, and this play in particular is famous for that element. It is useful to comment on it for a modern audience to see how it would look. I don't believe it is as useful to read someone a lecture on the views on Jews in Renaissance England and lecture them about why they shouldn't be offended reading this. Yes, historical context is historical context (and I should mention at this point that I have done graduate work in history and I am therefore not coming from a "But history is dumb and people back then were inferior to our enlightenment now!" place), but that doesn't mean that some people are going to enjoy reading it any more. I have learned that one the hard way- you are going to need to address the perspectives people bring to it to get past it. I think that unless you are studying these works as pure historical artifacts that may or may not tell you something about the society, there should be something in there of value to you that is motivating your reading. So you're going to have to be able to connect to it or understand it or find something in it. It's pointless to pretend like people don't bring themselves into interpretation, historical education or not. That's what historiography is. That's why it exists.

2) The reason I commented specifically on the anti-semitism in this play- other than that its something that always comes up in conversation with this one- is that, as I stated, I actually felt some subversiveness from Shakespeare on the subject- which was unexpected, and therefore worth comment on its own.


message 18: by Mars (new) - rated it 4 stars

Mars I think one of the reasons none of the characters live up to the speech is to highlight Christian hypocrisy. Shakespeare felt bitterly about the trial of Roderigo Lopez, and so I think he wanted to demonstrate the double standard that Christian morals often employ. I agree though, even Portia, who is endlessly clever, fails to take her own advice and is more preoccupied with her own interests.


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The Spartan (Doctor Morbid) I think Shylock was in his right for his pound of flesh.


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The Spartan (Doctor Morbid) :)


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