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2.5/5 stars. I liked the general plot and storyline of this book. However, I think it could have benefited from going through one or two more rounds of editing. There were quite a few grammatical errors and misspelled/missing words (I'd say every other page?). My ADHD brain gets distracted by those things and immediately takes me out of the story when I experience those kinds of 'speed bumps'.

There were also a lot of repetitive themes (i.e., if I have to read "her nipples were tight" ONE MORE TIME, I'm going to jump out the window). Also, I'm assuming this is in some sort of primitive/historical setting; could we please use a word other than 'pussy' every other second?

There were also a few inconsistencies I spotted (i.e., she mentioned early in the book that she's essentially a virgin and has never seen a male pee-pee, but when she sees 'his', she says its larger than any human's she's ever seen?). Also, I'd immediately be turned off in the sea monster who just took me as his bride and was trying to seduce me called me his 'cum slut'. Lastly, I'm confused about the lineage of the sea monster and why we don't see his mother or maternal grandmother (or even hear about them?). Heck, I'm even curious to know what happened to his father.

Some of my complaints could be chalked up as personal preference of course, so the rating more-or-less has to do with the inconsistencies, editing errors, etc.

I will call out that I LOVED the pace of this. I could finish it in one sitting, and I didn't feel like the author spent time on erroneous irrelevant details. I'd also like to note that I "DID" finish it - and I do have a tendency to DNF if I truly don't like the book, so that should be counted as something for those of you on the fence of reading this book. I'd say give it a shot since it's not terribly long and you could get through it in one sitting if you wanted to.