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I don't know what was wrong with me all this time. Something always kept me from reading this book. I can't even remember what is was anymore. Boy was I missing out. I should've read this book when I was younger, I would've loved this with every once of my being. Now that I've read more books I'm a bit more picky (but not by too much).

The plot was excellent. The beginning was a bit fast without any real excitment going on. It seemed like Smith just wanted to skip some scenes to get to Mel's adventure. She skipped battles and some details; I guess I'm used to more detail. I don't like tons of details just a little more would've been better. After things get going though this isn't a problem. There is capture, escape, close calls, and help all along the way. And Mel is the perfect girl for this journey. Even though she was ignorant about so many things, I never felt she was inferior to any of the more knowledgeable characters of the book. She used her head well and does what she can with what she has.

I like the relationship she has with her brother. I also appreciated that the author didn't put in a love triangle. Hallelujah! It seems like all the books that have sequels that I've read lately have love triangles. Smith didn't really make the romance start in this book which I thought was good; Mel isn't ready for it yet. There is some hints but nothing really significant. No love at first sight that is for sure -on Mel's side anyways. It kind of reminded me of Elizabeth in P&P.

Nit picking (can skip):
I don't like it that she has knee length hair. That does not seem practical.
She passes out at least 4 times. I know it's impossible to stay conscious when you've lost a lot of blood or been knock on the head but still, it's 4 times (possibly more).

Loved the story and the protagonist. There is so much more I want to write but you'll just have to read the book.