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The Awakening / The Struggle by L.J. Smith
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Elena is the most popular girl in school, her boyfriend Matt a classic all-American sporty, nice boy. Then she sees the new boy, Stefan, dark, sensual, and totally oblivious to her. She determines to have him, and promptly gets rid of Matt. There are a few complications, though: one, Stefan is a vampire from the Italian renaissance period; two, she looks a lot like Katherine, the girl he was in love with who made him a vampire before killing herself, thinking he and his brother Damon, whom she also converted, would then stop fighting over her; and three, Damon is also in the city, and he has his sights set on Elena.

These teen vampire books have been out for more than a decade, but have only recently been merged into two single volumes, rather than the original four.

It's a familiar-enough story, a little similar to Stephenie Meyer's Twilight books but not (note that it was published in 1991, more than 10 years before Twilight - still, comparisons crop up, though if anything, this could have been inspiration for Meyer).

This is a much darker story than the Twilight books - people actually die in The Vampire Diaries, and Damon is a truly malevolent character. There are the usual elements of "normal" teenager life: home troubles, back-stabbing friends, parties and lusty teenage boys who drink too much. The writing style is succinct and to-the-point, but the details necessary for a dark atmosphere strumming with tension are all there.

I would recommend this double volume, for the first book, The Awakening, ends on a bit of a cliff-hanger, while the end of The Struggle is not quite so bad (though very exciting!). I can wait to read the second volume. I certainly want to find out how it is resolved, since what happens to Elena at the end is a bit frightening, and I was surprised at my sympathy for Stefan, whose pain is very real.
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Reading Progress

November 18, 2007 – Shelved
November 18, 2007 – Shelved as: ya
November 18, 2007 – Shelved as: vampires
Started Reading
December 2, 2007 – Finished Reading
January 4, 2008 – Shelved as: 2007
January 4, 2008 – Shelved as: paranormal
February 23, 2009 – Shelved as: romance
January 8, 2024 – Shelved as: removed
March 1, 2024 – Shelved as: read-removed
July 15, 2024 – Shelved as: read-and-removed

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message 1: by Theresa (new)

Theresa I read these four books back when they originally came out and boy, did I ever have a massive crush on Damon. I was going to name my future children as Elena, Stefan (not pronounced Steven, but Stefan like it is supposed to be, geez!), and Damon.

Nice summary of the novel... I reread the series recently and still love it, although not as much as when I was a teen.


Shannon That's so cute Theresa! Damon is a nice name, I've always liked it :)

I still have to read the second volume - considering where this left off, I'm surprised at how much time has gone by already. Really should get onto that soon!


 Danielle The Book Huntress I'm so glad I read your review, Shannon. I ordered these books but I was a little iffy about them. They sound intense enough to keep my interest and not too high school superficial.


Shannon I found the writing to be quite mature, Danielle, in the best possible way - perhaps it was the darker tone. A lot of these books suffer from that "high school superficial" quality, but I didn't find that here. They were written a while ago and have been re-released because of the Twilight mania, so they're not imitations.


 Danielle The Book Huntress That is so great to hear. I'll read these very soon. Thanks again.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

I really like this series. I see the similarities between it and Twilight, but I think this series is written so much better. Do you like the show?


Maria Elmvang Interesting that you think so, Manders. I thought Twilight was a lot better written than The Vampire Diaries. L.J. Smith just seemed to pull some cheap tricks with the writing style - especially with all the cliff-hangers!


Shannon I hadn't thought of it as "cheap tricks" to be honest, but I was happy to go along with the flow :) But I did think Twilight was a little more "sophisticated", so I guess I agree with Maria :D

The TV series is a bit frustrating - I don't watch much tv and the ad breaks really annoy me, even on mute. But also, I don't care for the tiny little snippets, how these shows are made up of very short scenes, so you never really get a chance to get into it - especially with the ad breaks on top of it; and it always feels like you just got going when the show ends! I prefer reading the books, I think.

Actually I missed last night's episode because the channel suddenly changed the time slot to 7pm - I hate the way they do that! It's so rude.


message 9: by Nan (new) - rated it 4 stars

Nan Shannon wrote: "I hadn't thought of it as "cheap tricks" to be honest, but I was happy to go along with the flow :) But I did think Twilight was a little more "sophisticated", so I guess I agree with Maria :D

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The cheap tricks make a bit more sense when you think about how the books were originally published. They were a packaged series (the book packager is now called Alloy Entertainment; they had a different name in the early 90s), and each of the first three books came out within a month or two of the one before it. Originally the series was a trilogy--I bought them when the title was "Vampire Diaries: A Trilogy." Book four came out about six months after the original trilogy.

I have to admit that I love the TV series. It's sort of cheesy, but I really like the way they're developing the world and adding more depth to the characters. The scenes may be short, but that'll probably get better. Right now, they've got a huge ensemble cast (Elena, Stefan, Damon, Bonnie, Caroline, Matt, Vicki, Jeremy, and Tyler) and they're giving each character screen time. Once the plot gets going a bit more, I'm sure there will be more character-centric episodes with longer scenes.




Shannon I'm still watching it Nan, but shows always always work better when you don't have ad breaks. It really changes how you experience a show.

I knew they'd originally come out "packaged" - and the copyright reflects it - but I think what kiwiria was getting at wasn't the marketing but the writing style. In a way, it was written like a TV show, so it makes for a pretty smooth transition.


message 11: by Nan (new) - rated it 4 stars

Nan I do understand your point about the ad breaks.

My comment about the packaging was related to the way in which they were written--not just the marketing. They were each given a cliff hanger, and they were structured in such a way that none of them told a complete story until book three.

I don't think Smith is a great writer, but I do like her better than Stephanie Meyer. That could be because I first read Smith's books when I was a young teen, and Meyer's as a adult with too much education in literary studies.


Shannon Oh I see, I'm sorry, I should concentrate better :) I did notice the cliff-hangers, though I've only read the first two - forces you to keep buying them yeah?

I would have loved Smith if I'd read her when I was a teenager - you're right, we're much less fussy when we're younger! I can still delve into a book like Twilight and just enjoy it, but if I don't get sucked into the story and characters then I'll start focusing on all the flaws. That's my only explanation for how much I loved the Twilight books - I loved the story so much that nothing else mattered. Still doesn't, really, though I can easily acknowledge there are problems with the writing. And I'm usually so picky!


message 13: by Nan (new) - rated it 4 stars

Nan Shannon wrote: "I loved the story so much that nothing else mattered. Still doesn't, really, though I can easily acknowledge there are problems with the writing. And I'm usually so picky!"

Which is, truthfully, the sign of a good writer. Meyer's books are flawed, but they're still incredibly engrossing. I felt that too, and I didn't even like them that much.




Shannon What's the expression, "To each his own" - that always pops into my head when I see how divided people can get over books! It's just interesting, because it's so easy to get snobby and say "it doesn't matter what the story is, the writing's crap and that makes it a crap book" (which I often feel when I hate a book - you can't look past the bad writing, which covers characters etc. too). But when you love a book in spite of its flaws, that's when you have to confront your own snobbery!

Speaking from my own personal view (I can be quite snobby, I've found!) ;)


Maria Elmvang Thanks for that explanation, Nan. That does make more sense then :)


message 16: by Jacqueline (new) - added it

Jacqueline Well I love the show. Because I read the Night World seriesm the author wrote, which were amazing; I was thinking about reading the books before. I;m not really sure though, but I am definitely considering to read these books. Your review sure helps :)


Shannon I have the first Night World book to read, but I haven't yet so I couldn't compare them. I do recommend these though :)


message 18: by Kim (new)

Kim Are the books better than the tv series? I watched until around episode 8 and gave up.


Shannon I preferred the books, Kim. I watched most of the TV show but didn't really get into it. And the actors were way too old!


message 20: by Liv (new) - rated it 3 stars

Liv Shannon wrote: "I'm still watching it Nan, but shows always always work better when you don't have ad breaks. It really changes how you experience a show.

I knew they'd originally come out "packaged" - and the ..."


I couldn't resist but read this as I fell in love with the tv show and then, since the book is always better, picked up the first volume. Also, your reviews are great so they always give me some insight as to what I'm in for :)
As for the show, I would recommend doing what I did and watch the episodes online. No commercials, you watch at your own pace and fall in love with it (or Damon, should I say ;) )
I actually like it more than Twilight - I find it's more developed and is more dramatic as people do actually die and bad things do happen. Also, they were written before Twilight which makes me think Meyer DID get her ideas from here...
I hope the books are as good! Time for another crazy vampire obsession!


Shannon I watched the first season of the tv show and it was quite good - it's a better idea to rent it or watch it online though, for sure! It's so dark though: half the time I can't make out what's happening. Is that just my crappy tv?

Expect some differences between the show and the books though!


message 22: by Liv (new) - rated it 3 stars

Liv I just finished reading books 1 and 2! Definitely got some differences (to the point where I think I like the show more) but still quite addicting! Starting book 3 tonight :)


message 23: by Liv (new) - rated it 3 stars

Liv And no, it's not your tv - I had to watch it at night with all the lights off :P


Shannon I just had the same experience watching the first two episodes of True Blood on DVD - no lights!

It's funny, when I finished this volume it was such a cliffhanger I got the second volume straight away - and then let it sit, and sit, and sit ... three years later I still haven't read it! Now I'm afraid to because I've forgotten everything!


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