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Eclipse
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Alexander Cleave, outworn actor whose glory days are gone, sets the elegiac tone of his first person narrative as part of the setting of a performance ill-omened from the start. There is little in terms of plot line in this introspective journey into the mind of a tormented character that assimilates the structure of a Shakespearean tragedy. Like a deft snake charmer, Banville reconstructs the inner purgatory of a man in five acts, leaving no space for cathartic redemption or hopeful light at the end of the tunel.
Something has died inside Alex. Fictional life on the stage, which had been truer than reality in the past, doesn’t fill the gaping void inside him any longer. Haunted by memories and dragged down by the rarified relationship with his wife and his mentally unstable daughter Cassandra, the apple of his eye, Alex struggles against a growing sense of disembodiment as he gropes in the darkness of his subconscious, searching for the secret well of grief from which springs of sorrow benum him into a detached stupor. In a desperate attempt to shake off the impending sense of doom that plagues him, the actor retires to the abandoned seaside house of his childhood, which has fallen into disrepair over the years, expecting to reconnect with the missing part of himself.
Once more, it’s in waves of detailed images that Banville stirs the waters of his swelling, unreliable narrative. Grey ash on a carpet, the glowing stub of an unfinished cigarette, a bloodstain, red like passion, on a gauzy dress, white like the pallor of a corpse drowned in a foreign sea, grimacing clowns in a morbid circus, doors ajar in mute stillness and disquieting sensation of being observed, stalked, of life being usurped by ghosts blind to the past but prescient of a stillborn future.
Straddling the classic gothic and the psychological thriller, Banville presents the veritable protagonists of his tale of woe. Loneliness, identity and erratic memory merge the currents of present and past, fiction and fact, prose and poetry in an ongoing contradiction between thematic lines and stylistic deployment. The exquisiteness of Banville’s writing, full of light and suggestive natural imagery that stimulates all the senses, doesn’t match the gloomy background of a scene never static but ceaselessly fluctuating between unbearable beauty and sordidness that attracts and repels the reader at once.
Banville is a sensualist, a linguistic sybarite, a sorcerer of the word, he probes and taunts and smirks with delectable artistry, making the reader fall prey to the ballast of his deeply charged lyrical overture. There is no escape for those who bask in texture, cadence and impeccable sentence structure when submerged into Banville’s works, to sink into the writer’s murky waters means to drown in agonizing rapture.
Amidst the climatic display of flawlessly developed metaphors that go full circle, I can’t help but wonder about the trait that distinguishes Banville from other writers. There is something of the foreigner in his use of English, maybe something to do with his Irish heritage that places him as a Pilgrim in his own language, a native of his own style, an insurgent of standardized limits.
The result of what appears a fragmentary chronicle on the surface is an understated, maybe also predictable, requiem that shakes the reader like an authentic classic.
And Alexander’s last invocation of his lost muse, his Miranda his Perdita, his Marina, achieves the quality of the divine in its cold, remote aloofness like the dead light of stars that brighten the darkest night without giving off any warmth nor any hint of exoneration.
Words are the only artifacts left to hold on to after the curtain falls and the actors have abandoned the stage, and memory becomes the only means to remember their faint echo, their fading scent of sweat, tears and remorse.
“I brooded on words. Sentimentality: unearned emotion. Nostalgia: longing for what never was.�
Something has died inside Alex. Fictional life on the stage, which had been truer than reality in the past, doesn’t fill the gaping void inside him any longer. Haunted by memories and dragged down by the rarified relationship with his wife and his mentally unstable daughter Cassandra, the apple of his eye, Alex struggles against a growing sense of disembodiment as he gropes in the darkness of his subconscious, searching for the secret well of grief from which springs of sorrow benum him into a detached stupor. In a desperate attempt to shake off the impending sense of doom that plagues him, the actor retires to the abandoned seaside house of his childhood, which has fallen into disrepair over the years, expecting to reconnect with the missing part of himself.
Once more, it’s in waves of detailed images that Banville stirs the waters of his swelling, unreliable narrative. Grey ash on a carpet, the glowing stub of an unfinished cigarette, a bloodstain, red like passion, on a gauzy dress, white like the pallor of a corpse drowned in a foreign sea, grimacing clowns in a morbid circus, doors ajar in mute stillness and disquieting sensation of being observed, stalked, of life being usurped by ghosts blind to the past but prescient of a stillborn future.
Straddling the classic gothic and the psychological thriller, Banville presents the veritable protagonists of his tale of woe. Loneliness, identity and erratic memory merge the currents of present and past, fiction and fact, prose and poetry in an ongoing contradiction between thematic lines and stylistic deployment. The exquisiteness of Banville’s writing, full of light and suggestive natural imagery that stimulates all the senses, doesn’t match the gloomy background of a scene never static but ceaselessly fluctuating between unbearable beauty and sordidness that attracts and repels the reader at once.
Banville is a sensualist, a linguistic sybarite, a sorcerer of the word, he probes and taunts and smirks with delectable artistry, making the reader fall prey to the ballast of his deeply charged lyrical overture. There is no escape for those who bask in texture, cadence and impeccable sentence structure when submerged into Banville’s works, to sink into the writer’s murky waters means to drown in agonizing rapture.
Amidst the climatic display of flawlessly developed metaphors that go full circle, I can’t help but wonder about the trait that distinguishes Banville from other writers. There is something of the foreigner in his use of English, maybe something to do with his Irish heritage that places him as a Pilgrim in his own language, a native of his own style, an insurgent of standardized limits.
The result of what appears a fragmentary chronicle on the surface is an understated, maybe also predictable, requiem that shakes the reader like an authentic classic.
And Alexander’s last invocation of his lost muse, his Miranda his Perdita, his Marina, achieves the quality of the divine in its cold, remote aloofness like the dead light of stars that brighten the darkest night without giving off any warmth nor any hint of exoneration.
Words are the only artifacts left to hold on to after the curtain falls and the actors have abandoned the stage, and memory becomes the only means to remember their faint echo, their fading scent of sweat, tears and remorse.
“I brooded on words. Sentimentality: unearned emotion. Nostalgia: longing for what never was.�
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""Life, life is always a surprise. Just when you think you have got the hang of it, have learned your part to perfection, someone in the cast will take it into her head to start improvising, and the whole damned production will be thrown into disorder.""
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""Sometimes it seems to me that it is in those vacant intervals, without my being aware of it, that my life has been most authentically lived.""
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""The tragedians are wrong, grief has no grandeur. Grief is grey, it has a grey smell and a grey taste and a grey ashy feel on the fingers.""
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Difficult to say Lynne... It's not a light read, although the prose is exquisite, there is a sense of oppression in the narrative voice that drags the reader down...

I'm reading C.P. Cavafy's poems! They are wonderful. I recall that Henry Miller and Lawrence Durrell both thought that he was brilliant.

I still haven't had time to polish the rough sketch I came up with right after turning the last page. Hope to post something soon Soumen! :)

I personally couldn't take to this book but then that's me I guess.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it though.



I personally couldn't take to this book but then that's me I guess.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it though."
Ouch Lynne, I see this book sucked for you (glad you abandoned it, I am one of those stubborn readers who should learn to let go of books that don't resonate instead of inflicting self-punishment to finish anything I dare to start. Luckily that doesn't happen often since I joined GR). I wonder again at the disparate impressions of readers who apparently can enjoy similar books (like Williams' in our case) and still have such disparate reactions to other reads. Thanks for reading and and for expressing your kind thoughts, anyway.

Your comment suggests I've managed to convey Banville's trickery quite effectively, Jibran. He is not to every reader's taste and this book in particular proves to be controversial among many of our common GR friends. Maybe because I read the trilogy (Eclipse, Shroud and Ancient Light) in the reverse order and Banville is a writer to deconstruct inside out or upside down, or simply because I adore his lyrical writing, but I remained glued to the pages of this book and its darkly atmospheric setting from the start. I hope he doesn't disappoint when, and if, you ever manage to squeeze-in any of his books in your reading plan. Many thanks for your deft comment.

Heh, how funny Deea! I was thinking precisely of you as I finished typing my response to Jibran's comment above. You've basked in many of Banville's books (I think you've read more than I have), and yet this one failed to strike the right chord in you. You are not in the minority, for I observe many other GR friends didn't respond to this book as strongly as I did. I sincerely think I am a Banville-junkie and that I will adore anything he has written, so I rub my hands in anticipation thinking of all the future treats that await me! :)) Thanks for your generous comment Deea, glad you liked the review in spite of your lukewarm reaction to the book.
Beautiful review, Dolors. You sure have moved John Banville higher up in my reading list.

Glad to see his books widely added by keen readers, Sidharth. Thanks for your lovely comment and I hope Banville will capture your interest if you ever decide to give this lyrical teaser a chance! :)


Seemita, your insightful remarks know of no boundaries and you shower me with delicious metaphors that capture not only my amateurish intention but also the author's essence in a nutshell. I declare myself your admirer, besides Banville's! ;P
There are many parallels between the "act" that took place in the seashores of Max Morden's childhood town and Alex Cleave's retreat into the inner shell of his past; ghosts haunt both characters, but Alex carries the counter-reflection of Axel Vander in the following instalments of the trilogy, which makes the puzzle more arduous (and to me, more wondrous) to complete.
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Banville has found a worthy reader and reviewer in you, Dolors. Having read four of Banville's books, I continue to be mesmerized by his images and language, which you have remembered and captured so well in this review. I love your insight of Banville's use of all the light images to play with us while he leads us to face the darkness of an eclipse. (But the light still exists in a eclipse, even if we can't perceive it.) As you note, we arrive at dead stars, giving off ancient light--long extinguished but still traveling. I also appreciate your acute ear for language that detected a touch of the outsider in the mysterious author, who writes with such honesty, but who would also likely be the first to admit that his vision is as unreliable as that of his narrator. Regardless, you are a reliable reviewer, whom I turn to in order to better understand and savor the books that I read. Many thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

Morose, elusive and even absent are perfect adjectives to describe the almost non-plot of this volume Helle, so depending on what you expect of a novel, you might want to skip this skilled teaser (and also great poet in my opinion) until you are in the mood for writing over plot. I think I have also read the interview you allude to and that is a great introduction to Banville's writing and the importance he grants words with. Were I to recommend one of his books, I would point out Shroud, even though it's the second in this trilogy because the order of the factors doesn't alter the product in Banville's game of mirrors! Thanks for stopping by to read and share your fitting thoughts, Helle (an ignoramus??? you're kidding me, right?)

I notice your own wordplay, blending Banville's imagery with natural ease, in your comment, Steve. Once again, you draw the literary connections you are so good at, but this time you echo Banville's playful style and his artistic subterfuges to render hidden meaning with the subtle use of recurrent themes in this trilogy. I completely agree with your insightful remark on Banville's unreliable narrative voice. I am curious about how much of the writer is imprinted on his multi-faceted characters, who can be perceived as victims and abusers at once, or if he is just a fine actor (like Alex!) that hides behind the mysterious mask of obsessed writer.
Whatever the case, and unlike the dead light that emanates from Banville's gloomy perception of reality, your thoughts never fail to shed clarity on any book or review you favour with your discerning eye and consistent kindness. Can't wait to read more Banville and to share his mischievous ways with you! :) Thanks for your succulent comment.

I thank you Doctor Dolors.

There is no escape for those who bask in texture, cadence and impeccable sentence structure when submerged into Banville’s works, to sink into the writer’s murky waters means to drown in agonizing rapture.
Beautiful evocation, Dolors. As you mentioned, Banville delves into the psychology of humans through his characters, and his showcase of mental torment is engaging and melodic. It's impossible to read his work without some pondering and mental adjustment. Thanks for this beautiful ponder.

It's so good to start a new day with favourite writer and his fantastic reviewer :)

Oh Stephen, as I am

There is no esc..."
Thanks so much, cheryl. There is only a narrative voice in this book and few answers to the mysteries outlaid in "Ancient Light" and "Shroud", but the writing is as exquisite as ever and the sporadic tension that Banville generates with subtle strokes kept me glued to the pages until the end, which comes full circle. Nothing makes me happier than seeing this author being more widely read and discarded, read and cherished, read and pondered about, but mainly read by discerning readers like you, Cheryl.
My guess is you won't be as taken with this one as with "Shroud", but I hope you are not too disappointed by the sustained gloomy background and game of mirrors between tortured characters.

I..."
Heh, I ran out of books by him to review Agna, but I intend to plunge into "The Revolutions Trilogy" as soon as time (and chaotic reading plans) permits. Thanks so much for basking in my particular, and recurrent, rave on Banville and still find remarks that match your opinion of his writing. Truly happy with my new title of "Banville reviewer", heh, but I am maybe more of a groupie than an impartial critic! ;P
Grazie mille once more for painting a smile on my face on a rather dull Thursday, Agna.

I personally couldn't take to this book but then that's me I guess.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it though."
Ouch Lynne, I see this book sucked..."
Dolors, It's always a pleasure to read your reviews and also your comments. Yes, it's interesting that we have books in common and not others but it's the same with friends isn't it. Certain people don't like each other and it can be very annoying at times!

I personally couldn't take to this book but then that's me I guess.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it though."
Ouch Lynne, I see t..."
Totally agree, Lynne. Although we can always agree to disagree about books, not that sure about people, aren't we complex creatures? :/

Thrilled to hear that, Andrew. Thanks for stopping by and dropping an encouraging line! :))


Thank you very much, Karen. Alternating Shakespeare's plays with Banville's immaculate prose has been an eye-opening experience for me, both writers will always hold a special place in my library and I expect to continue adding new authors in that special spot, not difficult if one prowls this page as often as I do!:)

Oh and that sense of a foreigner, I wondered about it too because there's got to be a reason for him to break away all the conventional shackles and weave those sentences to form such real and crystal images.

Thanks so much for sharing the "Banville -frenzy" that has taken possession of me, Himanshu! :) Dead-on remark about Banville's English, his word placement is highly visual and his flawlessly phrased sentences have an inner melody, or should I say fugue, of its own. And indeed, there are many converging points between "The Sea" and the first instalment of this trilogy, although "Eclipse" has a touch of psychological thriller that I don't recall in the other novel. Super glad to hear you intend to continue exploring Banville's other works, I expect to do the same, so I will see you very soon onboard, swirling around the turbulent currents his prose! :))

(P.S.:-And yes of course I will be reading Banville without a doubt. How can I not when you have such impeccably chosen words of praise for him?)

I find that an incredibly intriguing statement... I love when authors can turn familiar language into something surprising and new. :) Wonderful review.

This unique fan club runs on mutual membership, my friend! :) Such joy! (view spoiler)

Sama, every comment of yours is a feast of sumptuously phrased thoughts in which I could get lost. I am thrilled that you will get to Banville soon, for I have run out of adjectives to describe the effect his prose has on me, but you....you will find new expressions and unheard angles to dissect his style, tone and intent. To me, his stories are a tapestry of recurrent imagery that runs the risk of appearing meandering, but if the jagged pieces fit into a puzzle and the writing style captures your attention, you may be in for a disturbing treat. Whatever the case, you will have me gaping at the screen if you decide to write one of your articulate criticisms, which I bet will introduce me to a Banville unfamiliar to me. You spoil me with your comments, but please, do not ever stop to inspire me with them. Thank you.

Great adjective! Banville is an "intriguing" writer, Lily. His visual, plastic prose doesn't correspond to the gloomy milieu and the dismal inclination of the "anti-heroes" that populate his stories, and that increases the strangeness of his linguistic choice. Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts here, Lily.

This unique fan club runs on mutual membership, my friend! :) Such joy! [spoilers removed]"
Let's push aside desert and get together with a glass of cheap wine to solve the problems of the world, Seemita! With friends like you, I wouldn't run out of matters to discuss, peppered with belly laughs, commonality and good cheer....heh, we could even share that (view spoiler) coulant while we turn Banville inside out! ;P

If you favor writing over plot, Banville is your man, Marita! Thanks as always for reading and for taking the time to show your appreciation.

I see he has a new book out - The Blue Guitar ....

I see he has a new book out - [book:The Blue Gui..."
And I do think that same quotation will apply to the new book, which I have just added. Funny that all the artistic characters in his novels deal with mid-life crisis and feel the urge to return to their childhood hometowns to escape from their present selves. I wonder if Banville himself went through something similar. Thanks for stopping by and for the tip, Fionnuala.

Deanna, a ton of thanks for reading and always validating me with your lovely comments. Have a fantastic weekend! :)


Many thanks for your kind comment, Jaidee. You're lucky to own all of Banville's books, I intend to read them all myself. I strongly recommend the "Eclipse, Shroud and Ancient Light" trilogy, I read them in reverse order, although they stand on their own separately. If I had to choose only one, I would be inclined to select "Shroud". I will be looking forward to your thoughts eagerly if you decide to tackle any of Banville's perturbing books.