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Fallen by Lauren Kate
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it was ok
bookshelves: young-adult, romance, fantasy

Fallen is one of those books that should not be judged by its cover. Despite the alluring, ambiguous plot promised by the book jacket, this book fell flat in way too many areas.

The story is about Lucinda Price, who is sent to Sword and Cross boarding school after being suspected of arson. She also claims to have seen shadows stalking her, which only adds to the paranoia people presume of her. There, she meets some nice friends - but no one compares to the attractive and mysterious Daniel Grigori. He keeps sending her mixed messages: sometimes he tries to keep Luce around, and other times he flicks her off. Despite his roller coaster attitude, Luce finds herself being pulled toward him like a moth drawn to a flame, and will sacrifice anything to get closer to him.

The beginning of Fallen was not that bad. It seemed like a typical exposition in an urban fantasy - character goes to so and so place, meets so and so people, finds him/herself attracted to so and so, etc. However, this book continued to crawl at a snail's pace the entire story. Nothing in the first 400 pages seemed relevant or necessary to the plot as a whole.

The characters were irritating for the most part. I did not connect to Luce or Daniel. So when the two characters I did not connect with connected with each other, their relationship seemed forced and awkward. There was no explanation of why or how they fell in love, and the author did not craft the chemistry well.

Fallen will appeal to many readers because of its lustrous cover, but ultimately contains average writing and does not satisfy.

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Reading Progress

March 30, 2010 – Shelved
June 17, 2010 – Started Reading
June 17, 2010 –
page 116
25.0%
June 18, 2010 –
page 219
47.2%
June 19, 2010 –
page 453
97.63%
June 19, 2010 – Finished Reading

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Angelc I'm reading this one now and I feel exactly the same way!! I've heard so much about it but it seems like a Twilight wannabe, and you're right it's sooooo slow!


Thomas I think the author tried too hard to make the story seem original and ended up blotching the book in general. It's slow until the last fifty or so pages, so you're in for a long ride...

And thanks, everyone who voted :)


Thomas Ha ha very well put! The entire romance was just... off. And I didn't mention Cam in the review, but he was annoying as well.

I noticed you gave the book one star. Are you going to bother to read the second one when it comes out?


Thomas Sad, but true. I think I shall do the same.


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Nancy Thomas wrote: "And thanks, everyone who voted :)..."

No problem - I always enjoy reading your thoughtful reviews. :)


Angelc I finished it today!! You're right it does get somewhat better in the last 50-100 pages, but I'm not going to read the sequel. It would have been cool if they had flashbacks maybe to explain more why they were actually in love.


Thomas Thank you for your kind words, Nancy (:

Yes I agree - the author is probably going to include flashbacks in the second book. But I understand why you wouldn't want to read the sequel... eh.


Angelc That would actually be cool if there are flashbacks in the sequel...I'll wait to hear what you think of it before I decide :)


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Sasa I agree with you. Nice review, though.


Thomas Thank you! :)


Lorenzo Erik I agree with you. The cover is so good it gets you sucked into it. It's scary but good, and mysterious. But the book "inside" - now that's a different story.


Thomas It is an entirely different story, agreed.


Kaity The reason u can't connect with the character is because all authors make characters hot or beautiful and perfect not one can connect with perfect. But she makes the relationship between Daniel and luce seem like a real couple I know I have had major issues with my boyfriend just like Luce


Sophia Agree completely with this review. And the worse thing is, I actually wasted money on it because one of the shop owners said it would be good. Uggghhh. The characters were very stereotypical and cardboard cut out at times.


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