"I jumped into the water, and it hit it wrong." I'm sorry, but that wording just sounds awful. "I jumped, and I hit the water wrong." would sound better. Or maybe she shouldn't have even used the word 'wrong', because to me, it just does not fit right. It doesn't sound correct. It sounds choppy and lazy. I know I am a bit of a grammar snob, but stylistically speaking the writing is terrible. Poor word choosing.
— May 18, 2015 11:35AM
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