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"Rafe told everyone he was from Texas. That was bull. I'd dated a summer guy from Texas . . ." Okay, so does that mean that she dated a guy who was from Texas? Or she dated a 'summer Texas guy'? The sentence structure makes me freakin sense.

Rafe told everyone he was from Texas. That was bull. I'd dated a summer guy from Texas . . ." Okay, so does that mean that she dated a guy who was from Texas? Or she dated a 'summer Texas guy'? The sentence structure makes me freakin sense.

"I jumped into the water, and I hit it wrong." I'm sorry, but that wording just sounds awful. "I jumped, and I hit the water wrong." would sound better. Or maybe she shouldn't have even used the word 'wrong', because to me, it just does not fit right. It doesn't sound correct. It sounds choppy and lazy. I know I am a bit of a grammar snob, but stylistically speaking the writing is terrible. Poor word choice.

"I jumped into the water, and it hit it wrong." I'm sorry, but that wording just sounds awful. "I jumped, and I hit the water wrong." would sound better. Or maybe she shouldn't have even used the word 'wrong', because to me, it just does not fit right. It doesn't sound correct. It sounds choppy and lazy. I know I am a bit of a grammar snob, but stylistically speaking the writing is terrible. Poor word choice.

"I jumped into the water, and it hit it wrong." I'm sorry, but that wording just sounds awful. "I jumped, and I hit the water wrong." would sound better. Or maybe she shouldn't have even used the word 'wrong', because to me, it just does not fit right. It doesn't sound correct. It sounds choppy and lazy. I know I am a bit of a grammar snob, but stylistically speaking the writing is terrible. Poor word choosing.

I am already not impressed. The writing is downright cringe worthy.