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Thomm Quackenbush
Thomm Quackenbush is 50% done
There are elements of a good novel in here. The author (or The Author) just doesn't seem to understand how to explore them, and may have eschewed a strong editor who would have beaten this into shape by cutting much of it.

Slurs and idle misogyny are played out.
Mar 14, 2025 11:14AM
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Thomm Quackenbush
Thomm Quackenbush is 25% done
Hey, buddy, when you name-drop the book you are aping with your "unlikeable, arrogant, unreliable narrator," we are only reminded of your superior.

Also, the slurs are wearing on me.
Mar 09, 2025 01:39PM
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