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In the end, the author doesn't even bother to explain why the baby is so important and why the villain wants him so much!

I started skimming.

A certain young woman predictably turns out to be a villain because....you just know that having tattoos, dressing in revealing outfits and having an open attitude toward guys usually signals that she is a bad female.

Finally the bad guys show up and do something bad! Take you long enough~

Supposedly the evil leader of the Black Wing are catching half-angels and killing off people everywhere, *but we see none of these things throughout half a book*!

what the fuck are these people doing? you can't just let am orphaned 16 years old boy drops out of school and does whatever he wants! where is his legal guardian?

oh fucking great, so a young girl's one purpose is to get herself knocked up and give birth to a....you guessed it! a male infant! holy mother fucker.

half angles would never get ill, I mean how special and privileged can these people get?!

Now we have a father who only spends quality time with his daughter and trains her up, and totally forgets he also has a 16 years old troubled son.

it took her six chapters to remember to check on her younger brother. :-o