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Bethany is a terrible angel. She admits that she has been neglecting her charity work at the nursing home to hang out with Xavier. Someone tell me what differentiates humans and angels in this story (aside from the physical characteristics) because as far as I can tell they're one and the same.
Oct 11, 2011 08:44PM
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Lisa is 98% done
Adornetto just spent three paragraphs describing Bethany's nightmares and her feeling about them. Then she begins the next paragraph with "I'd been an insomniac for weeks now....I'd given up on sleep." Then how is she having nightmares?
Oct 14, 2011 02:02PM
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Lisa
Lisa is 97% done
Damn it all to Hell. Jake is defeated by Bethany and Xavier's love. I think I just vomited a little in my mouth.
Oct 14, 2011 01:40PM
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Lisa
Lisa is 97% done
No, Gabriel, Jake cannot receive forgiveness for his sins. He is a demon. I thought it was pretty clearly stated in the Bible that God's forgiveness for for humans only.
Oct 14, 2011 01:35PM
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Lisa
Lisa is 96% done
Jake, stop talking and just kill her already before something goes wrong.
Oct 14, 2011 01:29PM
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Lisa
Lisa is 95% done
"His cat eyes, which were black again, seemed to glaze over." What is "cat eyes" supposed to mean?
Oct 14, 2011 01:21PM
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Lisa
Lisa is 93% done
" 'I should have sensed he was a demon.' " (said by Bethany). You think? It's not like he tried to hide it or anything.
Oct 14, 2011 12:11AM
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Lisa
Lisa is 92% done
Jake has killed one person and severely injured another with hot oil, but its not until she figures out that he caused Xavier's concussion and broken bone (which he's strangely recovered from very quickly without anyone noticing) that she gets really angry. Did I mention she's a terrible angel?
Oct 14, 2011 12:01AM
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Lisa
Lisa is 91% done
So I see where Xavier gets his chauvinistic nature from. His father completely undermines his mother. And I have a really hard time believing that as a devoutly religious man, he would allow his son to stay the weekend with girlfriend without some sort of explanation. Oh, and having them climb out the window, what's the point in that?
Oct 13, 2011 06:23PM
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Lisa
Lisa is 91% done
Xavier directly disobeys his mother but earlier he went on about how parents knew best and how important it was to follow what they wanted.
Oct 13, 2011 06:19PM
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Lisa
Lisa is 91% done
Goth=evil demon worshiper. What does Adornetto have against goths? Isn't her book, according to her, supposed to be gothic.
Oct 13, 2011 06:06PM
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