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I thought Jennifer Donnelly's debut YA novel A Northern Light was remarkable and well deserving of Printz Honor. I don't think Revolution is worthy of winning any major awards no matter how earnestly it tries to be original and important and how heavily it is promoted as the next big thing. I am just not sold on its merits, even though I understand my personal dislike of certain things in literature might be interfering with my assessment of the novel.
I don't have any problems with Donnelly's writing. In fact, she is very skillful at juggling multiple story lines - two POV's, past and present, history of France, music, science. She weaves them together masterfully and joins them into an excellent epilogue. The protagonists' "voices" - our contemporary Andi's and 18th century Alexandrine's - are distinct and time-appropriate. The representation of the Revolution is balanced and well researched. And yet, the book was a chore to read.
First, the moment I opened the book, I was assaulted by preppy kids' snobbishness and drugs a la Gossip Girl, never ending references to bands I know nothing about and THE ANGST. Now, I don't have anything against books about grief and guilt, but I need not to be beat over the head with constant suicide attempts, pill-popping and general nasty behavior to understand someone's pain. In literature, in such cases, less is more IMO and here the angst thing is way overdone. So, strike one - unbearable main character - Andi. The other main character - Alexandrine - is hardly any better. She is not very realistic - first she is all driven by ambition at the ripe age of 11 (yeah, right), then she is remorseful and self-sacrificing. I say, give me a break.
Second, the book is just too long and boring. It really loses steam in the middle and it was work to get to the end. Some story threads and some angsty stuff should have been edited out to make this novel more readable.
And finally, the "twist." You'll know what I am talking when you get there. It is absolutely unnecessary and a cheap gimmick. Andi should have been able to overcome her demons without it, on the strength of Alexandrine's and her own experiences.
This is the second YA novel in recent months written by a talented author, with a great premise, but spoiled by poor plot choices (the first one is Extraordinary). It is frustrating. Don't they have any people advising them?
Frankly, I am disappointed in Donnelly. A Northern Light was such a clever novel about independence and freedom and message of Revolution is simply drowned in melodrama. I am not sure if I want to read the author's adult novels anymore if cheap melodrama is the actual genre of her choice.
P.S. Further research indeed indicated that Donnelly's adult books are historical soap operas a la Danielle Steel. Adieus, Ms. Donnelly!
I don't have any problems with Donnelly's writing. In fact, she is very skillful at juggling multiple story lines - two POV's, past and present, history of France, music, science. She weaves them together masterfully and joins them into an excellent epilogue. The protagonists' "voices" - our contemporary Andi's and 18th century Alexandrine's - are distinct and time-appropriate. The representation of the Revolution is balanced and well researched. And yet, the book was a chore to read.
First, the moment I opened the book, I was assaulted by preppy kids' snobbishness and drugs a la Gossip Girl, never ending references to bands I know nothing about and THE ANGST. Now, I don't have anything against books about grief and guilt, but I need not to be beat over the head with constant suicide attempts, pill-popping and general nasty behavior to understand someone's pain. In literature, in such cases, less is more IMO and here the angst thing is way overdone. So, strike one - unbearable main character - Andi. The other main character - Alexandrine - is hardly any better. She is not very realistic - first she is all driven by ambition at the ripe age of 11 (yeah, right), then she is remorseful and self-sacrificing. I say, give me a break.
Second, the book is just too long and boring. It really loses steam in the middle and it was work to get to the end. Some story threads and some angsty stuff should have been edited out to make this novel more readable.
And finally, the "twist." You'll know what I am talking when you get there. It is absolutely unnecessary and a cheap gimmick. Andi should have been able to overcome her demons without it, on the strength of Alexandrine's and her own experiences.
This is the second YA novel in recent months written by a talented author, with a great premise, but spoiled by poor plot choices (the first one is Extraordinary). It is frustrating. Don't they have any people advising them?
Frankly, I am disappointed in Donnelly. A Northern Light was such a clever novel about independence and freedom and message of Revolution is simply drowned in melodrama. I am not sure if I want to read the author's adult novels anymore if cheap melodrama is the actual genre of her choice.
P.S. Further research indeed indicated that Donnelly's adult books are historical soap operas a la Danielle Steel. Adieus, Ms. Donnelly!
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Reading Progress
September 12, 2010
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October 19, 2010
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October 19, 2010
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October 20, 2010
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30.08%
"I am fairly positive, this book is not nearly as good as "A Northern Light""
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October 21, 2010
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58.26%
"Can't wait to be done with this book. Reading it is becoming a chore."
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275
October 22, 2010
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historical
October 22, 2010
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2010
October 22, 2010
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Finished Reading
November 8, 2010
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tres-annoying
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As for the liberties Donnelly takes with time in this book, don't you think that's she's making the point that time is irrelevant to this tale -- that Andi and Alex aren't two characters living two stories at all, but rather the same character in a story that's always happening ("the world goes on, stupid and brutal ...")?? I mean, their full names are an anagram (just one of many other clues) -- that didn't happen by accident.
Donnelly is inviting us to look a little deeper than what's written on the page. I think curious and adventurous readers are doing just that -- which is why there is such a buzz about the book.
To use an analogy Andi might have come up with: To some listeners, Radiohead has become weirder and more inaccessible as their music has evolved; to others, the band has become more complex and much more interesting (and important).
I'm so happy Donnelly hasn't rehashed ANL, but rather pushed herself (and brought me) into new -- and I think richer and more accomplished -- territory.


I appreciate much of what Ralph is saying, but for me, Donnelly is just not as strong here as in Northern Light. Teenage angst is great, but it's not well done in places--Andi says lines about sadness and pain that don't ring true, even for one with high intelligence like Andi. The "twist" Tatiana speaks of is gimmicky. It immediately turned me off.


That said, I love Donnelly's adult books.



Yes but I loved it and the Winter Rose and can't wait for The Wild Rose. Thanks for the very helpful review. I'm only halfway but I'm seeing a lot of the same things as you did. I do find the comments on the Amazon reviews by Avid Reader rather strong for a casual reader/fan. Hmmmm.


Whoever it is they are definitely OTT about this book. Just wait, I'll be picking up a comment myself very soon unless things change dramatically.

I think the problem with Alex is that she isn't explored enough. She's trying to review too many years. Andi keeps talking about how important her journal is, but we don't get enough out of it to make it as vital as she says. I can see how Alex changed from the 11-year-old at the beginning of the novel, but I wish it were shown to us instead of summarized.
Andi exasperated me in the twist (probably more than the rest of the book), but I did like that we got to see the time period. And I like that Connelly didn't beat us over the head with whether it was real or not. I can see how you didn't like it, but where it finally gave me that resolution I'd been waiting for, I didn't mind it.

I had to struggle to finish it as well. I think there were too many ideas crammed into this YA story. Something had to go.


