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Outline by Rachel Cusk
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Reading Outline is like spying on an author in the process of auditioning characters for a future novel. In other words it is indeed an outline, an outline for a work that it still shadowy in the writer’s mind. Cusk interviews her potential characters and lets them tell her emotionally pivotal stories about themselves. She makes no other dramatic demands of them. They become like a Greek chorus of voices without a play.

A writer, unnamed until the penultimate chapter, travels to Athens to host a writing workshop. Each chapter either recounts a conversation with someone she meets or a group discussion with her writing class. If Cusk has an agenda, a unifying theme to these conversations it is the shredding of romantic illusion. Its principal agents, sexual attraction and parenthood, are both mercilessly called to account. Cusk, it becomes clear, had had enough of illusion. The narrator, bitter herself, extols the virtues of passivity as a philosophy of life. And by extension it’s as if Cusk is bored with creating the illusions necessary to write novels. She’s like the magician who can no longer be bothered to go through the charade of masking the tricks. She’s a writer letting us know how bored she is with the theatre of constructing novels. However boredom is never going to be the best mainspring inspiration for the creation of a novel.

There wasn’t enough contrast in the tone or thrust of the voices for me. There was a sense everyone was hired to conform to a preconceived and adamant argument. And as such there was no sense of discovery in the novel. Beneath the surface of this novel is a current of unresolved bitterness, belonging, you sense, to the author herself. One of the novel’s central premises is that every relationship is doomed to fail, to become little more than a distorting outline, or as one character puts it there’s “a disgust that exists indelibly between men and women and that you are always trying to purge with what you call frankness" . Frankly, that’s a melodramatic statement to me, a distortion of perspective caused by unresolved bitterness. And this bitterness, left in its pure state, prevents any possibility of evolution. Thus the novel ends as it begins, with little sense of a meaningful journey, with little resolution.

In short, it’s a novel that’s much easier to admire than to love. It’s very well written with some truly brilliant observations, it’s intelligent, it holds its focus. It’s also a novel that arouses the suspicion now and again that there might be a conceit involved, the presence of the emperor’s new clothes factor. I enjoyed reading it; at the same time I have a feeling I’ll remember nothing about it six months from now.
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Rachel Cusk
“What Ryan had learned from this is that your failures keep returning to you, while your successes are something you always have to convince yourself of.”
Rachel Cusk, Outline

Rachel Cusk
“Sometimes it has seemed to me that life is a series of punishments for such moments of unawareness, that one forges one’s own destiny by what one doesn’t notice or feel compassion for; that what you don’t know and don’t make the effort to understand will become the very thing you are forced into knowledge of.”
Rachel Cusk, Outline

Rachel Cusk
“I felt that I could swim for miles, out into the ocean: a desire for freedom, an impulse to move, tugged at me as though it were a thread fastened to my chest. It was an impulse I knew well, and I had learned that it was not the summons from a larger world I used to believe it to be. It was simply a desire to escape from what I had.”
Rachel Cusk, Outline

Rachel Cusk
“People are least aware of others when demonstrating their own power over them.”
Rachel Cusk, Outline
tags: power


Reading Progress

May 5, 2015 – Shelved
May 5, 2015 – Shelved as: to-read
May 18, 2016 – Started Reading
May 29, 2016 – Shelved as: 21st-century
May 29, 2016 – Shelved as: contemporary-british-fiction
May 29, 2016 – Finished Reading

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message 1: by Lynne (last edited May 29, 2016 11:47AM) (new)

Lynne King Violet, I'm not sure that this book would be for me, and especially so after your final sentence!


Teresa She’s a writer letting us know how bored she is with the theatre of constructing novels. However boredom is never going to be the best mainspring inspiration for the creation of a novel.

This reminds me of writerly advice I read not too long ago: if you are bored with your material, your readers will be too.


Violet wells Lynne wrote: "Violet, I'm not sure that this book would be for me, and especially so after your final sentence!"

It's not a novel I'd feel comfortable recommending, Lynne.


message 4: by Violet (last edited May 29, 2016 12:28PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Violet wells Teresa wrote: "She’s a writer letting us know how bored she is with the theatre of constructing novels. However boredom is never going to be the best mainspring inspiration for the creation of a novel.

This remi..."


One thing being bored with your material; another being bored with writing novels altogether, Teresa! I remember I read a book by her about a trip her and her family took to Italy (or maybe it was France). I enjoyed that.


message 5: by Helle (new)

Helle I gotta say, though, Violet, that despite your misgivings (sometimes because of them), I always so thoroughly enjoy your reviews! This one is no exception.


Violet wells Helle wrote: "I gotta say, though, Violet, that despite your misgivings (sometimes because of them), I always so thoroughly enjoy your reviews! This one is no exception."

Thanks Helle.


message 7: by Esil (new) - added it

Esil I love your first sentence! And your review, Violet. This one seems to be getting mixed reactions. I have a copy I hope to get to some time soon.


Jaidee Gosh so sorry. I feel like I led you astray dear Violet. This book was such a different experience for me though. I hope you weren't too disappointed or frustrated.


message 9: by Violet (last edited May 31, 2016 02:53AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Violet wells Thanks Esil. I look forward to what you make of it.


Violet wells Jaidee wrote: "Gosh so sorry. I feel like I led you astray dear Violet. This book was such a different experience for me though. I hope you weren't too disappointed or frustrated."

Not at all, Jaidee. I'm really glad I read it and like i said there was much to admire even if I didn't feel the love.


message 11: by Margaret (new) - added it

Margaret Sounds like she was aiming for meta but ended up with personal issues bubbling over everything. It could happen.

As always, no matter the material at hand, your reviews are always lively and engaged. Thank you.


Violet wells I sensed she's bored silly by the dictates of novel writing, Margaret but if you're going to challenge them there's got to be some excitement and mischief in any attempt to transcend these dictates and this necessary vitality was missing for me.


message 13: by Margaret (new) - added it

Margaret Yes. Either that or do something else.


Betsey Batchelor I enjoy reading your reviews Violet. The passive voice of the narrator and the plain form of the chapters do strip away illusion. I see that stepping back as a way to more clearly examine how one constructs their identity. Who are we really, and how much of who we are is formed through our connections with others? One scene that stayed with me was when the three characters were in the café, Elena, the poet, and the main character. Each identified a way of being in the world in relationship to others. The poet who chooses not to let the influence of others in, Elena, who advocates brutal frankness, coming from a place of fear, and using that stark honestly as a way to avoid inevitable pain. The main character describes going out of her way to avoid hurting the feelings of someone she cares little for. How much do we let others in, how much do we allow others to define us, how much do we give of ourselves to others? Who are we when we are married and then who do we become when we are not? What part of us is present in each if those? These are questions each woman can appreciate, and offer responses to cry about. I found the book brilliant in its offering of these reflections.


message 15: by Akemi (new)

Akemi G. You are a patient reader. I put it aside after the first several pages (plus cheating on the last several pages). Borrowing your words, a book that is to be admired than loved is just not for me; the snobbish tone alone is a turnoff.

(And in my opinion, a snob who seeks to be admired than loved is fundamentally stupid.)


Roger Brunyate I love your concept of a Greek chorus without a play! And agree with everything else you write here. It is a book written out of bitterness and boredom, as you say, where the central characters disappears, but all the others are avatars of the author, speaking in much the same voice. R.


Violet wells Betsey wrote: "I enjoy reading your reviews Violet. The passive voice of the narrator and the plain form of the chapters do strip away illusion. I see that stepping back as a way to more clearly examine how one c..."

Great post, Betsy. I agree with all the points you raise, especially the questionable means at our disposal to identify ourselves.


Violet wells Akemi wrote: "You are a patient reader. I put it aside after the first several pages (plus cheating on the last several pages). Borrowing your words, a book that is to be admired than loved is just not for me; t..."

She can come across as a bit snobbish, Akemi, though I didn't find that to be case in her book about a family visit to Italy which I greatly enjoyed.


Violet wells Jay wrote: "I assumed the tone was to illuminate the character of the protagonist who seems to be a rather poor writer. After every bit of description, dialogue, or narration, she seems compelled to explain wh..."

My prophecy at the end of my review turned out to be right on the mark. I've completely forgotten this book!


Violet wells Roger wrote: "I love your concept of a Greek chorus without a play! And agree with everything else you write here. It is a book written out of bitterness and boredom, as you say, where the central characters dis..."

Thanks Roger. Loved your review.


message 21: by SB (new) - rated it 3 stars

SB absolutely. i agree with what you say entirely. you expressed my feelings about this book better.


Marla Excellent review. I felt the same way. Thank you!


Violet wells SB wrote: "absolutely. i agree with what you say entirely. you expressed my feelings about this book better."

Thanks SB.


Violet wells Marla wrote: "Excellent review. I felt the same way. Thank you!"

Thanks Maria.


daemyra, the realm's delight Great review, Violet. Love the interpretation that this is a writer auditioning characters lol, and agree that it is ultimately a book to admire than to love.


Violet wells Irene wrote: "Great review, Violet. Love the interpretation that this is a writer auditioning characters lol, and agree that it is ultimately a book to admire than to love."

Thanks Irene.


message 27: by Mona (new) - added it

Mona Well done review, Violet. You’re clear how you felt about this book and why.


message 28: by Nat (new) - rated it 3 stars

Nat I didn't know what to make of this book, but your review summs it up quite good. I didn't really enjoy reading it but it wasn't ... bad. I heard so much praise about it but I just can't bring myself thinking much else than that I was mostly bored by it. There is just not much happening and I guess that's exactly what she was going for. The writing itself is good, but probably just not my cup of tea.


Mursalin Mosaddeque I had a very different response to this novel. But I liked your observations. Thanks!


message 30: by Emma (new) - rated it 4 stars

Emma Spot on yes. I warmed to this in the last quarter of it; it was as if Cusk finally found some nugget of passion or warmth to nestle into. It became worth it. But most of the time I felt impatient with the long line of droning voices telling their little anecdotes. Almost self-parodying. Something in it switches over after the plane neighbour makes a pass at her. Shit gets real, or something. Like she can’t avoid the physical, or the impact of people on each other any more.


message 31: by Knut (new) - rated it 4 stars

Knut Seip So do I, six months, that is a long time


message 32: by Rakela (new) - added it

Rakela Borg-Marks I hadn’t yet come across a review which perfectly elucidated what felt to be an unsatisfactory experience; an unwelcoming aura, while reading this novel - until I read yours! Thank you, you are so right!


Lawrence Davies I agree both that there is a bitterness there and that it is tempting to see this in Cusk herself. But, given that the protagonist resolutely refuses to make any comment or judgement on the other characters, isn't this precisely what the book is warning us against?


message 34: by Zeph (new) - rated it 3 stars

Zeph this is exactly how i felt about it too


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