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Twenty Love Poems and a Song of Despair by Pablo Neruda
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Tempting as it may appear to wrap the poetic pearls from this collection of Neruda鈥檚 heartbeats into a warm shawl of erotic wool, do resist it and pause.

These loquacious verses that assemble at the nape of a lover or ripple playfully across the soft mountains of a beloved鈥檚 waist, magnify when viewed through the dual lenses of night and water .
I have said that you sang in the wind
like pines and like masts.
Like them you are tall and taciturn,
and you are sad, all at once, like a voyage.

You gather things to you like an old road.
You are peopled with echoes and nostalgic voices.
I awoke and at times birds fled and migrated
that had been sleeping in your soul.
Throughout this collection, there are elements that sprout from these two shores, taking their own boundless attire once left to the ocean of the author鈥檚 imagination. I found it interesting to note that Neruda wrote these poems when he was just 19, implying the failures of his political aspirations and love relationships, besides his daughter鈥檚 premature death were still far away. Despite none of the later-years鈥� blackness charring his soul, his propensity to hinge his ode on night and water mirrors a certain yearning that isn鈥檛 a slave of reciprocity or longevity. Like the night and the nocturnal swagger, arousal is a reality and yet a mirage, something that will come in certainty but will be short-lived. Like the adaptability and slightness of water, love can superimpose rebuttals and tide over long leaps of unrequited love to reach a state where it will be nothing but itself, complete and calm.

Neruda鈥檚 poems personify a charming surrender that fortifies the vulnerability of new love and removes the shame out of the advances that are nothing but a chime before the music.
In the moist night my garment of kisses trembles
charged to insanity with electric currents,
heroically divided into dreams
and intoxicating roses practicing on me.
His hero gets high on the flowers and seasons, on the days and the night, on proximity and distance, on silence and chatter 鈥� his hero is the quintessential lover who refuses to let the flame of his emotion die, shielding it with verses after verses of untamable urgency. And with the final poem, one can almost imagine him slumping to the ground, dropping his gaze from his object of love and yet, not allowing the humming of his heart to lay still.
Cemetery of kisses, there is still fire in your tombs,
still the fruited boughs burn, pecked at by birds.

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October 9, 2016 – Started Reading
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Lisa Lovely review of a wonderful collection of poems, Seemita!


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Hanneke How beautiful is your review and the poems cited, Seemita!


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Cheryl These are the best ones, poetry chapbooks at a poet's earlier stages鈥hile reading Zweig's memoir, (he also a poet)he mentions how valuable those first pieces of creative arts are鈥�

And of course you've blown me away with your graceful approach to your reading of this body of work, and your carefully postured thoughts. I love those first lines you included. Thanks for this refreshing lyric of love, Simi.


Dolors The tide of Neruda's sensuous poetry never found a more skilled captain to master the oceans of love and youthful yearning, Simi. These poems might be reason why I fell in love with poetry and they will always hold a special place in my reader's heart. Such bliss, to see your poetic hymn in response to Neruda's despaired song... I couldn't have asked for anything better to get the year started!


message 5: by Praj (last edited Jan 09, 2017 08:20AM) (new)

Praj Like the night and the nocturnal swagger, arousal is a reality and yet a mirage, something that will come in certainty but will be short-lived. Like the adaptability and slightness of water, love can superimpose rebuttals and tide over long leaps of unrequited love to reach a state where it will be nothing but itself, complete and calm.

Such exquisite words ! Makes you want to take a dive in the depths of amusing deliberations. Thanks for this wonderful write-up, aptly summing the core of Neruda's intoxicating poetry. And, for making me reach for some poetry reading soon.


Seemita Lisa wrote: "Lovely review of a wonderful collection of poems, Seemita!"

Thank you, Lisa! Oh yes, this is one swell of an imagination running amok.


message 7: by Seemita (last edited Jan 09, 2017 10:21PM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Seemita Hanneke wrote: "How beautiful is your review and the poems cited, Seemita!"

Many thanks, Hanneke! The collection is replete with dazzling musings pushing the boundaries of love and it was an immensely difficult task to cite just a few lines. But I am glad the chosen ones resonated with you :)


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Fionnuala You gather things to you like an old road.
You are peopled with echoes and nostalgic voices


I will carry that couplet around with me all day, Seemita. Thank you for reminding me of Neruda.


Seemita Cheryl wrote: "These are the best ones, poetry chapbooks at a poet's earlier stages鈥hile reading Zweig's memoir, (he also a poet)he mentions how valuable those first pieces of creative arts are鈥�

And of course y..."


Thank you, Cheryl. I ain't surprised that Zweig asserts the early works as a harbinger of a poet's prowess; I have seen him attaining amazing heights of lyrical wisdom as his works progressed on the horizon of time. Neruda's vision, on the other hand, is aesthetically so divine that his sybarite self gets overshadowed for good. I am glad to bring you some refreshing breeze of love, my dear :)


Seemita Dolors wrote: "The tide of Neruda's sensuous poetry never found a more skilled captain to master the oceans of love and youthful yearning, Simi. These poems might be reason why I fell in love with poetry and they..."

You are right, D; Neruda's sensuous poetry opens many doors for the human emotions to meander and experiment with its soul. The unabashed playfulness of his voice belies a certain depth which if detected, can certainly leave a reader in awe. I was no exception. Thank you so much for stamping your endorsement, my dear! A good start to the year indeed :)


Seemita Praj wrote: "Like the night and the nocturnal swagger, arousal is a reality and yet a mirage, something that will come in certainty but will be short-lived. Like the adaptability and slightness of water, love c..."

Thank you, Praj! Since no one can match your lyrical preciseness in unfolding the hidden meanings of prose or poetry, I am grinning ear to ear with the gift of your validation :) That someone under the influence of Neruda's bewitching songs can write any differently is, of course, my doubt. I will await your next poetic stop.


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Stunning review, Seemita! Neruda's sensuous verses seem to evoke mellifluous subtlety of moonlight, which is reflected ever so expansively in the rejuvenating ink of your delectable pen. Thanks - I cannot wait to read this.


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Cecily It's so hard to review poetry, rather than merely quote it (not that quoting is bad), but reading this, I'm left with a strong feel of the tone, timbre, colour, and subject of these poems, aided by the examples you selected.


Seemita Jean-Paul wrote: "Your lyrical musings and poetic prose make this book an object of urgency for me, Seemita!"

Oh then you must not resist, dear Sir! It is one exquisite, infinite pool to drown into :) You will survive to tell the story, I assure!


Seemita Fionnuala wrote: "You gather things to you like an old road.
You are peopled with echoes and nostalgic voices

I will carry that couplet around with me all day, Seemita. Thank you for reminding me of Neruda."


Hope the day went on a sunny, humming note, Fio :) He is quite the swash-buckler when batting words, won't you say? ;)


Seemita Waqas wrote: "Stunning review, Seemita! Neruda's sensuous verses seem to evoke mellifluous subtlety of moonlight, which is reflected ever so expansively in the rejuvenating ink of your delectable pen. Thanks - I..."

Fantastic, Waqas! The man needs to be read by all. There is such unblemished beauty in his writing that love quite certainly must be seen, at once, from his point of view. I am glad you have added this book to your TBR and I will be expectant of the dazzle your pen might release once in touch with the Neruda-camphor :)


Seemita Cecily wrote: "It's so hard to review poetry, rather than merely quote it (not that quoting is bad), but reading this, I'm left with a strong feel of the tone, timbre, colour, and subject of these poems, aided by..."

Neruda's poems are, in a strange way, both revealing and hiding; and one is tempted to dive a little more, if only to affirm what one understands or to quash the barrier that is hitherto unreachable. I am glad I was able to balance a bit of both so you found something worth to your refined tastes, Cecily. Thanks for reading.


Himanshu Exquisite writing, Seemita! You write your reflections on poetry so charmingly and analytically that it makes the reader understand more than what he did with his own experience. If I had known he was 19 when he wrote these, my experience of reading it in Hampi looking at the dying sun would have been completely different. Joy of meeting the old(known) words after a long time. :)


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Cecily Seemita wrote: "Neruda's poems are, in a strange way, both revealing and hiding..."

Neat and deep, and oddly, in drafting a review of the book I just finished (The Secret Scripture), I thought I'd read the same idea - though I can't now find it in my notes. The universe is trying to tell me something, if I can just figure out what it is.


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flo After reading several positive reviews of Neruda's poems, I thought I should give them another try. I read one of his books years ago and wasn't that impressed. I had the fortune of reading it in its original language, of course, but found them somewhat mawkish. Too sentimental, too sweet; a lethal weapon for a diabetic. But since I read them when I was a teenager, perhaps wasn't able to appreciate them. Gorgeous, contemplative reviews like the one you wrote certainly put things in perspective. :)


Seemita Himanshu wrote: "Exquisite writing, Seemita! You write your reflections on poetry so charmingly and analytically that it makes the reader understand more than what he did with his own experience. If I had known he ..."

Thanks, Himanshu! Knowing the background does add to or subtract from a work's gravitas, isn't it? I was tricked into reading about Neruda courtesy the swell prose and bewitching effects of his thoughts. And knowing that bit about his age certainly elevated this work to an untarnished pedestal, still out of reach of worldly pollutants. I am glad your thoughts of reading this book were refreshed! And welcome back, buddy :)


Seemita Cecily wrote: "Seemita wrote: "Neruda's poems are, in a strange way, both revealing and hiding..."

Neat and deep, and oddly, in drafting a review of the book I just finished (The Secret Scripture), I thought I'd..."


Haha... Relax, Cecily. GR Universes has its own unannounced eruptions ;) I hope you can rely on your memory to draw the review after all.


Seemita Florencia wrote: "After reading several positive reviews of Neruda's poems, I thought I should give them another try. I read one of his books years ago and wasn't that impressed. I had the fortune of reading it in i..."

Ah! I can understand that annoying sweetness, Flor. There is a risk of hyperbole which might be instrumental in deflecting a potential reader from Neruda's arc. But I suppose I saw it the way I have come to see poetry gradually - a deeper dive into things that are seemingly frivolous on surface but meaningful within. Knowing your affinity towards this genre, I will urge to give this man another try and then, perhaps decide if its love or despair :)


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Cecily Seemita wrote: "Haha... Relax, Cecily. GR Universes has its own unannounced eruptions ;) I hope you can rely on your memory to draw the review after all."

It wasn't The Secret Scripture, it was Tower of Babylon: 鈥淏y this construction, Yahweh鈥檚 work was indicated, and Yahweh鈥檚 work was concealed.鈥�


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Seemita Cecily wrote: "It wasn't The Secret Scripture, it was Tower of Babylon: 鈥淏y this construction, Yahweh鈥檚 work was indicated, and Yahweh鈥檚 work was concealed.鈥�"

Wow! That's remarkably similar thoughts! :) Thanks for sharing. Is this a part of Stories of Your Life and Others ?


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Cecily Yes, it is. The book is a collection of eight short(is) stories, of which that is the first. The best known is the title story, recently filmed under the new name, Arrival. Utterly different from Neruda's poems!


Seemita Cecily wrote: "The best known is the title story, recently filmed under the new name, Arrival. Utterly different from Neruda's poems!"

Ah yes! Absolutely! I have watched Arrival and loved Amy Adams in it. Also, people raved a whole lot about how adept was Denis Villeneuve in turning the book's core strands into cinema. It really piqued my interest in the book. Shall read it some day.


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Darwin8u Love Neruda's poems


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Anu A poetic review and a spectacular collection of poems, Simi. Makes me look forward to this collection all the more! :)


Seemita Darwin8u wrote: "Love Neruda's poems"

There is no other way :)


Seemita Anuradha wrote: "A poetic review and a spectacular collection of poems, Simi. Makes me look forward to this collection all the more! :)"

Wonderful Anu! I am glad you wish to read this book. May I suggest you to find a corner, warmly lit by the crimson dusk, just about spacious to house you and your book, and vast enough to let your imagination fly, before you start on this journey? It should be magical :)


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Anu Ah, why must you tempt me so, in such busy times. :-/

Soon, soon! :)


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Cecily Seemita wrote: "Also, people raved a whole lot about how adept was Denis Villeneuve in turning the book's core strands into cinema. It really piqued my interest in the book. Shall read it some day."

In many ways, the adaptation was better than I could have hoped (and certainly better than the trailer led me to expect). However, there were two strands to the breakthrough: one linguistic (which is explained in the film) and one mathematical (which isn't at all). Without reading the story and having some idea of the latter, the story doesn't quite make sense, and one major character has no justification for their presence.

Sorry - way, way off-topic!

Here are some words from Neruda:

Almost out of the sky, half of the moon
anchors between two mountains.
Turning, wandering night, the digger of eyes.
Let鈥檚 see how many stars are smashed in the pool.


Seemita Anuradha wrote: "Ah, why must you tempt me so, in such busy times. :-/

Soon, soon! :)"


Letting you steal a glimpse of the breezy days ahead, so that you can run through the present grind ;)


Seemita Cecily wrote: "one linguistic (which is explained in the film) and one mathematical (which isn't at all). Without reading the story and having some idea of the latter, the story doesn't quite make sense."

You are right. There were gaps in the mathematical translations due to which the movie ran the risk of getting tapered off the audience's radar. However, the supreme handling of the cognitive, and as you put it, the linguistic part, carries the flick home.

"Sorry - way, way off-topic!"

No worries at all! I was left very impressed with the movie and now love discussing it!

"Here are some words from Neruda:"

That is another flamboyant couplet from the inebriated Chilean! Thanks for sharing, Cecily :)


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Jaidee Lovely review Seemita. Neruda is a favorite of mine as well. I plan to read his complete poetry in the next few years. Thank you for this review and reminder :)


Seemita Jaidee wrote: "Lovely review Seemita. Neruda is a favorite of mine as well. I plan to read his complete poetry in the next few years. Thank you for this review and reminder :)"

He deserves all the praise, Jaidee! I am also harbouring a similar goal :) Thanks for visiting this review and sharing your love for Neruda.


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