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milk and honey
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***UNPOPULAR OPINION TIME LOL***
I'm honestly surprised by how popular this book is because not only is it over-hyped, it's just not a very good book at all, in my opinion. The poetry is so cloying and pretentious - just enough "unique" enough to be "special" but vague enough to be relatable. If I had to describe the style, I'd say it's a cross between fortune cookie messages & those weird 3AM posts that one weird friend you have on Facebook loves to post that are always a) calling someone out, b) posting about personal drama, or c) writing weird inspirational stuff inspired by their mood board on Pinterest.
(YOU KNOW WHICH FRIEND I'M TALKING ABOUT. WE ALL HAVE THAT WEIRD 3AM POST FRIEND.)
THE PRINCESS SAVES HERSELF IN THIS ONE is written in a very similar style to this, and I reluctantly gave that book 3 stars because it felt genuine, and maybe even authentic, even if it was written in a style that I didn't like and felt juvenile. MILK AND HONEY, I'm sure, comes from authentic emotions and experiences as well, and while I can appreciate someone wanting to share those experiences and use poetry to heal, I, as a reader, am in no way obligated to like said poetry just because the intent behind it was important. If "intent" was enough to get five stars, the star rating system would be pointless, because I'm pretty sure most writers publish their books with the intent of success and acclaim.
MILK AND HONEY comes across as pretentious and unpolished - a dichotomy that should not be possible, and yet, in MILK AND HONEY, it is. The book also features some incredibly gross metaphors like "the goddess between your legs / makes mouths water" and "the very thought of you / has my legs spread apart / like an easel with a canvas / begging for art." Ughhhh, noooo. I can only imagine that the popularity from this poetry comes from accessibility and the format that seems so easy to copy that any young aspiring poet probably takes one look and goes, "oh, if this dreck can be published, maybe my dreck can be published, too!" The drawings are no better, ugly even, and look like napkin scribbles rather than actual art.
I didn't like this at all. Everything in it has been said before. I could write a longer review ranting more about taste, expectations, and Shel Silverstein, but I'm trying to cut back on swearing and brusqueness in reviews, so I don't think any more negativity is necessary. This author apparently has a pretty devoted following on social media, so I guess if you're into Tumblr feminism and line-break poetry (which seems to be the new trend), you'll probably enjoy this.
1 to 1.5 stars
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***UNPOPULAR OPINION TIME LOL***
I'm honestly surprised by how popular this book is because not only is it over-hyped, it's just not a very good book at all, in my opinion. The poetry is so cloying and pretentious - just enough "unique" enough to be "special" but vague enough to be relatable. If I had to describe the style, I'd say it's a cross between fortune cookie messages & those weird 3AM posts that one weird friend you have on Facebook loves to post that are always a) calling someone out, b) posting about personal drama, or c) writing weird inspirational stuff inspired by their mood board on Pinterest.
(YOU KNOW WHICH FRIEND I'M TALKING ABOUT. WE ALL HAVE THAT WEIRD 3AM POST FRIEND.)
THE PRINCESS SAVES HERSELF IN THIS ONE is written in a very similar style to this, and I reluctantly gave that book 3 stars because it felt genuine, and maybe even authentic, even if it was written in a style that I didn't like and felt juvenile. MILK AND HONEY, I'm sure, comes from authentic emotions and experiences as well, and while I can appreciate someone wanting to share those experiences and use poetry to heal, I, as a reader, am in no way obligated to like said poetry just because the intent behind it was important. If "intent" was enough to get five stars, the star rating system would be pointless, because I'm pretty sure most writers publish their books with the intent of success and acclaim.
MILK AND HONEY comes across as pretentious and unpolished - a dichotomy that should not be possible, and yet, in MILK AND HONEY, it is. The book also features some incredibly gross metaphors like "the goddess between your legs / makes mouths water" and "the very thought of you / has my legs spread apart / like an easel with a canvas / begging for art." Ughhhh, noooo. I can only imagine that the popularity from this poetry comes from accessibility and the format that seems so easy to copy that any young aspiring poet probably takes one look and goes, "oh, if this dreck can be published, maybe my dreck can be published, too!" The drawings are no better, ugly even, and look like napkin scribbles rather than actual art.
I didn't like this at all. Everything in it has been said before. I could write a longer review ranting more about taste, expectations, and Shel Silverstein, but I'm trying to cut back on swearing and brusqueness in reviews, so I don't think any more negativity is necessary. This author apparently has a pretty devoted following on social media, so I guess if you're into Tumblr feminism and line-break poetry (which seems to be the new trend), you'll probably enjoy this.
1 to 1.5 stars
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January 12, 2018
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January 12, 2018
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January 12, 2018
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poetry
January 12, 2018
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5.39%
"the very thought of you
has my legs spread apart
like an easel with a canvas
begging for art
Ew, why would you say that, why, why, why"
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11
has my legs spread apart
like an easel with a canvas
begging for art
Ew, why would you say that, why, why, why"
January 12, 2018
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8.82%
"love is not cruel
we are cruel
love is not a game
we have made a game
out of love
No, but seriously, someone tell me why this is so popular
I do not understand
Am I being trolled?"
page
18
we are cruel
love is not a game
we have made a game
out of love
No, but seriously, someone tell me why this is so popular
I do not understand
Am I being trolled?"
January 12, 2018
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12.25%
"the goddess between your legs
makes mouths water
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"
page
25
makes mouths water
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"
January 12, 2018
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Finished Reading
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You're definitely not alone! :-)

That was exactly how I felt. I was like, "Wait, THIS is the book everyone won't hush up about? THIS BOOK? I don't understand!"

And I also read The Princess Saves Herself in This One; while I didn't love it, I felt it was less pretentious than this.

And I a..."
Thank you so much, Beatrix. <3
And yes, for some reason TPSHiTO annoyed me less than this one, probably because as you said, it didn't feel like it was trying so desperately hard.

LOL! I knew it reminded me of someone. Spot-on description.

LOL! I knew it reminded me of someone. Spot..."
LOL thanks. ;-D

Haha awesome!

This made me laugh so hard - what an awesome review!!!

This made me laugh so hard - what an awesome review!!!"
Haha thank you! :D

I simply labeled this modern day trash, because that is exactly what I thought of it! There is nothing here memorable (in a good way), and nothing remotely poetic. Essentially, it is a..."
Haha I'm sorry you didn't like it either. I definitely don't get the hype surrounding this author.


Thanks

I'm still trying to be good when I plan to cross-post to Amazon! They don't tolerate that shit there LOL
But anything else... FREE FOR ALL

I'm still trying to be good when I plan to cross-post to Amazon! They don't tolerat..."
Lol! That’s fair, gotta stay on Amazon’s good side. Gotta say though, as much money as I throw at them, I think I should get a profanity pass! 😂


Eek, I must have missed that one. D:

Well, Rupi Kaur is not white but it's definitely the social media version of poetry and pretty basic.