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Titus Groan by Mervyn Peake
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it was amazing
bookshelves: classics, magical-realism, favourites, gormenghast-peake, series-and-sequels
Read 2 times. Last read December 31, 2009.

How to review this weird and wonderful book? The setting, characters and plot etc are extraordinary, but it is the language that is utterly bewitching. The fact Peake was also an artist is evident in the special care with which he describes light (or absence of), skin and textures. Anthony Burgess wrote that it “has the kind of three dimensional solidity which we often find in pictorial artists who take to words� illustrations would have been supererogatory� � even though Peake sketched in the margins as he wrote, and later editions were published with the pictures.


Peake's illustration of Titus going to his tenth birthday masque

Writing in Tatler, novelist Elizabeth Bowen said:
“It is certainly not a novel; it would be found strong meat as a fairy tale� one of those works of pure, violent, self-sufficient imagination� poetry flows through his volcanic writing; the lyrical and the monstrous are inter-knotted� in the arabesque of his prose� I predict for Titus Goran a smallish but prevent public� [that] will probably renew itself, and probably enlarge, with each generation.�

Genre

It is usually classed as fantasy, but it is more like historical fiction, with a dash of magical realism. Or is it? This first volume has a profound sense of place (Gormenghast castle is arguably the main character and its inhabitants “could not imagine a world outside it�) but a very vague sense of time. They have got to the 77th earl, but electricity, motor vehicles and even guns are unknown.

Plot

The title relates to the birth of Titus, a male heir to the ancient house of Groan. However, it is really a richly imagined story of an enclosed world, suffocating under the weight of detailed and largely pointless arcane ritual: “If, for instance, his Lordship... had been three inches shorter, the costumes, gestures and even the routes would have differed from those described in the first tome.� and “It was not certain what significance the ceremony held... but the formality was no less sacred for it being unintelligible�.

It explains how a clever upstart, Steerpike, quickly goes from orphan kitchen hand, to rebel to opportunist to schemer, plotting his rise to power and influence. There is also a sub plot concerning Keda, a woman from the mud huts outside the castle where the skilled Bright Carvers live.

It is always a page-turner though at times the plot is slow because the descriptions are so rich. Peake sometimes meanders along lengthy diversions (e.g. when likening the cracks in plaster to an ancient map, he goes on to imagine journeys across such a landscape) and conjure strange metaphors,� clean she was... in the sense of a rasher of bacon�! It will certainly improve your vocabulary, though even the unfamiliar words are used so carefully that you can get the gist if you don’t have a dictionary to hand. At other times, Peake conveys a great deal in relatively few words: “Lord Sepulchrave walked with slow strides, his head bowed. Fuchsia mouched. Doctor Prunesquallor minced. The twins propelled themselves forward vacantly. Flay spidered his path. Swelter wallowed his.� which tells you most of what you need to know about almost all the main characters.

There are macabre episodes (Peake is not afraid to kill off significant characters in nasty ways), but also moments of wonder (the sky pavement), mystery (the death owl) and humour (a comic cat-and-mouse fight in almost total darkness, except for occasional flashes of lightning).

An Artist Writes

Peake’s artistic eye is evident in vividly visual descriptions, especially, skin, masonry and candle wax (“His face was very lined, as though it had been made of brown paper that had been crunched by some savage hand before being hastily smoothed out and spread over the tissues.�). Perhaps that is also why carvings are such a big deal in Gormenghast: the annual competition is explained near the beginning of the novel, rivalries are fierce and the carvers� skill is the only reason the “dwellers� are tolerated so near the castle. Yet what value is really placed on their skill when all but the best three carvings are ceremonially burned, and even those winners are stored in a dusty attic, rather than revered?

For a few chapters, the narrative switches to the present tense, for no obvious reason (“A Change of Colour� to the end of “Here and There�) and Peake is oddly and confusingly inconsistent in how he refers to some people (The Earl of Groan and Lord Sepulchrave are one and the same and his sisters are indeed his sisters, even though they are also referred to as his daughter’s mother’s cousins and his daughter’s cousins).

I love the second volume as well (Gormenghast, reviewed HERE), but be warned that the third (Titus Alone, reviewed HERE), is totally different and harder to appreciate.

Nevertheless, I still think this is one of the best-written books I know and, like all great works, only improves with each rereading.


Quotes

� “Lord Sepulchrave walked with slow strides, his head bowed. Fuchsia mouched. Doctor Prunesquallor minced. The twins propelled themselves forward vacantly. Flay spidered his path. Swelter wallowed his.�
� Swelter’s voice is “like the warm, sick notes of some prodigious mouldering bell�.
� Cracks in the wall “A thousand imaginary journeys might be made along the banks of these rivers of an unexplored world�. (A similar idea in Boy in Darkness, when Titus looks at a mildewed spot on the ceiling.)
� The Countess’s room was “untidy to the extent of being a shambles. Everything had the appearance of being put aside for the moment.�
� “His [Sourdust] face was very lined, as though it had been made of brown paper that had been crunched by some savage hand before being hastily smoothed out and spread over the tissues.�
� The Earl’s life, and to some extent everyone else’s, is governed by detailed and largely pointless arcane ritual. “The second tome was full of blank pages and was entirely symbolic... If, for instance, his Lordship.. had been three inches shorter, the costumes, gestures and even the routes would have differed from those described in the first tome.� “It was not certain what significance the ceremony held... but the formality was no less sacred for it being unintelligible�.
� “She [Fuchisa] appeared to inhabit, rather than to wear her clothes.�
� “as empty as an unremembered heart� (the “stage� in Fuchsia’s attic).
� "Today I saw a great pavement among the clouds made of grey stones, bigger than a meadow. No one goes there. Only a heron. Today I saw a tree growing out of a high wall, and people walking on it far above the ground. Today I saw a poet look out of a narrow window... I saw today... a horse swimming in the top of a tower: I saw a million towers today."
� The twins� faces “were quite expressionless, as though they were preliminary layouts for faces and were waiting for sentience to be injected�.
� An extraordinary metaphor at the end of this one about Irma Prunesquallor: “more the appearance of having been plucked and peeled than of cleanliness, though clean she was... in the sense of a rasher of bacon�!
� “Treading in a pool of his own midnight�.
� “We are all imprisoned by the dictionary. We choose out of that vast, paper-walled prison our convicts, the little black printed words, when in truth we need fresh sounds to utter, new enfranchised noises which would produce a new effect.�
� Burned books are “the corpses of thought�.
� “lambent darkness� is a good oxymoron.
� Lightning is, “a light like razors. It not only showed to the least minutiae the anatomy of masonry, pillars and towers, trees, grass-blades and pebbles, it conjured these things, it constructed them from nothing... then a creation reigned in a blinding and ghastly glory as a torrent of electric fire coursed across the heavens.�
� “The outpouring of a continent of sky had incarcerated and given a weird hyper-reality of closeness to those who were shielded from all but the sound of the storm.�

All My Peake Reviews

All my Peake/Gormenghast reviews (including biographies/memoirs and books about his art) are on a shelf:
HERE.

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Quotes Cecily Liked

Mervyn Peake
“We are all imprisoned by the dictionary. We choose out of that vast, paper-walled prison our convicts, the little black printed words, when in truth we need fresh sounds to utter, new enfranchised noises which would produce a new effect.”
Mervyn Peake, Titus Groan

Mervyn Peake
“This tower, patched unevenly with black ivy, arose like a mutilated finger from among the fists of knuckled masonry and pointed blasphemously at heaven. At night the owls made of it an echoing throat; by day it stood voiceless and cast its long shadow.”
Mervyn Peake, Titus Groan

Mervyn Peake
“It was not certain what significance the ceremony held... but the formality was no less sacred for it being unintelligible”
Mervyn Peake, Titus Groan


Reading Progress

2004 – Started Reading
2004 – Finished Reading
May 30, 2008 – Shelved
June 9, 2008 – Shelved as: classics
June 9, 2008 – Shelved as: magical-realism
June 9, 2008 – Shelved as: favourites
Started Reading
December 31, 2009 – Finished Reading
June 19, 2012 – Shelved as: gormenghast-peake
March 20, 2024 – Shelved as: series-and-sequels

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Mark Brilliant. I loved the book but have never had the courage to even start a review and have never got around to re-reading or indeed to reading the next volumes. Yours is excellent. Well done


Cecily Thank you. I started writing reviews shortly before I joined Good Reads, and knowing that I will write one makes me read more carefully and so have a richer, more immersive experience. I also like being able to refer to them at any time.


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Ian "Marvin" Graye This is a wonderful review, especially if it's three years since you read the book.


Cecily Thanks, though I've revised it since I first wrote it, especially when I reread it, last year, I think.


mark monday what an excellent review!


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Steve Your most recent review of a Mervyn Peake book wasn't very enthusiastic. I can see now that was not representative. This one must be closer to the mark in summarizing your overall feelings towards him. Fantabulous job, Cecily!


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I love it when a new friend introduces me to a new book.


Cecily Steve wrote: "Your most recent review of a Mervyn Peake book wasn't very enthusiastic..."

I'm enthusiastic about all Mervyn's books, so I think you're probably referring to the memoirs of his son, Sebastian, which I read shortly before you posted your comment here (http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...). On the other hand, those by his wife (http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...) and daughter (http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...) are excellent.


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KJ Brilliant review of one of my favourite books. Thank you so much for this.


Cecily Thanks. I'm glad to meet a fellow Peake fan.

(I'm currently rereading the Titus books, so will update all my reviews when I've finished.)


message 11: by Garima (new)

Garima I'm so going to refer to your shelf once I'll decide to tackle this book. I'm sure to gain a lot from this series which is unanimously liked by all my friends who have read it. Great review, Cecily. Thank you!


Cecily I hope you love them as much as I do (but be prepared for a total change in the third one).


Peter Great review Cecily. I think Steerpikes escape over the rooftops is my favourite sequence in the book - his view of the poet and the horse swimming in the tower and the tree on the side of the building - all so vividly described and original images.


Cecily Yes, that's a wonderful vision.


Rattyso Hi Cecily, Thank you for such a good review which compelled me to read it straight away. This is rare for me as I have a tendency to buy books much faster than I can read them, and there's quite a long backlog gathering dust on the shelf! The queue-barge was worth it as I enjoyed the book immensely, but I feel I might need to read it again before writing a review of my own that might do it justice. It's not an easy one.


Cecily I'm so glad to hear that, Rattyso.


message 17: by Greg (new) - rated it 5 stars

Greg Cecily, in Graham Greene: A Life in Letters, in a letter to Mervyn Peake from Greene, who is reading drafts of the manuscript of Titus Groan, is telling Mervyn Peake bluntly but positively, being "mercilessly frank", what changes need to be made to tighten and improve sections that Greene said were lazy. He did say he liked the book immensely. "Peake was shocked, but this letter marked a turning point in his career as he finally accepted the importance of 'the blue pencil approach'. Delayed by revisions and wartime shortage of paper, Titus Groan finally appeared on 22 March 1946."


Cecily Thanks, Greg. I've read very little Greene (and that was 20+ years ago), but that does ring a bell from bios of Peake.

I think there are a few current, blockbuster, authors who might benefit from appreciating the blue pencil of others.


Agnieszka Excellent review , Cecily ! Your references to Dickens and Kafka seem to me very apt . Also , really enjoyed quotes you pulled from the book.


Cecily Thanks, Agnieszka. I'm happy to see you gave it 5* as well, and I loved your atmospheric review, and the quotes in the progress comments.

(As you probably noticed, this review has a few quotes, but there are more in the second last link.)


Agnieszka Cecily wrote: "Thanks, Agnieszka. I'm happy to see you gave it 5* as well, and I loved your atmospheric review, and the quotes in the progress comments.

(As you probably noticed, this review has a few quotes, bu..."


Yes , this is an excellent selection of quotes . I saw also you added links to your next reviews from Gormenghast . Will visit them when complete reading trilogy .


Cecily I look forward to reading your review in due course.

Gormenghast is very similar to this, but be prepared for something utterly different with Titus Alone.


message 23: by Leo (new) - rated it 3 stars

Leo Walsh FYI. When you added me as a friend, I saw this review while going through your profile. It got me so intrigued about the book (it does appear on several "best of fantasy" lists) that I picked up a copy on Amazon. I'm about 30 pages in, and already I'm hooked... thinking "Dickens meets Poe." It'll be interesting to finally meet the newborn Titus.


Cecily Fantastic! If you're 30 pages in, you have a good feel for it; if you like it thus far, I think there's a good chance you will continue to do so. Titus Alone, is very different from Titus Groan and Gormenghast, but has a particularly Dickensian thread.


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Leo Walsh I liked it... but with reservations. A bit too slow & it felt like I was reading a Tennyson (the uber-Romantic Keda scenes with the Bright Carvers)/ Dickens hybrid in the end. Plus, there is a bit of the Gothic... A bit too slow to develop. I mean, five hundred pages on and Titus still in diapers? What is the main narrative... I'm unclear? Plus Peake's language can run purple. Still, I'll give part 2 a try.


Cecily Part 2/Gormenghast is very similar, but a little more exaggerated (more humour and more darkness), but part 3/Titus Alone is VERY different (but has far stronger Dickens bit).

As for the main narrative... there isn't much. Let yourself be swamped in the purple prose.


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Sud666 sounds fascinating. Wonderful review.


Cecily Sud666 wrote: "sounds fascinating. Wonderful review."

Thanks, Sud. It's in a class of its own. I hope that if you read it, it's a class you love.


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Kevin Ansbro Cecily, I am Gormen-aghast at the quality of your superb reviews!
Comparisons to Dickens and Kafka have even encouraged me to add this one.


Cecily Kevin wrote: "Cecily, I am Gormen-aghast at the quality of your superb reviews!
Comparisons to Dickens and Kafka have even encouraged me to add this one."


Thanks, Kevin. I'd be fascinated to see what you make of Peake. It's not magical realism (which I know you like), but it's not entirely realistic either. For me, it's all about the language and thus the total immersion in this strange place.


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Sud666 Cecily wrote: "Sud666 wrote: "sounds fascinating. Wonderful review."

Thanks, Sud. It's in a class of its own. I hope that if you read it, it's a class you love."


I appreciate great or original works (art, literature, music) so if the books meets the review's lofty descriptions then I am sure it will be an unmitigated pleasure :)


Cecily Sud666 wrote: "I appreciate great or original works (art, literature, music) so if the books meets the review's lofty descriptions then I am sure it will be an unmitigated pleasure :) "

I think even those who didn't enjoy this book would acknowledge its greatness and originality. I hope that unmitigated pleasure from Peake's pen is soon yours.


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Ryan You certainly know how to review a book Cecily.


Cecily Ryan wrote: "You certainly know how to review a book Cecily."

Thank you, Ryan.
(Just a shame I don't know how to write an actual book.)


message 35: by Ryan (new) - rated it 3 stars

Ryan I hear it's all a matter of practice. Not sure I believe it though.


Cecily Ryan wrote: "I hear it's all a matter of practice. Not sure I believe it though."

I hear that, but like you, I don't believe it. You can hone things with practice, but you need a degree of basic talent and, most importantly, an idea, and a passion to put it across.
Also, "Everyone has a book in them", but that doesn't necessarily mean it should be published.


message 37: by Mark (new)

Mark Hebwood When I read a review like this, I want to read the book. When I read this particular book, I always lose the will to live. I just cant get through it...

Still, I think there can be no doubt that you are a talented writer, Cecily. And I am sure you are full of ideas. I dont know what the magic ingredient is - perhaps an ability to play around, and just write a scene, without expecting any outcome....


Cecily Mark wrote: "When I read a review like this, I want to read the book. When I read this particular book, I always lose the will to live. I just cant get through it..."

Well, it is a very particular, peculiar sort of book. Much as I love it, I understand why others don't. I want to sing its praises and raise its profile, but I don't want to struggle and be disappointed or feel bad about not liking it.

Mark wrote: "Still, I think there can be no doubt that you are a talented writer, Cecily. And I am sure you are full of ideas. I don't know what the magic ingredient is - perhaps an ability to play around, and just write a scene, without expecting any outcome...."

You're so kind. Thank you so much for the vote of confidence, but don't hold your breath. I do occasionally toy with the idea of writing properly, but the ideas I have are not that good (and some are too obviously inspired by people I know!). More fundamentally, I think a good writer needs a vision and a passion for their message, and I certainly don't have that. But maybe one day... in retirement, perhaps.


Campbell What a fantastic review!

Mark, I was the same, I just could not get through it. Then I listened to the audiobook, narrated by Robert Whitfield, and it was a revelation. It forced me to slow down and enjoy the richness of the language, rather than try to forge through (as I then realised I had been doing) to discover the plot. I'd strongly urge you to give the audiobook a try.


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Mark Hebwood Aw Campbell. I had made my peace with the book and now you come along and offer me an alternative way in. Thanks for destroying my life, mate. Now I have to pick this up again... :-)

Joking aside, thanks for that tip. I always wanted to love this book and I'll give that a go!


message 41: by Mark (last edited Sep 23, 2016 02:14AM) (new)

Mark Hebwood Cecily - writing for me is like escapism. I tend to daydream in certain situations, it's just like stepping back from the reality you are a part of and perceiving it as something external. For example, I was skiing this year and I was sitting in a restaurant on the mountain at lunch. It was a beautiful day, no cloud in the sky, crisp and there was a band playing. Because it was such a beautiful day, the restaurants on the mountain-tops chose the opportunity to re-stock their supplies, something which is done by helicopter. So the sky over Switzerland was filled with flying machines and dangling from them were large containers filled with supplies. These containers were attached to the helicopters via long ropes and that made them look like pendulums. Silent, mesmeric, eerie animals in the sky, moving to their own rhythm, following a purpose only they could know, only they should know....

And ... I was in my reverie. I wrote this up there and then on my mobile - just a short paragraph capturing my impressions. I do that all the time. It's certainly fun. Whether it is any good nobody knows... But I am just doing it for myself, like I am listening to a piece of music for myself, with no expectation of any feedback.

The ability to do something completely useless and unproductive (daydreaming) is innate in my case... :-) But maybe you can allow it to happen in your own life? Apologies if this sounds as if I am suggesting what you should do - this is of course not what I meant. Just sharing an idea about what goes on in my mind when I write bits and pieces.


message 42: by Greg (new) - rated it 5 stars

Greg Cecily, don't shoot the messenger. I can't believe The Gormenghast Trilogy is not on this list.



message 43: by Cecily (last edited Sep 23, 2016 01:11PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Cecily Campbell wrote: "What a fantastic review!"

Thank you, Campbell, and I'm pleased to see 5* by your name.

Campbell wrote: "Mark, I was the same, I just could not get through it. Then I listened to the audiobook... It forced me to slow down and enjoy the richness of the language..."

I'd never considered that aspect of audiobooks. They don't work for me (my mind wanders unless I have something to hold and look at), but it's good to understand why they do work so well for other.

Campbell wrote: "... I had made my peace with the book and now you come along and offer me an alternative way in. Thanks for destroying my life, mate...."

LOL. Good luck, Mark, whether you go for it or not.


Cecily Mark wrote: "Cecily - writing for me is like escapism. I tend to daydream in certain situations...
And ... I was in my reverie. I wrote this up there and then on my mobile....

The ability to do something completely useless and unproductive (daydreaming) is innate in my case... :-)"


Some interesting ideas there (and friendly suggestions - as opposed to dictats - are welcome). Now you mention it, I have occasionally begun to do something a bit like that. Perhaps I'll make more of a deliberate effort. Thank you so much for the encouragement.


Cecily Greg wrote: "Cecily, don't shoot the messenger. I can't believe The Gormenghast Trilogy is not on this list.
"


Don't worry, Greg, I don't blame you. It's a pretty odd list for many reasons: the absence of Peake (who is sadly neglected in general, let alone overseas) is only one.


Apatt You make it sound so brill (do the kids still say brill?)

"It is usually classed as fantasy, but it is more like historical fiction"
Actually, to sell it to me you'd have to switch the two genres around in the above sentence! Ah, but you can sell ice to Eskimos anyway, and I'm in a hot country.
I know China M is a fan, Gaiman swears by it as well.
I don't think Stephenie Meyer is into it, though.
Donald T also hasn't read it.


Cecily Apatt wrote: "You make it sound so brill (do the kids still say brill?)..."

LOL, and I have no idea, not being down wiv da kidz myself.

Apatt wrote: "I know China M is a fan, Gaiman swears by it as well. ...
I don't think Stephenie Meyer is into it, though.
Donald T also hasn't read it."


It was hearing Mieville talk passionately about Peake that made me give Mieville a second chance (and I'm glad I did).
Gaiman makes sense.
Stephanie who? ;)
Are you propagating the line that he's barely able to read, or just the idea that he has no inclination to read anything of worth?


Louisa Black My favourite book of all time. My heart skipped a beat when I saw this on my home page. I love reading other people's response. I could read it over and over. Also Radio 4 Extra produced an excellent play which can be downloaded from ITunes x Thank you for this review :)


Cecily Louisa wrote: "My favourite book of all time. My heart skipped a beat when I saw this on my home page...."

I'm happy to meet a fellow fan. A friend has just started a new group. You might want to check it out (I haven't really done so yet):
/group/show/...

Louisa wrote: "Radio 4 Extra produced an excellent play which can be downloaded from ITunes x Thank you for this review :) "

And thank you for that.


message 50: by Greg (new) - rated it 5 stars

Greg Cecily, okay, now I need to write a review of "Titus Groan" but am sort of overwhelmed. A completely unclassifiable work.


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