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Titus Groan (Gormenghast #1)
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bookshelves: classics, magical-realism, favourites, gormenghast-peake, series-and-sequels
May 30, 2008
bookshelves: classics, magical-realism, favourites, gormenghast-peake, series-and-sequels
Read 2 times. Last read December 31, 2009.
How to review this weird and wonderful book? The setting, characters and plot etc are extraordinary, but it is the language that is utterly bewitching. The fact Peake was also an artist is evident in the special care with which he describes light (or absence of), skin and textures. Anthony Burgess wrote that it “has the kind of three dimensional solidity which we often find in pictorial artists who take to words� illustrations would have been supererogatory� � even though Peake sketched in the margins as he wrote, and later editions were published with the pictures.
Peake's illustration of Titus going to his tenth birthday masque
Writing in Tatler, novelist Elizabeth Bowen said:
Genre
It is usually classed as fantasy, but it is more like historical fiction, with a dash of magical realism. Or is it? This first volume has a profound sense of place (Gormenghast castle is arguably the main character and its inhabitants “could not imagine a world outside it�) but a very vague sense of time. They have got to the 77th earl, but electricity, motor vehicles and even guns are unknown.
Plot
The title relates to the birth of Titus, a male heir to the ancient house of Groan. However, it is really a richly imagined story of an enclosed world, suffocating under the weight of detailed and largely pointless arcane ritual: “If, for instance, his Lordship... had been three inches shorter, the costumes, gestures and even the routes would have differed from those described in the first tome.� and “It was not certain what significance the ceremony held... but the formality was no less sacred for it being unintelligible�.
It explains how a clever upstart, Steerpike, quickly goes from orphan kitchen hand, to rebel to opportunist to schemer, plotting his rise to power and influence. There is also a sub plot concerning Keda, a woman from the mud huts outside the castle where the skilled Bright Carvers live.
It is always a page-turner though at times the plot is slow because the descriptions are so rich. Peake sometimes meanders along lengthy diversions (e.g. when likening the cracks in plaster to an ancient map, he goes on to imagine journeys across such a landscape) and conjure strange metaphors,� clean she was... in the sense of a rasher of bacon�! It will certainly improve your vocabulary, though even the unfamiliar words are used so carefully that you can get the gist if you don’t have a dictionary to hand. At other times, Peake conveys a great deal in relatively few words: “Lord Sepulchrave walked with slow strides, his head bowed. Fuchsia mouched. Doctor Prunesquallor minced. The twins propelled themselves forward vacantly. Flay spidered his path. Swelter wallowed his.� which tells you most of what you need to know about almost all the main characters.
There are macabre episodes (Peake is not afraid to kill off significant characters in nasty ways), but also moments of wonder (the sky pavement), mystery (the death owl) and humour (a comic cat-and-mouse fight in almost total darkness, except for occasional flashes of lightning).
An Artist Writes
Peake’s artistic eye is evident in vividly visual descriptions, especially, skin, masonry and candle wax (“His face was very lined, as though it had been made of brown paper that had been crunched by some savage hand before being hastily smoothed out and spread over the tissues.�). Perhaps that is also why carvings are such a big deal in Gormenghast: the annual competition is explained near the beginning of the novel, rivalries are fierce and the carvers� skill is the only reason the “dwellers� are tolerated so near the castle. Yet what value is really placed on their skill when all but the best three carvings are ceremonially burned, and even those winners are stored in a dusty attic, rather than revered?
For a few chapters, the narrative switches to the present tense, for no obvious reason (“A Change of Colour� to the end of “Here and There�) and Peake is oddly and confusingly inconsistent in how he refers to some people (The Earl of Groan and Lord Sepulchrave are one and the same and his sisters are indeed his sisters, even though they are also referred to as his daughter’s mother’s cousins and his daughter’s cousins).
I love the second volume as well (Gormenghast, reviewed HERE), but be warned that the third (Titus Alone, reviewed HERE), is totally different and harder to appreciate.
Nevertheless, I still think this is one of the best-written books I know and, like all great works, only improves with each rereading.
Quotes
� “Lord Sepulchrave walked with slow strides, his head bowed. Fuchsia mouched. Doctor Prunesquallor minced. The twins propelled themselves forward vacantly. Flay spidered his path. Swelter wallowed his.�
� Swelter’s voice is “like the warm, sick notes of some prodigious mouldering bell�.
� Cracks in the wall “A thousand imaginary journeys might be made along the banks of these rivers of an unexplored world�. (A similar idea in Boy in Darkness, when Titus looks at a mildewed spot on the ceiling.)
� The Countess’s room was “untidy to the extent of being a shambles. Everything had the appearance of being put aside for the moment.�
� “His [Sourdust] face was very lined, as though it had been made of brown paper that had been crunched by some savage hand before being hastily smoothed out and spread over the tissues.�
� The Earl’s life, and to some extent everyone else’s, is governed by detailed and largely pointless arcane ritual. “The second tome was full of blank pages and was entirely symbolic... If, for instance, his Lordship.. had been three inches shorter, the costumes, gestures and even the routes would have differed from those described in the first tome.� “It was not certain what significance the ceremony held... but the formality was no less sacred for it being unintelligible�.
� “She [Fuchisa] appeared to inhabit, rather than to wear her clothes.�
� “as empty as an unremembered heart� (the “stage� in Fuchsia’s attic).
� "Today I saw a great pavement among the clouds made of grey stones, bigger than a meadow. No one goes there. Only a heron. Today I saw a tree growing out of a high wall, and people walking on it far above the ground. Today I saw a poet look out of a narrow window... I saw today... a horse swimming in the top of a tower: I saw a million towers today."
� The twins� faces “were quite expressionless, as though they were preliminary layouts for faces and were waiting for sentience to be injected�.
� An extraordinary metaphor at the end of this one about Irma Prunesquallor: “more the appearance of having been plucked and peeled than of cleanliness, though clean she was... in the sense of a rasher of bacon�!
� “Treading in a pool of his own midnight�.
� “We are all imprisoned by the dictionary. We choose out of that vast, paper-walled prison our convicts, the little black printed words, when in truth we need fresh sounds to utter, new enfranchised noises which would produce a new effect.�
� Burned books are “the corpses of thought�.
� “lambent darkness� is a good oxymoron.
� Lightning is, “a light like razors. It not only showed to the least minutiae the anatomy of masonry, pillars and towers, trees, grass-blades and pebbles, it conjured these things, it constructed them from nothing... then a creation reigned in a blinding and ghastly glory as a torrent of electric fire coursed across the heavens.�
� “The outpouring of a continent of sky had incarcerated and given a weird hyper-reality of closeness to those who were shielded from all but the sound of the storm.�
All My Peake Reviews
All my Peake/Gormenghast reviews (including biographies/memoirs and books about his art) are on a shelf:
HERE.

Peake's illustration of Titus going to his tenth birthday masque
Writing in Tatler, novelist Elizabeth Bowen said:
“It is certainly not a novel; it would be found strong meat as a fairy tale� one of those works of pure, violent, self-sufficient imagination� poetry flows through his volcanic writing; the lyrical and the monstrous are inter-knotted� in the arabesque of his prose� I predict for Titus Goran a smallish but prevent public� [that] will probably renew itself, and probably enlarge, with each generation.�
Genre
It is usually classed as fantasy, but it is more like historical fiction, with a dash of magical realism. Or is it? This first volume has a profound sense of place (Gormenghast castle is arguably the main character and its inhabitants “could not imagine a world outside it�) but a very vague sense of time. They have got to the 77th earl, but electricity, motor vehicles and even guns are unknown.
Plot
The title relates to the birth of Titus, a male heir to the ancient house of Groan. However, it is really a richly imagined story of an enclosed world, suffocating under the weight of detailed and largely pointless arcane ritual: “If, for instance, his Lordship... had been three inches shorter, the costumes, gestures and even the routes would have differed from those described in the first tome.� and “It was not certain what significance the ceremony held... but the formality was no less sacred for it being unintelligible�.
It explains how a clever upstart, Steerpike, quickly goes from orphan kitchen hand, to rebel to opportunist to schemer, plotting his rise to power and influence. There is also a sub plot concerning Keda, a woman from the mud huts outside the castle where the skilled Bright Carvers live.
It is always a page-turner though at times the plot is slow because the descriptions are so rich. Peake sometimes meanders along lengthy diversions (e.g. when likening the cracks in plaster to an ancient map, he goes on to imagine journeys across such a landscape) and conjure strange metaphors,� clean she was... in the sense of a rasher of bacon�! It will certainly improve your vocabulary, though even the unfamiliar words are used so carefully that you can get the gist if you don’t have a dictionary to hand. At other times, Peake conveys a great deal in relatively few words: “Lord Sepulchrave walked with slow strides, his head bowed. Fuchsia mouched. Doctor Prunesquallor minced. The twins propelled themselves forward vacantly. Flay spidered his path. Swelter wallowed his.� which tells you most of what you need to know about almost all the main characters.
There are macabre episodes (Peake is not afraid to kill off significant characters in nasty ways), but also moments of wonder (the sky pavement), mystery (the death owl) and humour (a comic cat-and-mouse fight in almost total darkness, except for occasional flashes of lightning).
An Artist Writes
Peake’s artistic eye is evident in vividly visual descriptions, especially, skin, masonry and candle wax (“His face was very lined, as though it had been made of brown paper that had been crunched by some savage hand before being hastily smoothed out and spread over the tissues.�). Perhaps that is also why carvings are such a big deal in Gormenghast: the annual competition is explained near the beginning of the novel, rivalries are fierce and the carvers� skill is the only reason the “dwellers� are tolerated so near the castle. Yet what value is really placed on their skill when all but the best three carvings are ceremonially burned, and even those winners are stored in a dusty attic, rather than revered?
For a few chapters, the narrative switches to the present tense, for no obvious reason (“A Change of Colour� to the end of “Here and There�) and Peake is oddly and confusingly inconsistent in how he refers to some people (The Earl of Groan and Lord Sepulchrave are one and the same and his sisters are indeed his sisters, even though they are also referred to as his daughter’s mother’s cousins and his daughter’s cousins).
I love the second volume as well (Gormenghast, reviewed HERE), but be warned that the third (Titus Alone, reviewed HERE), is totally different and harder to appreciate.
Nevertheless, I still think this is one of the best-written books I know and, like all great works, only improves with each rereading.
Quotes
� “Lord Sepulchrave walked with slow strides, his head bowed. Fuchsia mouched. Doctor Prunesquallor minced. The twins propelled themselves forward vacantly. Flay spidered his path. Swelter wallowed his.�
� Swelter’s voice is “like the warm, sick notes of some prodigious mouldering bell�.
� Cracks in the wall “A thousand imaginary journeys might be made along the banks of these rivers of an unexplored world�. (A similar idea in Boy in Darkness, when Titus looks at a mildewed spot on the ceiling.)
� The Countess’s room was “untidy to the extent of being a shambles. Everything had the appearance of being put aside for the moment.�
� “His [Sourdust] face was very lined, as though it had been made of brown paper that had been crunched by some savage hand before being hastily smoothed out and spread over the tissues.�
� The Earl’s life, and to some extent everyone else’s, is governed by detailed and largely pointless arcane ritual. “The second tome was full of blank pages and was entirely symbolic... If, for instance, his Lordship.. had been three inches shorter, the costumes, gestures and even the routes would have differed from those described in the first tome.� “It was not certain what significance the ceremony held... but the formality was no less sacred for it being unintelligible�.
� “She [Fuchisa] appeared to inhabit, rather than to wear her clothes.�
� “as empty as an unremembered heart� (the “stage� in Fuchsia’s attic).
� "Today I saw a great pavement among the clouds made of grey stones, bigger than a meadow. No one goes there. Only a heron. Today I saw a tree growing out of a high wall, and people walking on it far above the ground. Today I saw a poet look out of a narrow window... I saw today... a horse swimming in the top of a tower: I saw a million towers today."
� The twins� faces “were quite expressionless, as though they were preliminary layouts for faces and were waiting for sentience to be injected�.
� An extraordinary metaphor at the end of this one about Irma Prunesquallor: “more the appearance of having been plucked and peeled than of cleanliness, though clean she was... in the sense of a rasher of bacon�!
� “Treading in a pool of his own midnight�.
� “We are all imprisoned by the dictionary. We choose out of that vast, paper-walled prison our convicts, the little black printed words, when in truth we need fresh sounds to utter, new enfranchised noises which would produce a new effect.�
� Burned books are “the corpses of thought�.
� “lambent darkness� is a good oxymoron.
� Lightning is, “a light like razors. It not only showed to the least minutiae the anatomy of masonry, pillars and towers, trees, grass-blades and pebbles, it conjured these things, it constructed them from nothing... then a creation reigned in a blinding and ghastly glory as a torrent of electric fire coursed across the heavens.�
� “The outpouring of a continent of sky had incarcerated and given a weird hyper-reality of closeness to those who were shielded from all but the sound of the storm.�
All My Peake Reviews
All my Peake/Gormenghast reviews (including biographies/memoirs and books about his art) are on a shelf:
HERE.
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Quotes Cecily Liked

“We are all imprisoned by the dictionary. We choose out of that vast, paper-walled prison our convicts, the little black printed words, when in truth we need fresh sounds to utter, new enfranchised noises which would produce a new effect.”
― Titus Groan
― Titus Groan

“This tower, patched unevenly with black ivy, arose like a mutilated finger from among the fists of knuckled masonry and pointed blasphemously at heaven. At night the owls made of it an echoing throat; by day it stood voiceless and cast its long shadow.”
― Titus Groan
― Titus Groan

“It was not certain what significance the ceremony held... but the formality was no less sacred for it being unintelligible”
― Titus Groan
― Titus Groan
Reading Progress
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2004
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Finished Reading
May 30, 2008
– Shelved
June 9, 2008
– Shelved as:
classics
June 9, 2008
– Shelved as:
magical-realism
June 9, 2008
– Shelved as:
favourites
Started Reading
December 31, 2009
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Finished Reading
June 19, 2012
– Shelved as:
gormenghast-peake
March 20, 2024
– Shelved as:
series-and-sequels
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I love it when a new friend introduces me to a new book.

I'm enthusiastic about all Mervyn's books, so I think you're probably referring to the memoirs of his son, Sebastian, which I read shortly before you posted your comment here (http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...). On the other hand, those by his wife (http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...) and daughter (http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...) are excellent.

(I'm currently rereading the Titus books, so will update all my reviews when I've finished.)





I think there are a few current, blockbuster, authors who might benefit from appreciating the blue pencil of others.


(As you probably noticed, this review has a few quotes, but there are more in the second last link.)

(As you probably noticed, this review has a few quotes, bu..."
Yes , this is an excellent selection of quotes . I saw also you added links to your next reviews from Gormenghast . Will visit them when complete reading trilogy .

Gormenghast is very similar to this, but be prepared for something utterly different with Titus Alone.




As for the main narrative... there isn't much. Let yourself be swamped in the purple prose.

Thanks, Sud. It's in a class of its own. I hope that if you read it, it's a class you love.

Comparisons to Dickens and Kafka have even encouraged me to add this one.

Comparisons to Dickens and Kafka have even encouraged me to add this one."
Thanks, Kevin. I'd be fascinated to see what you make of Peake. It's not magical realism (which I know you like), but it's not entirely realistic either. For me, it's all about the language and thus the total immersion in this strange place.

Thanks, Sud. It's in a class of its own. I hope that if you read it, it's a class you love."
I appreciate great or original works (art, literature, music) so if the books meets the review's lofty descriptions then I am sure it will be an unmitigated pleasure :)

I think even those who didn't enjoy this book would acknowledge its greatness and originality. I hope that unmitigated pleasure from Peake's pen is soon yours.

Thank you, Ryan.
(Just a shame I don't know how to write an actual book.)

I hear that, but like you, I don't believe it. You can hone things with practice, but you need a degree of basic talent and, most importantly, an idea, and a passion to put it across.
Also, "Everyone has a book in them", but that doesn't necessarily mean it should be published.

Still, I think there can be no doubt that you are a talented writer, Cecily. And I am sure you are full of ideas. I dont know what the magic ingredient is - perhaps an ability to play around, and just write a scene, without expecting any outcome....

Well, it is a very particular, peculiar sort of book. Much as I love it, I understand why others don't. I want to sing its praises and raise its profile, but I don't want to struggle and be disappointed or feel bad about not liking it.
Mark wrote: "Still, I think there can be no doubt that you are a talented writer, Cecily. And I am sure you are full of ideas. I don't know what the magic ingredient is - perhaps an ability to play around, and just write a scene, without expecting any outcome...."
You're so kind. Thank you so much for the vote of confidence, but don't hold your breath. I do occasionally toy with the idea of writing properly, but the ideas I have are not that good (and some are too obviously inspired by people I know!). More fundamentally, I think a good writer needs a vision and a passion for their message, and I certainly don't have that. But maybe one day... in retirement, perhaps.

Mark, I was the same, I just could not get through it. Then I listened to the audiobook, narrated by Robert Whitfield, and it was a revelation. It forced me to slow down and enjoy the richness of the language, rather than try to forge through (as I then realised I had been doing) to discover the plot. I'd strongly urge you to give the audiobook a try.

Joking aside, thanks for that tip. I always wanted to love this book and I'll give that a go!

And ... I was in my reverie. I wrote this up there and then on my mobile - just a short paragraph capturing my impressions. I do that all the time. It's certainly fun. Whether it is any good nobody knows... But I am just doing it for myself, like I am listening to a piece of music for myself, with no expectation of any feedback.
The ability to do something completely useless and unproductive (daydreaming) is innate in my case... :-) But maybe you can allow it to happen in your own life? Apologies if this sounds as if I am suggesting what you should do - this is of course not what I meant. Just sharing an idea about what goes on in my mind when I write bits and pieces.

Thank you, Campbell, and I'm pleased to see 5* by your name.
Campbell wrote: "Mark, I was the same, I just could not get through it. Then I listened to the audiobook... It forced me to slow down and enjoy the richness of the language..."
I'd never considered that aspect of audiobooks. They don't work for me (my mind wanders unless I have something to hold and look at), but it's good to understand why they do work so well for other.
Campbell wrote: "... I had made my peace with the book and now you come along and offer me an alternative way in. Thanks for destroying my life, mate...."
LOL. Good luck, Mark, whether you go for it or not.

And ... I was in my reverie. I wrote this up there and then on my mobile....
The ability to do something completely useless and unproductive (daydreaming) is innate in my case... :-)"
Some interesting ideas there (and friendly suggestions - as opposed to dictats - are welcome). Now you mention it, I have occasionally begun to do something a bit like that. Perhaps I'll make more of a deliberate effort. Thank you so much for the encouragement.

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Don't worry, Greg, I don't blame you. It's a pretty odd list for many reasons: the absence of Peake (who is sadly neglected in general, let alone overseas) is only one.

"It is usually classed as fantasy, but it is more like historical fiction"
Actually, to sell it to me you'd have to switch the two genres around in the above sentence! Ah, but you can sell ice to Eskimos anyway, and I'm in a hot country.
I know China M is a fan, Gaiman swears by it as well.
I don't think Stephenie Meyer is into it, though.
Donald T also hasn't read it.

LOL, and I have no idea, not being down wiv da kidz myself.
Apatt wrote: "I know China M is a fan, Gaiman swears by it as well. ...
I don't think Stephenie Meyer is into it, though.
Donald T also hasn't read it."
It was hearing Mieville talk passionately about Peake that made me give Mieville a second chance (and I'm glad I did).
Gaiman makes sense.
Stephanie who? ;)
Are you propagating the line that he's barely able to read, or just the idea that he has no inclination to read anything of worth?


I'm happy to meet a fellow fan. A friend has just started a new group. You might want to check it out (I haven't really done so yet):
/group/show/...
Louisa wrote: "Radio 4 Extra produced an excellent play which can be downloaded from ITunes x Thank you for this review :) "
And thank you for that.