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Spin (Spin, #1)
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Following the resounding success of my Locus Quest, I faced a dilemma: which reading list to follow it up with? Variety is the spice of life, so I’ve decided to diversify and pursue six different lists simultaneously. This book falls into my HUGO WINNERS list.
This is the reading list that follows the old adage, "if it ain't broke, don't fix it". I loved reading the Locus Sci-Fi Award winners so I'm going to crack on with the Hugo winners next (but only the post-1980 winners, I'll follow up with pre-1980 another time).
Spin was my first meeting with Robert Charles Wilson and I came away impressed and disappointed in equal measure.
Glowing reviews from Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ members had raised the bar of expectation... too far.
Let’s start with the good: the premise is excellent, a really original and compelling idea. What would happen if one night the stars just went out? Some hypothetical alien race (or God?) has wrapped the Earth in a bubble, a membrane � an event, christened by us Earthlings as the Spin. The membrane is sophisticated, it allows sunlight through to enable our biosphere to survive and it allows us to send probes, etc, out to investigate its nature. But it doesn’t take long to realise that the bubble is messing with time � it’s flowing a lot faster outside the bubble than inside... like a million times faster.
Some hypothetical alien race (or God?) has put Earth on slow-mo, like a museum exhibit, while the universe grows old around it.
I think that’s an amazing idea! It throws up so many questions and I’ve never read anything like it before. So from pure premise, we’re at a 5-star start.
So next we need our human lens on this story � if it was put to me, I’d have probably suggested multiple protagonists spread around key countries, to give a sense of the varied reactions and consequences to this global predicament, with a matter-of-fact tone, in the style of Robinson’s Mars trilogy.
Wilson prefers to keep the lens a little tighter � he focuses on one family, specifically twin boy-girl siblings who are teenagers at the time of the Spin. The boy, Jason is a physics genius destined for great things � and their father is a big player in the American aerospace industry. So Jason grows up as one of the key thinkers in the human reaction, a leader in the fight. His sister, Diane, takes the opposite path � throwing herself into the religious reaction, apocalypse is coming, etc. Good idea, very interesting to see the different stages of that journey. Again, if we’re talking concepts, with an editor hat on � so far, so good � I can see this all working.
And then... and then Wilson takes an additional step which I didn’t understand and didn’t like. He brings in an additional character as the narrator. Dr Tyler Dupree. Tyler is the son of Jason and Dianne’s housekeeper. He lives in the cottage on the corner of their estate. He’s their friend as they grow-up. He’s a decent, smart, everyman. He’s been placed in the story to give readers an easy ride, to give them someone they can relate to and experience this madcap world with. He’s supposed to ground the story. Where Jason and Dianne represent the extremes, Tyler is just a normal guy trying to make the best out of things and muddle along.
I hated Tyler. No, wait, hate is too strong a word. I was bored by Tyler. I pitied Tyler. Tyler is nothing to this story... Jason is a world changer, and Tyler is his tag-along buddy. Dianne is an emotional rollercoaster and Tyler is her childhood sweetheart. Tyler himself is an emotional vacuum, paralysed by circumstances outside of his control playing it safe every step of the way.
For me, this story would have been far more dramatic, tense, emotional, vivid, gripping � all the good things I look for in a story � without Tyler. Why couldn’t we just follow Jason and Dianne first-hand, rather than hearing a reduced and diluted version of their tales through wet-rag Tyler? We could have been seeing the life that inspired Jason’s schemes (and those schemes are brilliant!) rather than the every day tedium that is Tyler.
I’m going to quote the book and Paul’s review here � because he nailed it:
After this I read: A Squash and a Squeeze
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Clouds's review
bookshelves: hugo, read-in-2013, science-fiction, science-fiction-stand-alone, reviewed, pub-2000s
Jun 16, 2012
bookshelves: hugo, read-in-2013, science-fiction, science-fiction-stand-alone, reviewed, pub-2000s
Following the resounding success of my Locus Quest, I faced a dilemma: which reading list to follow it up with? Variety is the spice of life, so I’ve decided to diversify and pursue six different lists simultaneously. This book falls into my HUGO WINNERS list.
This is the reading list that follows the old adage, "if it ain't broke, don't fix it". I loved reading the Locus Sci-Fi Award winners so I'm going to crack on with the Hugo winners next (but only the post-1980 winners, I'll follow up with pre-1980 another time).
Spin was my first meeting with Robert Charles Wilson and I came away impressed and disappointed in equal measure.
Glowing reviews from Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ members had raised the bar of expectation... too far.
Let’s start with the good: the premise is excellent, a really original and compelling idea. What would happen if one night the stars just went out? Some hypothetical alien race (or God?) has wrapped the Earth in a bubble, a membrane � an event, christened by us Earthlings as the Spin. The membrane is sophisticated, it allows sunlight through to enable our biosphere to survive and it allows us to send probes, etc, out to investigate its nature. But it doesn’t take long to realise that the bubble is messing with time � it’s flowing a lot faster outside the bubble than inside... like a million times faster.
Some hypothetical alien race (or God?) has put Earth on slow-mo, like a museum exhibit, while the universe grows old around it.
I think that’s an amazing idea! It throws up so many questions and I’ve never read anything like it before. So from pure premise, we’re at a 5-star start.
So next we need our human lens on this story � if it was put to me, I’d have probably suggested multiple protagonists spread around key countries, to give a sense of the varied reactions and consequences to this global predicament, with a matter-of-fact tone, in the style of Robinson’s Mars trilogy.
Wilson prefers to keep the lens a little tighter � he focuses on one family, specifically twin boy-girl siblings who are teenagers at the time of the Spin. The boy, Jason is a physics genius destined for great things � and their father is a big player in the American aerospace industry. So Jason grows up as one of the key thinkers in the human reaction, a leader in the fight. His sister, Diane, takes the opposite path � throwing herself into the religious reaction, apocalypse is coming, etc. Good idea, very interesting to see the different stages of that journey. Again, if we’re talking concepts, with an editor hat on � so far, so good � I can see this all working.
And then... and then Wilson takes an additional step which I didn’t understand and didn’t like. He brings in an additional character as the narrator. Dr Tyler Dupree. Tyler is the son of Jason and Dianne’s housekeeper. He lives in the cottage on the corner of their estate. He’s their friend as they grow-up. He’s a decent, smart, everyman. He’s been placed in the story to give readers an easy ride, to give them someone they can relate to and experience this madcap world with. He’s supposed to ground the story. Where Jason and Dianne represent the extremes, Tyler is just a normal guy trying to make the best out of things and muddle along.
I hated Tyler. No, wait, hate is too strong a word. I was bored by Tyler. I pitied Tyler. Tyler is nothing to this story... Jason is a world changer, and Tyler is his tag-along buddy. Dianne is an emotional rollercoaster and Tyler is her childhood sweetheart. Tyler himself is an emotional vacuum, paralysed by circumstances outside of his control playing it safe every step of the way.
For me, this story would have been far more dramatic, tense, emotional, vivid, gripping � all the good things I look for in a story � without Tyler. Why couldn’t we just follow Jason and Dianne first-hand, rather than hearing a reduced and diluted version of their tales through wet-rag Tyler? We could have been seeing the life that inspired Jason’s schemes (and those schemes are brilliant!) rather than the every day tedium that is Tyler.
I’m going to quote the book and Paul’s review here � because he nailed it:
The day I left Perihelion the support staff summoned me into one of the now seldom-used boardrooms for a farewell party, where I was given the kind of gifts appropriate to yet another departure from a dwindling workforce : a miniature cactus in a terracotta pot, a coffee mug with my name on it, a pewter tie pin in the shape of a caduceus.So I’m not alone with my gripe here, even if I’m swimming against the tide. A lot of people found the Tyler-device to be stonking success � it helped non-sci-fi geeks to get a handle on this very human, very accessible story. I can see that � I can � but I’m not that reader. I am the sci-fi-geek, and I found it unnecessary and irritating. Far too much drivel amidst the gems for anything more than a three-star rating, and far too many gems amongst the drivel for anything less.
Yeah right so the world is about to end and there are millenial cults trashing the place which the woman he loves has married into one of them and his friend the genius has a grim disease and there's this stuff about a man from Mars but let's suspend all that and get the pot, the mug and the tiepin down, don't want to let that stuff go by unrecorded. Yeah they're little human touches amongst the catastrophes but let me tell you, Robert Charles Wilson, the pot, the mug and the tiepin are boring and if I may say so, so is your protagonist, a guy you'd rather jab needles into your sinuses than share a railway journey with, Doctor Humourless Dullard should be his name, not Tyler Dupree, which sounds like a guy who made two blues records for Paramount in 1928, but anyway, I'm straying from the point - what was the point?
After this I read: A Squash and a Squeeze
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Reading Progress
June 16, 2012
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June 16, 2012
– Shelved as:
hugo
August 12, 2013
– Shelved as:
to-read
November 25, 2013
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Started Reading
November 25, 2013
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6.55%
"Good concept, wistful execution, shall be interesting to see how it grows on me. Read some mixed reviews but willing to give it every chance to impress :-)"
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30
November 26, 2013
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18.78%
"There's something about the lens used which feels very familiar... narrator is an everyman watching genius twins take opposite scientific/religious response to apocalypse event/thread.
I can't quite place it though..."
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86
I can't quite place it though..."
November 27, 2013
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28.38%
"Great concept, well written, wistful tone... but the page-to-page story isn't gripping me all that hard. Very put-down-able."
page
130
December 3, 2013
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47.82%
"I'm still on the fence with this one... very solid writing and interesting ideas, but lacking any real pace/urgency/passion/immediacy, etc. Feels flat. Distanced."
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219
December 5, 2013
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64.41%
"The narrator, Tyler, is accused by his ex-girlfriend of being dispassionate and cold... which kind of sums up my problems with the storytelling.
Nothing of real note happens to Tyler directly (so far), and I can't help wondering if the story wouldn't have been richer telling the tales of Diane & Jason (the genius twins who Tyler orbits) directly, rather than secondhand."
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295
Nothing of real note happens to Tyler directly (so far), and I can't help wondering if the story wouldn't have been richer telling the tales of Diane & Jason (the genius twins who Tyler orbits) directly, rather than secondhand."
December 9, 2013
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79.69%
"Best chapter ending so far - a bit of genuine action:
"Tyler, there are some troublesome things happening at the ranch. You can't just walk in here."
Troublesome things? "I thought a new world was being born."
"Born in blood," Simon said. "
page
365
"Tyler, there are some troublesome things happening at the ranch. You can't just walk in here."
Troublesome things? "I thought a new world was being born."
"Born in blood," Simon said. "
December 10, 2013
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90.83%
"At last we reach the big reveal... and he's got diamonds growing in his eyes..."
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416
December 11, 2013
– Shelved as:
read-in-2013
December 11, 2013
– Shelved as:
science-fiction
December 11, 2013
– Shelved as:
science-fiction-stand-alone
December 11, 2013
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Finished Reading
January 1, 2014
– Shelved as:
reviewed
February 8, 2014
– Shelved as:
pub-2000s
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Interesting comment. Thanks.

I appear to already have a copy on my Kindle somewhere too, so no doubt I'll get around to reading it eventually. Once you've written your review, I'll have to remember to come back and see how closely we agree...


Thanks for the note... Interesting to see how closely your's and Paul's reviews agreed; neither of you are inspiring me to run off and devour my copy. I'm not sure that I entirely agree with the idea that books need to be de-SFed to speak to 'mainstream' readers anyway. SF books are still about characters and events just like any other. Louise frequently tells me that she doesn't like books "set in space", but that seems just as weird to me as saying you don't like books set in Switzerland, or indoors, or that feature a character with a dog...



No... Pretty sure this is a review... Includes commentary on premise, plot, character and narrative devices. If it were a diary entry it would include more notes on what I'd had for lunch... (twat)