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The Line (The Line, #1)
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bookshelves: books-that-killed-my-brain, cool-i-dea, series
Apr 21, 2010
bookshelves: books-that-killed-my-brain, cool-i-dea, series
Okay... I did write a review for this book where I said it was worth a read but..... NO IT ISN'T.
*sigh* Now that I've gotten that out of my system....
The writing wasn't very good (needed more emotion) the characters were bland and the main chick.... i REALLY didn't know what her age was.... HOW OLD WAS SHE! Sometimes I thought she was 16... then i was absolutely convinced she was 10.... then maybe around the 17-ish range... It was all just very confusing for my poor little brain....
*sigh* Now that I've gotten that out of my system....
The writing wasn't very good (needed more emotion) the characters were bland and the main chick.... i REALLY didn't know what her age was.... HOW OLD WAS SHE! Sometimes I thought she was 16... then i was absolutely convinced she was 10.... then maybe around the 17-ish range... It was all just very confusing for my poor little brain....
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Quotes April*procrastinator and proud* Liked

“Look, we need to make time, but we also need to be somewhat quiet."
She faced him. "I am being quiet!"
Pathik held a finger up to his lips. "Seriously. Quite. You don't really want to attract a lot of attention out here if you can help it."
Rachel didn't like the sound of that. "Are there sheep-cats?”
― The Line
She faced him. "I am being quiet!"
Pathik held a finger up to his lips. "Seriously. Quite. You don't really want to attract a lot of attention out here if you can help it."
Rachel didn't like the sound of that. "Are there sheep-cats?”
― The Line

“That's your mom, right?" Pathik smiled. "She looks nicer than she did when she was dragging you away the other night.”
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― The Line

“Rachel had decided he WAS handsome during their hike to the camp. Though the way he kept telling her to speak more quietly or to look where she was going was annoying. By the time they finally got there, she was beginning to think his looks were his only good attribute.”
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― The Line
Reading Progress
April 21, 2010
– Shelved
May 4, 2010
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Started Reading
May 29, 2010
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Finished Reading
May 31, 2011
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books-that-killed-my-brain
May 31, 2011
– Shelved as:
cool-i-dea
May 31, 2011
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May 11, 2010 02:16PM

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it's alright, i haven;t gotten very far i got distracted, lol im only on like chapter 5 but i still dont know how old the girl is... sometimes i think she's 10 but then they start talking about colledge and im like...16/17..?? and the writing style is kinda 5th grade level but the story's neat.
