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Another over priced car and another cliche...

Here's my stance on love triangles. I like them when they work. They don't work here. More to come on that in the review.

Stop copying and pasting full poems onto your manuscript. Your book is already twice as long as it should be.

Well, it seems like someone had lots of practice writing parseltongue. God, why does everything about this book scream fan fic when it wasn't.

Dreams about future babies, who does that sound like?

No, this is just too much.

Note to self: research the brown bear's range.

Let's start off the second half of the book how anyone and their momma can climb Mount Everest. Forget the fact it takes many of the best mountaineers years and years to do such a feat. If your name is Kelsey....well, you're special.

Please let this be the halfway mark....

And we're in Dora Explorer mode (your too stupid to understand this) mode again. Today, kids we learned the word brackish. Never mind the fact that there were obvious context clues...