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How did he get her there without her knowing!? Presumably, they would have had to fly. Suspension of disbelief.

OK, I will admit that books that change POV in the epilogue often don't work! However, I really had hoped that I would get to see some Aiden POV in the epilogue! That was probably a false hope.

Ugh! You're gonna give me more mysterious Aiden in the epilogue!? "The top five experiences of his life" and we're not going to find out what those experiences are other than winning the championship!?

New epilogue one: we are getting a news story right after the marathon? What? The next new epilogue better be better!

The male narrator is pretty incompetent when it comes to child voices! They just sound like men making absurd statements in baby talk!

It's sad that we get an epilogue years in the future where Vanessa still blames herself for others' crap. She really could use some therapy to know she doesn't owe her absentee/abusive mother ANYTHING and the relationship being broken is NOT her fault.

"Nothing between [my mom and me] had really improved. I was well aware that was my fault".

Kristina!! "His penis twitched".

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No BC used. Yes, they're married, but they haven't had discussions about kids or STDs. He's been celibate for a while but how long for her?

Oh. And sexy time used to be at 98%, but now it's at 96%. Still doesn't seem to leave much room for the "extra material".

Awwwww. Aiden finally uses his words. Tho he could also use some help using more words and being brave himself. Instead, he waits until she tells him she loves him before he's brave enough. And even then, it takes Vanessa asking him point blank "Do you love me?" for him to answer. And even then, he makes her work for it.

And yet... I still love him. And think they'll work things out.