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While I'm reading a book, I'm often aware that my perception of time gets a little warped because story time can run much faster than the time it takes to read it. This imbalance can leave me a bit disoriented when I lay the book down and adjust to the fact that it's still the same day as when I began reading though years may have gone by for the characters among whom I've spent the last hour or two.
While reading this book on the other hand, real time passed much faster than story time. And story time moved so very slowly that my reading pace slowed down too; I'd frequently realise that I'd been on the same page for a long time, that I was in a sort of suspended mode, not reading, hardly thinking, quite numbed. The image of a Salvador Dali painting came to mind several times while in that suspended mode, the one where the clocks, all stopped at a particular moment in time, are slowly melting away.

It is not only Dali's warped clocks that reflect my experience with this book, it is also the title of his painting: The Persistence of Memory. The narrative voice is obstinately persistent, and 'remembering' is its obsession. I say 'narrative voice' rather than narrative voices because, although there is a chorus of voices, they all sound the same. They sound the same because they are mediated to the reader for the most part through the voice of the narrator. She reports what they say. When they are allowed to speak directly, it is very refreshing, and if, as on a few occasions, the narrator gives the reader a little view of them as they speak, it's like manna in the desert:
Yet it is not what I feel myself,� Angeliki said, rearranging the lovely grey tissue of her sleeves.
That little detail about the sleeves showed me the character for the first time when her long long story, reported by the narrator, had failed to make her real for me.
The persistently relentless telling that makes up so much of this book mostly concerns one theme: fractured relationships and broken marriages. In all of the stories related to this theme, there is a defining moment, as if each character's personal clock had stopped at just that moment. Years may have passed but they remain obsessed with remembering the incident, and seem to have an endless need to talk about it, a compulsion verging on lunacy. And the irony is that it is the lucidity of the narrator’s probing questions that prompts the outburst of lunacy every time.
Lucidity and lunacy. That pairing of words which sound similar while being very different, echoes the wordplay the author uses to mark the beginning and end of this otherwise serious narrative. In the early pages, a character mistakenly uses the word prolixity for proximity. His slip-up is funny because it is already clear to the reader that he is going to be tediously long-winded. At the end of the book the same character uses the word solicitude when he means solitude. That brings in a little humour again because this character has in fact been maddeningly over solicitous during the course of the book, a behaviour which causes his solitude in the end. Neat.
The conch shell on the cover is neat too. Like a human ear. Relentlessly listening...
While reading this book on the other hand, real time passed much faster than story time. And story time moved so very slowly that my reading pace slowed down too; I'd frequently realise that I'd been on the same page for a long time, that I was in a sort of suspended mode, not reading, hardly thinking, quite numbed. The image of a Salvador Dali painting came to mind several times while in that suspended mode, the one where the clocks, all stopped at a particular moment in time, are slowly melting away.

It is not only Dali's warped clocks that reflect my experience with this book, it is also the title of his painting: The Persistence of Memory. The narrative voice is obstinately persistent, and 'remembering' is its obsession. I say 'narrative voice' rather than narrative voices because, although there is a chorus of voices, they all sound the same. They sound the same because they are mediated to the reader for the most part through the voice of the narrator. She reports what they say. When they are allowed to speak directly, it is very refreshing, and if, as on a few occasions, the narrator gives the reader a little view of them as they speak, it's like manna in the desert:
Yet it is not what I feel myself,� Angeliki said, rearranging the lovely grey tissue of her sleeves.
That little detail about the sleeves showed me the character for the first time when her long long story, reported by the narrator, had failed to make her real for me.
The persistently relentless telling that makes up so much of this book mostly concerns one theme: fractured relationships and broken marriages. In all of the stories related to this theme, there is a defining moment, as if each character's personal clock had stopped at just that moment. Years may have passed but they remain obsessed with remembering the incident, and seem to have an endless need to talk about it, a compulsion verging on lunacy. And the irony is that it is the lucidity of the narrator’s probing questions that prompts the outburst of lunacy every time.
Lucidity and lunacy. That pairing of words which sound similar while being very different, echoes the wordplay the author uses to mark the beginning and end of this otherwise serious narrative. In the early pages, a character mistakenly uses the word prolixity for proximity. His slip-up is funny because it is already clear to the reader that he is going to be tediously long-winded. At the end of the book the same character uses the word solicitude when he means solitude. That brings in a little humour again because this character has in fact been maddeningly over solicitous during the course of the book, a behaviour which causes his solitude in the end. Neat.
The conch shell on the cover is neat too. Like a human ear. Relentlessly listening...
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Yes, you're right, Clodia, she comes into better focus towards the end, and isn't it interesting that it is through the mirror of Annie that we get a clear view of Faye. I liked that. There were things I liked, definitely, but I found it tedious for long sections, and I wondered about the author's decision to build the narrative the way she did, using the device of 'reported speech' to quite an extravagant degree.
Oh, and I wondered if she might be getting back at all those creative writing teachers who go on and on about 'showing' instead of 'telling'.

Alabaster!
I have a memory myself about the word alabaster! I'll get back to you with it!



Another subliminally sublime review, Fionnuala.

I can see how this book could serve as a bridge between reading for work and reading for pleasure, Vipassana. The lack of any real plot, plus the reflective quality of the various testimonies make it seem like a documentary, a researcher's dream of a documentary even, one in which all of the subjects are super articulate.
Here's hoping you get a chance to read a lot more in 2019.


Which would make her a dolly bird ;-)

How we choose to review a book has to be some measure of its quality, I suppose--a reflective review implying that the book has enough substance to make the reader think.
And while I was impatient with the 'prolixity' of the chorus of voices here, it's true that I was already thinking about how I'd review the book long before I'd finished it, which means it inspired me in some way.
By the end though, I was really tired of the amount of marriage break-up stories, and I'm glad to report that in Transit, which I'm currently reading, the author seems to have moved on from that theme.



Although I've harped on about the tediousness of certain aspects of this project, Caterina, I'm glad to have read it for myself, and I've even started the second book which is confirming something I suspected: that Cusk is not trying to be reader friendly, and that it is ok for me to have a negative reaction while reading, that this is my role in her project.
So I think I'm saying, why don't you see if there's a role here for you too...


I think I will have a keen interest in reviews of this book in the future, Ilse, curious to hear other readers' responses—yours, for instance, if you should choose to read it. And I'm eager to know how Rachel Cusk will knit her trilogy together, and what significance the broken relationships and the defining moments will have in the end, if any.

Glad I could convey something about this book's structure and style, Cheryl, because I was less than sure I grasped it all myself. To a certain extent, the structure follows the time-worn model of a book of stories within stories, such as The Canterbury Tales, for example. But the narrator is a writer who teaches writing, and what she creates doesn't fit easily inside any recognizable frame in spite of the title. If there's an outline here, it's very blurred.


Oh, yes, I will. Thank you, Fionnuala.

You know, the more I think about it, Jaline, the more I think the author did want me to focus on arrested moments in time and warped experiences. I think she placed that Dalí right before my eyes. As I read the second book, I feel her influence even more...

Oh, yes, I will. Thank you, Fionnuala."
I look forward to reading your take on it, Caterina.

And it was hard to resist given the amount of coverage it's received, Magdelanye. But I am glad I read it because it led me to the second book in which the technique of obsessive recounting is expanded in more interesting directions.

Delighted to entertain, Marita. That Dalí painting just fitted my reading experience so well!

I meant the third book.
:)
By the way, the Dalí suits the title in the Ferrante.

Oh, yes, there will be echoes of DoA for you in this book, Kall. And you're right about the Dalí � Ferrante's Olga was quite stuck in time, and so alone.

Keep us posted about your reaction if you find time...






I can see this book would be a good read for me.



Sometimes I think I measure out my life, not in coffee spoons, but in books reviewed :-)

Writers - it's v interesting to try and analyse the tools and how they use them.

Indeed, Laura, when I stop to think about it, some of the books I consider high points in my reading life have been almost entirely 'tell'. Tristram Shandy and The Adventures and Misadventures of Maqroll, for example. Or Thomas Bernard's Correction, or Gerald Murnane's The Plains.
I think it is the attempt to 'teach' creative writing that has introduced the issue of 'show' versus 'tell'. Writers who know what they are doing know how to 'tell' well.

And 'teach' creative writing - most writers learn and learn and learn by doing.
Impressive list of writers - Thomas Bernard, and Gerald Murnane are 'new'. Thanks - love it when I have friends in agreement with me!

I'm glad 'Outline' turned out to be a hit with you, David. It's a book that walks a fine line between seducing its readers and alienating them. I wobbled between the two extremes but ended up completely seduced!


He was a sad case, Jim. I was a bit surprised at the narrator's surprise that he might want to get romantically involved. When someone asks you out repeatedly, after all...


Oh, I think you already got a lot out of it! I just read your review.

So nice to get your comment, Deea. I always associate those shells with ears. There was one in my mother's china cabinet which we were told as children would allow us to hear the ocean's roar. It seemed very magical to me that it really did!