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Outline by Rachel Cusk
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While I'm reading a book, I'm often aware that my perception of time gets a little warped because story time can run much faster than the time it takes to read it. This imbalance can leave me a bit disoriented when I lay the book down and adjust to the fact that it's still the same day as when I began reading though years may have gone by for the characters among whom I've spent the last hour or two.

While reading this book on the other hand, real time passed much faster than story time. And story time moved so very slowly that my reading pace slowed down too; I'd frequently realise that I'd been on the same page for a long time, that I was in a sort of suspended mode, not reading, hardly thinking, quite numbed. The image of a Salvador Dali painting came to mind several times while in that suspended mode, the one where the clocks, all stopped at a particular moment in time, are slowly melting away.



It is not only Dali's warped clocks that reflect my experience with this book, it is also the title of his painting: The Persistence of Memory. The narrative voice is obstinately persistent, and 'remembering' is its obsession. I say 'narrative voice' rather than narrative voices because, although there is a chorus of voices, they all sound the same. They sound the same because they are mediated to the reader for the most part through the voice of the narrator. She reports what they say. When they are allowed to speak directly, it is very refreshing, and if, as on a few occasions, the narrator gives the reader a little view of them as they speak, it's like manna in the desert:
Yet it is not what I feel myself,� Angeliki said, rearranging the lovely grey tissue of her sleeves.
That little detail about the sleeves showed me the character for the first time when her long long story, reported by the narrator, had failed to make her real for me.

The persistently relentless telling that makes up so much of this book mostly concerns one theme: fractured relationships and broken marriages. In all of the stories related to this theme, there is a defining moment, as if each character's personal clock had stopped at just that moment. Years may have passed but they remain obsessed with remembering the incident, and seem to have an endless need to talk about it, a compulsion verging on lunacy. And the irony is that it is the lucidity of the narrator’s probing questions that prompts the outburst of lunacy every time.

Lucidity and lunacy. That pairing of words which sound similar while being very different, echoes the wordplay the author uses to mark the beginning and end of this otherwise serious narrative. In the early pages, a character mistakenly uses the word prolixity for proximity. His slip-up is funny because it is already clear to the reader that he is going to be tediously long-winded. At the end of the book the same character uses the word solicitude when he means solitude. That brings in a little humour again because this character has in fact been maddeningly over solicitous during the course of the book, a behaviour which causes his solitude in the end. Neat.

The conch shell on the cover is neat too. Like a human ear. Relentlessly listening...
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January 10, 2019 – Started Reading
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January 16, 2019 – Finished Reading

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Roman Clodia I love your image of Dali's warped clocks as a visual summary of this book - wonderfully astute! The narrator does develop, though, I thought, as she slowly comes into focus.


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Tony I once described a doll as having an albacore face.


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Fionnuala Roman Clodia wrote: "I love your image of Dali's warped clocks as a visual summary of this book - wonderfully astute! The narrator does develop, though, I thought, as she slowly comes into focus."

Yes, you're right, Clodia, she comes into better focus towards the end, and isn't it interesting that it is through the mirror of Annie that we get a clear view of Faye. I liked that. There were things I liked, definitely, but I found it tedious for long sections, and I wondered about the author's decision to build the narrative the way she did, using the device of 'reported speech' to quite an extravagant degree.
Oh, and I wondered if she might be getting back at all those creative writing teachers who go on and on about 'showing' instead of 'telling'.


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Fionnuala Tony wrote: "I once described a doll as having an albacore face."

Alabaster!
I have a memory myself about the word alabaster! I'll get back to you with it!


Jimmy lovely review Fi, are you gonna read Transit?


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Fionnuala I'm reading it now, Jimmy, because I bought it when I bought this one, and if I didn't read it now, right away, I think I probably never would. I have the third too...


Vipassana Fio, this is such a beautiful review! The Outline series helped me get back to reading. Partly, because of the effect you mentioned—being suspended on a page. One of the struggles with reading for a while, was that I got too involved in the churning wheels of work, grad school, and the desire to have a similar lifestyle as everyone around me. I’m so glad to once again experience the lucid treasure that is your writing.


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Julie That albacore face sounds a bit fishy to me, Tony and Fionnuala; on the other hand, if she had been given an albatross brow, one could say she was so sublime she had taken to the air.

Another subliminally sublime review, Fionnuala.


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Fionnuala Vipassana wrote: "Fio, this is such a beautiful review! The Outline series helped me get back to reading. Partly, because of the effect you mentioned—being suspended on a page..."

I can see how this book could serve as a bridge between reading for work and reading for pleasure, Vipassana. The lack of any real plot, plus the reflective quality of the various testimonies make it seem like a documentary, a researcher's dream of a documentary even, one in which all of the subjects are super articulate.
Here's hoping you get a chance to read a lot more in 2019.


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Ken Thoughtful review, and when a book makes you reflective like that, it can't help but be a good thing.


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Fionnuala Julie wrote: "That albacore face sounds a bit fishy to me, Tony and Fionnuala; on the other hand, if she had been given an albatross brow, one could say she was so sublime she had taken to the air..."

Which would make her a dolly bird ;-)


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Fionnuala Ken wrote: "Thoughtful review, and when a book makes you reflective like that, it can't help but be a good thing."

How we choose to review a book has to be some measure of its quality, I suppose--a reflective review implying that the book has enough substance to make the reader think.
And while I was impatient with the 'prolixity' of the chorus of voices here, it's true that I was already thinking about how I'd review the book long before I'd finished it, which means it inspired me in some way.
By the end though, I was really tired of the amount of marriage break-up stories, and I'm glad to report that in Transit, which I'm currently reading, the author seems to have moved on from that theme.


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Caterina Your vivid, original review seems to tell me more about this book (languishing on my to-read list) than anything else I’ve read. The Dali clocks, lucidity and lunacy, the time-slowing punctuated by freshness ... and the subtle clever wordplay. I’ve been dragging my feet on starting this one, or rather, other books have called to me & this one hasn’t ...


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Ilse The thoughts you word here on the personal clock of each character stopping at a defining moment and how you experienced narrative time versus reading time and real time sound intriguing, Fionnuala - I look forward to your thoughts on the other two.


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Fionnuala Caterina wrote: "Your vivid, original review seems to tell me more about this book (languishing on my to-read list) than anything else I’ve read..."

Although I've harped on about the tediousness of certain aspects of this project, Caterina, I'm glad to have read it for myself, and I've even started the second book which is confirming something I suspected: that Cusk is not trying to be reader friendly, and that it is ok for me to have a negative reaction while reading, that this is my role in her project.
So I think I'm saying, why don't you see if there's a role here for you too...


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Cheryl What a beautiful review, Fionnuala. I can imagine the book structure and reading space one has to be in. The book’s style seems befitting of the subject.


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Fionnuala Ilse wrote: "The thoughts you word here on the personal clock of each character stopping at a defining moment and how you experienced narrative time versus reading time and real time sound intriguing, Fionnuala..."

I think I will have a keen interest in reviews of this book in the future, Ilse, curious to hear other readers' responses—yours, for instance, if you should choose to read it. And I'm eager to know how Rachel Cusk will knit her trilogy together, and what significance the broken relationships and the defining moments will have in the end, if any.


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Fionnuala Cheryl wrote: "What a beautiful review, Fionnuala. I can imagine the book structure and reading space one has to be in. The book’s style seems befitting of the subject."

Glad I could convey something about this book's structure and style, Cheryl, because I was less than sure I grasped it all myself. To a certain extent, the structure follows the time-worn model of a book of stories within stories, such as The Canterbury Tales, for example. But the narrator is a writer who teaches writing, and what she creates doesn't fit easily inside any recognizable frame in spite of the title. If there's an outline here, it's very blurred.


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Jaline Fabulous review, Fionnuala, although it's too bad that this novel didn't quite manage to pull your consciousness away from all those melting clocks! 😁


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Caterina Fionnuala wrote: "....So I think I'm saying, why don't you see if there's a role here for you too..."

Oh, yes, I will. Thank you, Fionnuala.


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Fionnuala Jaline wrote: "Fabulous review, Fionnuala, although it's too bad that this novel didn't quite manage to pull your consciousness away from all those melting clocks.."

You know, the more I think about it, Jaline, the more I think the author did want me to focus on arrested moments in time and warped experiences. I think she placed that Dalí right before my eyes. As I read the second book, I feel her influence even more...


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Fionnuala Caterina wrote: "Fionnuala wrote: "....So I think I'm saying, why don't you see if there's a role here for you too..."

Oh, yes, I will. Thank you, Fionnuala."


I look forward to reading your take on it, Caterina.


Magdelanye i knew there was a reason i resisted this book


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Fionnuala Magdelanye wrote: "i knew there was a reason i resisted this book"

And it was hard to resist given the amount of coverage it's received, Magdelanye. But I am glad I read it because it led me to the second book in which the technique of obsessive recounting is expanded in more interesting directions.


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Fionnuala Marita wrote: "Wonderful review, Fionnuala, and well illustrated too."

Delighted to entertain, Marita. That Dalí painting just fitted my reading experience so well!


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Kalliope This sounds like the place to start... and having read recently The Days of Abandonment and just now Duo, it looks like a third may enlighten the theme of broken couples.

I meant the third book.

:)

By the way, the Dalí suits the title in the Ferrante.


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Fionnuala Kalliope wrote: "This sounds like the place to start... and having read recently The Days of Abandonment and just now Duo, it looks like a third may enlighten the theme of broken couples..."

Oh, yes, there will be echoes of DoA for you in this book, Kall. And you're right about the Dalí � Ferrante's Olga was quite stuck in time, and so alone.


Kalliope I have just downloaded this.. and am derailing from my 2019 reading objectives already..!!!


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Fionnuala As long as you don't rail at me later when you find yourself stuck in a siding!
Keep us posted about your reaction if you find time...


David Love that cover. Your thoughts on time are very intriguing. I think that happens to me as well. Dali was very perceptive.


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Fionnuala It seems silly in retrospect, but the covers of this series were partly why I bought the books in the first place, David. I'm easily wowed.
Outline by Rachel Cusk
Transit by Rachel Cusk
Kudos by Rachel Cusk


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Jan-Maat they are attractive covers, such books don't want a shelf, but to be framed and hung up


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Fionnuala Well. I'm working on framing Kudos at the moment � inside a review box.


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Markus Thanks, Fionnuala. You are a hard worker on your reviews, always. Intellectually and emotionally.
I can see this book would be a good read for me.


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Fionnuala Thank you, Markus. I will be very interested to see what you make of this book.


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Ted Such a review, awash in your inner perceptions and marvelous reflections on the narrative. My personal time slows when I read your reviews, Fio.


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Fionnuala Ah, such a fine comment to receive, Ted. I thank you from my heart!


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Lisa There are these moments when I realise time is passing and I see nothing of Fionnuala's reading. Two things are possible: either Fionnuala is not reading, or GR is putting her reviews in a time warp I can't access. Deeper research into the GR tunnel showed me that the more likely case was true: but I tricked the time warp and am now catching up on at least three of your reviews!


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Fionnuala Ah, Lisa, you are a good and faithful reading friend! Thank you for taking time out of your own busy reading/reviewing life to pop over to mine. And yes, I've been busy as usual, reading, and writing about reading. And, particularly in Cusk's case, writing about writing.
Sometimes I think I measure out my life, not in coffee spoons, but in books reviewed :-)


message 40: by Laura (last edited Aug 23, 2019 03:01PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Laura I like your comment, that she is not "reader friendly" - and the other points about "telling" in reaction to creative writing programs emphasizing "show". It is her point - I would guess, because I've often considered that telling in some instances is both vital and necessary - telling summarises and moves the plot along nicely - it skims, shortens and balances well with more in-depth "show" sections. I think also a desire to define her work as literary and elegant and a decided cut above - popular fiction.
Writers - it's v interesting to try and analyse the tools and how they use them.


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Fionnuala Laura wrote: "I like your comment, that she is not "reader friendly" - and the other points about "telling" in reaction to creative writing programs emphasizing "show". It is her point - I would guess, because I've often considered that telling in some instances is both vital and necessary..."

Indeed, Laura, when I stop to think about it, some of the books I consider high points in my reading life have been almost entirely 'tell'. Tristram Shandy and The Adventures and Misadventures of Maqroll, for example. Or Thomas Bernard's Correction, or Gerald Murnane's The Plains.
I think it is the attempt to 'teach' creative writing that has introduced the issue of 'show' versus 'tell'. Writers who know what they are doing know how to 'tell' well.


message 42: by Laura (last edited Aug 24, 2019 04:48AM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Laura Yes, they 'tell' well!
And 'teach' creative writing - most writers learn and learn and learn by doing.
Impressive list of writers - Thomas Bernard, and Gerald Murnane are 'new'. Thanks - love it when I have friends in agreement with me!


David Just read this book and needed to reread your fine review. Very enjoyable.


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Fionnuala David wrote: "Just read this book and needed to reread your fine review. Very enjoyable."

I'm glad 'Outline' turned out to be a hit with you, David. It's a book that walks a fine line between seducing its readers and alienating them. I wobbled between the two extremes but ended up completely seduced!


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JimZ Ah, what a clever comment of yours at the end. He was stuck in solitude...her description of him earlier was unforgiving too.


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Fionnuala JimZ wrote: "Ah, what a clever comment of yours at the end. He was stuck in solitude...her description of him earlier was unforgiving too."

He was a sad case, Jim. I was a bit surprised at the narrator's surprise that he might want to get romantically involved. When someone asks you out repeatedly, after all...


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Knut Seip prolixity for proximity. I was guessing there was more to the novel than I got while reading- Thank you


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Fionnuala Knut wrote: "prolixity for proximity. I was guessing there was more to the novel than I got while reading- Thank you"

Oh, I think you already got a lot out of it! I just read your review.


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Deea Very good review... and I loved the final line.


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Fionnuala Deea wrote: "Very good review... and I loved the final line."

So nice to get your comment, Deea. I always associate those shells with ears. There was one in my mother's china cabinet which we were told as children would allow us to hear the ocean's roar. It seemed very magical to me that it really did!


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