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Breaking Dawn (The Twilight Saga, #4)
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Reviewer update Aug 2009: I have demoted the book from 5 to 4 stars. My confession/explanation is at the end of the original, unedited review.
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Yes, I gave it 5-stars. This is partly because I was so pleased by it compared to the last two books in the series that I overreacted. But I also approve of her approach to the book and have rated it so highly in order to counteract those reviewers out there who hated it because they felt Bella was a bad example to young girls.
***THESE TWO PARAGRAPHS SPOIL THINGS THAT HAPPEN EARLY IN THE BOOK***
I have a bone to pick with these people. Read some of the reviews on Amazon or GoodReads and you will find a certain type of person who feels that Bella's character fails as a role model for young women today. Why? Because she, gasp, got married and had a child at a young age.
Oh, my, what is the world coming to when young people choose eternal love and devotion! (Oh that more young women could be more like the implausibly articulate yet utterly selfish lead in the movie Juno!) In my favorite example, one reviewer on Amazon claimed it wasn't credible that a girl as young as Bella would feel joy at sensing a baby growing inside her. "I'm 28 and if I felt something moving in me, I would freak," she said, "I can't believe a 19-year old would be happy about it."
***END OF SPOILAGE***
Sadness ensues. Women and men from every culture in every era of history have found a tremendous and peculiar satisfaction in their children. It doesn't matter where you believe this instinct came from, it's real and it manifests millions of times over. Should we be so surprised that Stephenie Meyer would be one of the billions who believe this love to be real? Read the author's bio and it becomes clear: She was married at 21 before she finished college and had three children while still in her 20s. But one can hardly call her a "failure" for choosing family first. By all standards she's fabulously successful and wealthy. Plus, she has a college degree (one of the big beefs some people had with Bella's choice to postpone college). Are we really surprised that Stephenie would see the world through rose-colored, happiness-prone glasses when her own life is exactly that, deliriously happy?
Social polemics aside for a moment. The one thing this book lacked was a satisfying climactic, apocalyptic battle royale between the forces of vampire good and vampire evil. I know this book was intended to cap off a romance series, not The Lord of the Rings but there's a reason books of high fantasy all end in cataclysmic bloodshed. It takes a conflict of such dramatic proportions to drive the point of a story deep into our minds. And the point of this story, if you weren't too focused on your own family planning to notice it, was worthy of such dramatic punctuation.
The real point of this book is that we can and should choose love. That despite our personal weaknesses and faults -- our immature attempts at love and our petty jealousies -- we can make important, permanent decisions that will tie us to other people, making their lives and our lives better in the process. The battle I propose -- one I hope sees the light of day in a future novel -- would seal Bella's decisions and the decisions of her family and loved ones in a way that would render their commitments real. Their marital love, their parental love, their familial love, and the love of fellowship with others who share their principles.
Some would have to die to preserve the love they have made immortal. Others would have to kill to do the same. Nothing is more final, especially for immortals. But they would do so to symbolize the triumph of their love over the petty dynasty of the Volturi and thus establish a global movement of vampires that respect human life and restrain their selfish hungers in deference to the greater good. Something that wise humans do every day.
Such a symbolic battle would take this series to the next level. But even without it, this book is the best evidence that Meyer wasn't really writing a sloppy romance saga for misty-eyed girls, but was instead telling a story about the eternal power of love and self-denial.
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Update from Aug 2009
I have had some fabulous comments to my review (please read them, most are very intelligent). I have been properly chided by many of these reviews for overreacting to the "Bella is a bad role model" flack and failing to acknowledge the principal flaw of this book. Amy said it best below: Meyer shortchanged us by not forcing Bella to face any hard choices. Bella got everything she wanted, including a (strange) relationship with Jacob. Nobody she loved got hurt -- which was the problem I did mention above -- and she never had to disappoint anyone.
Given that a year has passed, I have some distance on all the whining that went on about Bella not being a protofeminist. As a result, I should own up to the fact that this fourth book fails to deliver not only the climax I hoped for, but the real character crisis and development that a saga of this length should strive for. Or that we all should strive for in our own lives, to go all metaphysical on you for a moment. So I have demoted the book from 5 stars to 4 and begun to ruminate on the topic of why Meyer -- a woman possessed of such clear imagination -- was unwilling or unable to make Bella's life hard. Here's what I have come up with, for what it's worth:
1 - Meyer's own life is pretty darn pleasant. Let's be honest, she has everything most people think they want. All of us who struggle to write books that nobody reads desperately wish for her success (a fact that generates more than few snippy comments on 欧宝娱乐, I might suggest). She has a whole community of women around her who adore her and come to all-night parties when she debuts a book or movie, just to be near her. In the end, she might make Bella after her own image because she doesn't know that life ultimately requires pain.
2 - Meyer is a Mormon. For those not acquainted with the faith, Mormonism is a faith that believes everything will ultimately be okay. If not in this life, then in the next. In fact, the whole vampire immortality gig is just a metaphor for the Mormon idea of the afterlife: You get to be with the ones you love forever, without pain. In that way, Bella is a perfect reflection of the ideal Mormon eternity: God forgives us for our idiocy, acknowledges our flawed attempts at love by magnifying them and making them eternal. Though this is only one side of Mormonism -- it's also a faith with sorrowful history of persecution. Mormons certainly suffer plenty in this life just like everyone else, so this explanation is only true to the extent that Meyer has willingly isolated Mormonism's view of the end state of humanity.
3 - Twilight is just escapist fantasy. This is not only the most obvious but probably the strongest of my three explanations. We're so accustomed to watching James Bond run through the street with machine guns trained on him that never hit their mark that we no longer point out that Bond is completely implausible and ultimately unsatisfying as a character. But we're not used to reading fiction in which women get everything they want. (At least, I'm not.) So we get tied up in knots about the lack of deeper meaning and pathos when in reality, Meyer never promised us a garden of sorrow and personal growth.
So even though I have to demote the book, I still feel like the saga was worth reading; both because of the fun I had teasing about its flaws but also because it gives me fodder for worthwhile introspection. Oh, and it connected me to some great commenters who I now follow on 欧宝娱乐.
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Yes, I gave it 5-stars. This is partly because I was so pleased by it compared to the last two books in the series that I overreacted. But I also approve of her approach to the book and have rated it so highly in order to counteract those reviewers out there who hated it because they felt Bella was a bad example to young girls.
***THESE TWO PARAGRAPHS SPOIL THINGS THAT HAPPEN EARLY IN THE BOOK***
I have a bone to pick with these people. Read some of the reviews on Amazon or GoodReads and you will find a certain type of person who feels that Bella's character fails as a role model for young women today. Why? Because she, gasp, got married and had a child at a young age.
Oh, my, what is the world coming to when young people choose eternal love and devotion! (Oh that more young women could be more like the implausibly articulate yet utterly selfish lead in the movie Juno!) In my favorite example, one reviewer on Amazon claimed it wasn't credible that a girl as young as Bella would feel joy at sensing a baby growing inside her. "I'm 28 and if I felt something moving in me, I would freak," she said, "I can't believe a 19-year old would be happy about it."
***END OF SPOILAGE***
Sadness ensues. Women and men from every culture in every era of history have found a tremendous and peculiar satisfaction in their children. It doesn't matter where you believe this instinct came from, it's real and it manifests millions of times over. Should we be so surprised that Stephenie Meyer would be one of the billions who believe this love to be real? Read the author's bio and it becomes clear: She was married at 21 before she finished college and had three children while still in her 20s. But one can hardly call her a "failure" for choosing family first. By all standards she's fabulously successful and wealthy. Plus, she has a college degree (one of the big beefs some people had with Bella's choice to postpone college). Are we really surprised that Stephenie would see the world through rose-colored, happiness-prone glasses when her own life is exactly that, deliriously happy?
Social polemics aside for a moment. The one thing this book lacked was a satisfying climactic, apocalyptic battle royale between the forces of vampire good and vampire evil. I know this book was intended to cap off a romance series, not The Lord of the Rings but there's a reason books of high fantasy all end in cataclysmic bloodshed. It takes a conflict of such dramatic proportions to drive the point of a story deep into our minds. And the point of this story, if you weren't too focused on your own family planning to notice it, was worthy of such dramatic punctuation.
The real point of this book is that we can and should choose love. That despite our personal weaknesses and faults -- our immature attempts at love and our petty jealousies -- we can make important, permanent decisions that will tie us to other people, making their lives and our lives better in the process. The battle I propose -- one I hope sees the light of day in a future novel -- would seal Bella's decisions and the decisions of her family and loved ones in a way that would render their commitments real. Their marital love, their parental love, their familial love, and the love of fellowship with others who share their principles.
Some would have to die to preserve the love they have made immortal. Others would have to kill to do the same. Nothing is more final, especially for immortals. But they would do so to symbolize the triumph of their love over the petty dynasty of the Volturi and thus establish a global movement of vampires that respect human life and restrain their selfish hungers in deference to the greater good. Something that wise humans do every day.
Such a symbolic battle would take this series to the next level. But even without it, this book is the best evidence that Meyer wasn't really writing a sloppy romance saga for misty-eyed girls, but was instead telling a story about the eternal power of love and self-denial.
___
Update from Aug 2009
I have had some fabulous comments to my review (please read them, most are very intelligent). I have been properly chided by many of these reviews for overreacting to the "Bella is a bad role model" flack and failing to acknowledge the principal flaw of this book. Amy said it best below: Meyer shortchanged us by not forcing Bella to face any hard choices. Bella got everything she wanted, including a (strange) relationship with Jacob. Nobody she loved got hurt -- which was the problem I did mention above -- and she never had to disappoint anyone.
Given that a year has passed, I have some distance on all the whining that went on about Bella not being a protofeminist. As a result, I should own up to the fact that this fourth book fails to deliver not only the climax I hoped for, but the real character crisis and development that a saga of this length should strive for. Or that we all should strive for in our own lives, to go all metaphysical on you for a moment. So I have demoted the book from 5 stars to 4 and begun to ruminate on the topic of why Meyer -- a woman possessed of such clear imagination -- was unwilling or unable to make Bella's life hard. Here's what I have come up with, for what it's worth:
1 - Meyer's own life is pretty darn pleasant. Let's be honest, she has everything most people think they want. All of us who struggle to write books that nobody reads desperately wish for her success (a fact that generates more than few snippy comments on 欧宝娱乐, I might suggest). She has a whole community of women around her who adore her and come to all-night parties when she debuts a book or movie, just to be near her. In the end, she might make Bella after her own image because she doesn't know that life ultimately requires pain.
2 - Meyer is a Mormon. For those not acquainted with the faith, Mormonism is a faith that believes everything will ultimately be okay. If not in this life, then in the next. In fact, the whole vampire immortality gig is just a metaphor for the Mormon idea of the afterlife: You get to be with the ones you love forever, without pain. In that way, Bella is a perfect reflection of the ideal Mormon eternity: God forgives us for our idiocy, acknowledges our flawed attempts at love by magnifying them and making them eternal. Though this is only one side of Mormonism -- it's also a faith with sorrowful history of persecution. Mormons certainly suffer plenty in this life just like everyone else, so this explanation is only true to the extent that Meyer has willingly isolated Mormonism's view of the end state of humanity.
3 - Twilight is just escapist fantasy. This is not only the most obvious but probably the strongest of my three explanations. We're so accustomed to watching James Bond run through the street with machine guns trained on him that never hit their mark that we no longer point out that Bond is completely implausible and ultimately unsatisfying as a character. But we're not used to reading fiction in which women get everything they want. (At least, I'm not.) So we get tied up in knots about the lack of deeper meaning and pathos when in reality, Meyer never promised us a garden of sorrow and personal growth.
So even though I have to demote the book, I still feel like the saga was worth reading; both because of the fun I had teasing about its flaws but also because it gives me fodder for worthwhile introspection. Oh, and it connected me to some great commenters who I now follow on 欧宝娱乐.
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I have met so many feminists who wave their "woman's freedom of choice" flag, claiming equality for all, only to shoot down a girl for wanting a family instead of a huge career. While I am 100% all for equality of the sexes, I can't help but wonder what happened to our freedom of choice. In today's world, it IS possible to have your cake, and eat it too. Women should be allowed that, regardless if it is a career, college, family, or all of the above.
Anyhow. I mostly wanted to compliment you on your articulate and well-written review. I feel you hit everything spot on, and I agree: a dramatic battle would have been good, but under the circumstances, it was a lovely end to a lovely saga.


I would put to you however, that she is bad role model to young women, because she an indecisive, whiny, immature selfish little brat. And the reward she gets for acting this way? EVERYTHING she ever wanted with very little conflict (I'm sorry but that absurdedly long passage with the Volturi barely counts) and no sacrifice.
Also, their "romance" is characerized wrong. I've seen true life long love, and what Bella and Edward have (as described by Ms. Meyers) is more like obsession and lust. Perhaps if Ms. Meyers wrote less about marble lips and smoldering eyes and more about what they acutally feel and know about each other I might read this story differently.
p.s. If you want a "true forever love" read that is actually written well, go for for "Outlander" by Diana Gabaldon.

I will say however, that given my choice, I would rather see my own children wait until they were past the age of 18 to begin a family. However, that may not be everyone's choice, and I for one do not have the right to pass that judgment on them.
And finally, while Meyers may not be a world-class writer, she certainly had more than enough power to suck me into these novels, and I enjoyed them immensely, while still recognizing that the deathless love, eternal devotion and non-ending passion were probably NOT things that most young people were going to encounter in their lives. I think many adults fear that their children, young women in particular, are going to be disappointed when they realize not all of their lives will be spent breathlessly in passionate love with their mate (who by the way can buy them expensive gifts and cars like Ferraris). However, I must also say that there are many of us out here who have been married for many years (like 32?!?) who still find ourselves catching our breath upon occasion when we look at our spouse. If for no other reason than putting forth the idea that a permanent relationship with a permanent love is possible, I enjoyed these works of fiction.


I'd also take this with a grain of salt: I doubt that many teenage girls would consider a fictional girl who dates a vampire to be a valid role model.
And you're right, there needed to be a battle. I can't believe they ended a disagreement with the most dangerous vampires in the world by chatting for a while and throwing a shield. I'm not surprised, however, as it seems like Meyer wimped out of having to describe the big battle scene in Eclipse by having Edward stay with Bella. But the fight scene between Vanessa/Edward/Seth/Riley was pretty good, so it seems like she could have done it if she really tried.
All in all, I agree with you, and this was still a great book. I couldn't put it down, just like all of the others in the series.


I'm not one of those role model worriers, what really bothered me was Nessie. The conflict that was most interesting is to your point: choose love (Edward) or choose children (not Edward/potentially Jacob). Meyers couldn't figure that one out either so suddenly Bella can have both, despite all evidence to the contrary in the first 3 books. She can keep Jacob around too once he imprints Nessie (and how awesome that Bella and Edward get a built-in werewolf babysitter in the bargain!).
I appreciate the effort to be positive, however unwarranted. This book was to be about choices, sacrifices, for choosing the way of life one does. Bella didn't have to choose or sacrifice anything or anyone and that is why I felt so cheated by the book.

A little disappointing as i really enjoyed reading your brutally honest reviews for the previous books!




BTW Good review, very intelligent point of view!!


Mmm... No. That statement is highly inaccurate. Nowhere in Mormon doctrine does it say "everything will be A-OK". Some people might think or feel or act in a manner indicative of those sentiments, but it cannot be found in Mormon doctrine. Anywhere. Though, it's likely that someone, somewhere may have come up with that interpretation... but therein lies the human error.
Ultimately, life is what you make of it-- You can choose to be happy or you can choose not to be happy.
As for your review: I enjoyed the original and the follow-up comments. I vehemently agree with you on the part about the Twilight series being "escapist fantasy". It really is. You really did take time to dissect some major points and issues within and about Breaking Dawn and the Twilight saga.
Thanks for taking time to write your review.

After reading New Moon I began to see Bella as a poor role model for young girls as well but not because she wanted sex. It was the fact that she completely stopped enjoying life because her "true love" left her. Her inability to function like a normal human being made me think she was in an unhealthy relationship with Edward. If millions of young girls idolize Bella then they might believe that you can't live without your true love...and well, I think everyone should have their own life. Even if you are in a relationship, everyone needs some time away from their partner.

I agree.....Stephnie Meyer is a wonderful author, and though i keep telling my self that i hate the books, i just cant seem to stop reading them!
Bella is a bad role model not because she get married at a young age and chooses family over career but because she is stupidly obsessed with Edward. It's unhealthy! I was about to scream in new moon at the part where she cries over months. Bella should be strong and independent. Stephenie Meyer is telling us that it's ok to obsess over a guy to the point of the thought of committing suicide to him.


Your comment is definitely true if you are focused on Bella as an actual person, which is an appropriate way to do it. If you're focused on the writer, as I chose to be, that's where I get the idea that I want the writer to make some tougher choices, to put her character into more difficult situations. That's what I was yearning for, that Meyer would have progressed as a writer to the point where she was willing to put her character through that kind of struggle. But happy to hear your thoughts, thank you!

Oh and I agree with Tippy about the role model bit. Bella is not a great role model but neither is she a terrible one. She just is. Besides if young adults are going to run around acting exactly like Bella after reading the series, than Bella being a "bad role model" is the least of our worries.


LOL, I read your review for Catching Fire and I definitely see your point when it comes to role models.

"I still feel like the saga was worth reading; [...] because it gives me fodder for worthwhile introspection."
Agreed. And all the reviews, now that I've read the books, give me good reference points to what people enjoy in a book, and what disappoints them.
Agreed. And all the reviews, now that I've read the books, give me good reference points to what people enjoy in a book, and what disappoints them.
Love your review esp this part-Women and men from every culture in every era of history have found a tremendous and peculiar satisfaction in their children. It doesn't matter where you believe this instinct came from, it's real and it manifests millions of times over.

