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Breaking Dawn by Stephenie Meyer
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Reviewer update Aug 2009: I have demoted the book from 5 to 4 stars. My confession/explanation is at the end of the original, unedited review.
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Yes, I gave it 5-stars. This is partly because I was so pleased by it compared to the last two books in the series that I overreacted. But I also approve of her approach to the book and have rated it so highly in order to counteract those reviewers out there who hated it because they felt Bella was a bad example to young girls.

***THESE TWO PARAGRAPHS SPOIL THINGS THAT HAPPEN EARLY IN THE BOOK***
I have a bone to pick with these people. Read some of the reviews on Amazon or GoodReads and you will find a certain type of person who feels that Bella's character fails as a role model for young women today. Why? Because she, gasp, got married and had a child at a young age.

Oh, my, what is the world coming to when young people choose eternal love and devotion! (Oh that more young women could be more like the implausibly articulate yet utterly selfish lead in the movie Juno!) In my favorite example, one reviewer on Amazon claimed it wasn't credible that a girl as young as Bella would feel joy at sensing a baby growing inside her. "I'm 28 and if I felt something moving in me, I would freak," she said, "I can't believe a 19-year old would be happy about it."
***END OF SPOILAGE***

Sadness ensues. Women and men from every culture in every era of history have found a tremendous and peculiar satisfaction in their children. It doesn't matter where you believe this instinct came from, it's real and it manifests millions of times over. Should we be so surprised that Stephenie Meyer would be one of the billions who believe this love to be real? Read the author's bio and it becomes clear: She was married at 21 before she finished college and had three children while still in her 20s. But one can hardly call her a "failure" for choosing family first. By all standards she's fabulously successful and wealthy. Plus, she has a college degree (one of the big beefs some people had with Bella's choice to postpone college). Are we really surprised that Stephenie would see the world through rose-colored, happiness-prone glasses when her own life is exactly that, deliriously happy?

Social polemics aside for a moment. The one thing this book lacked was a satisfying climactic, apocalyptic battle royale between the forces of vampire good and vampire evil. I know this book was intended to cap off a romance series, not The Lord of the Rings but there's a reason books of high fantasy all end in cataclysmic bloodshed. It takes a conflict of such dramatic proportions to drive the point of a story deep into our minds. And the point of this story, if you weren't too focused on your own family planning to notice it, was worthy of such dramatic punctuation.

The real point of this book is that we can and should choose love. That despite our personal weaknesses and faults -- our immature attempts at love and our petty jealousies -- we can make important, permanent decisions that will tie us to other people, making their lives and our lives better in the process. The battle I propose -- one I hope sees the light of day in a future novel -- would seal Bella's decisions and the decisions of her family and loved ones in a way that would render their commitments real. Their marital love, their parental love, their familial love, and the love of fellowship with others who share their principles.

Some would have to die to preserve the love they have made immortal. Others would have to kill to do the same. Nothing is more final, especially for immortals. But they would do so to symbolize the triumph of their love over the petty dynasty of the Volturi and thus establish a global movement of vampires that respect human life and restrain their selfish hungers in deference to the greater good. Something that wise humans do every day.

Such a symbolic battle would take this series to the next level. But even without it, this book is the best evidence that Meyer wasn't really writing a sloppy romance saga for misty-eyed girls, but was instead telling a story about the eternal power of love and self-denial.

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Update from Aug 2009
I have had some fabulous comments to my review (please read them, most are very intelligent). I have been properly chided by many of these reviews for overreacting to the "Bella is a bad role model" flack and failing to acknowledge the principal flaw of this book. Amy said it best below: Meyer shortchanged us by not forcing Bella to face any hard choices. Bella got everything she wanted, including a (strange) relationship with Jacob. Nobody she loved got hurt -- which was the problem I did mention above -- and she never had to disappoint anyone.

Given that a year has passed, I have some distance on all the whining that went on about Bella not being a protofeminist. As a result, I should own up to the fact that this fourth book fails to deliver not only the climax I hoped for, but the real character crisis and development that a saga of this length should strive for. Or that we all should strive for in our own lives, to go all metaphysical on you for a moment. So I have demoted the book from 5 stars to 4 and begun to ruminate on the topic of why Meyer -- a woman possessed of such clear imagination -- was unwilling or unable to make Bella's life hard. Here's what I have come up with, for what it's worth:

1 - Meyer's own life is pretty darn pleasant. Let's be honest, she has everything most people think they want. All of us who struggle to write books that nobody reads desperately wish for her success (a fact that generates more than few snippy comments on 欧宝娱乐, I might suggest). She has a whole community of women around her who adore her and come to all-night parties when she debuts a book or movie, just to be near her. In the end, she might make Bella after her own image because she doesn't know that life ultimately requires pain.

2 - Meyer is a Mormon. For those not acquainted with the faith, Mormonism is a faith that believes everything will ultimately be okay. If not in this life, then in the next. In fact, the whole vampire immortality gig is just a metaphor for the Mormon idea of the afterlife: You get to be with the ones you love forever, without pain. In that way, Bella is a perfect reflection of the ideal Mormon eternity: God forgives us for our idiocy, acknowledges our flawed attempts at love by magnifying them and making them eternal. Though this is only one side of Mormonism -- it's also a faith with sorrowful history of persecution. Mormons certainly suffer plenty in this life just like everyone else, so this explanation is only true to the extent that Meyer has willingly isolated Mormonism's view of the end state of humanity.

3 - Twilight is just escapist fantasy. This is not only the most obvious but probably the strongest of my three explanations. We're so accustomed to watching James Bond run through the street with machine guns trained on him that never hit their mark that we no longer point out that Bond is completely implausible and ultimately unsatisfying as a character. But we're not used to reading fiction in which women get everything they want. (At least, I'm not.) So we get tied up in knots about the lack of deeper meaning and pathos when in reality, Meyer never promised us a garden of sorrow and personal growth.

So even though I have to demote the book, I still feel like the saga was worth reading; both because of the fun I had teasing about its flaws but also because it gives me fodder for worthwhile introspection. Oh, and it connected me to some great commenters who I now follow on 欧宝娱乐.
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message 1: by Catherine (new)

Catherine I agree with your comments except for the battle. I found the battle of "minds" and wills to be interesting and unexpected. For the Volturi to lose without a fight did more to them then a battle would have. While I agree that the big battle is in their future, this was not the time for it.


James I can go with Catherine's point, as long as a battle is coming some time. I was under the impression this was the last book, so was hankering for the climax. But maybe (hopefully) we'll see more development in the international vampire community. Perhaps a spinoff series about some of the other vampires. I'm particularly interested in the vampire who was evidently from the American revolution period. Think Meyer is up to a historical novel about vampires in 1776? I could sink my teeth into that. ;)


message 3: by Catherine (last edited Feb 25, 2009 02:16AM) (new)

Catherine I know that she is writing a book of "Twilight" from Edward's pov. That I think I will enjoy. She only said that "Breaking Dawn" was the end of Bella's Story. I hope she does write more about her vampire world. I see the battle happen when Nessie comes of age. That would be a great story too.


James That's an interesting idea -- with her unique powers Nessie would be a very dramatic character to lead a drive against the Volturi. Nice thinking!


message 5: by Feech (last edited Feb 25, 2009 02:17AM) (new) - added it

Feech crud. now you've got me wanting to read this one. i thought i was safe... so, your review is the first positive one that i've liked, mostly (okay entirely) because you didn't go on for pages about Stephenie Meyer's "brilliant character development" or her "gift for storytelling"; you went for the heart of the matter and showed me something that i missed while i was caught up in my own little angry world of technicalities. (a good story, badly written, makes for an unhappy feech.) i can now read "breaking dawn" without feeling like i'm acknowledging her as a good writer. (in my opinion, that is.)good show, all in all!


James Sorry to drag you into this one, Feech! I felt I had to read it, and re-reading my own review, I can see why. There is a point here, underneath it all, even if the story was told poorly. Can't wait to hear how it goes for you...


message 7: by Kayla (last edited Dec 07, 2008 02:53PM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Kayla Oh no!!! I was reading your review and your spoiler alert was not quite obvious enough (and a little late). Maybe you could edit it and put it at the top of your review? I'm only on the second book and I got way too much info from your first paragraph.


Heather Ingemar I particularly like your point about the growing number of anti-family females in society.

I have met so many feminists who wave their "woman's freedom of choice" flag, claiming equality for all, only to shoot down a girl for wanting a family instead of a huge career. While I am 100% all for equality of the sexes, I can't help but wonder what happened to our freedom of choice. In today's world, it IS possible to have your cake, and eat it too. Women should be allowed that, regardless if it is a career, college, family, or all of the above.

Anyhow. I mostly wanted to compliment you on your articulate and well-written review. I feel you hit everything spot on, and I agree: a dramatic battle would have been good, but under the circumstances, it was a lovely end to a lovely saga.


message 9: by Annalisa (last edited Jan 16, 2009 04:29PM) (new) - rated it 1 star

Annalisa While I agree with your rant that someone who chooses family over career does not make them a bad role model and appreciate someone saying so, I don't think Bella is good role model. What I think many people fail to see who do praise Bella, and SM for writing a moral series, is that it's not moral on any part by Bella. This girl was begging for sex from Edward from the start. Girls, young girls, are the largest audience who love this book and from my experience, they aren't really correlating the distinction. Personally I hated the book, but it's not because Bella got married young and chose a family. It's because I thought SM's solution was implausible, out of character, and off her own canon. But I'm glad there are people who did like it.


message 10: by Foxfire780 (last edited Mar 12, 2009 07:58AM) (new) - rated it 2 stars

Foxfire780 Reeves I can see your point about the arguement saying Bella is bad role model because she chose a "family" over a career being fraught with errors.
I would put to you however, that she is bad role model to young women, because she an indecisive, whiny, immature selfish little brat. And the reward she gets for acting this way? EVERYTHING she ever wanted with very little conflict (I'm sorry but that absurdedly long passage with the Volturi barely counts) and no sacrifice.

Also, their "romance" is characerized wrong. I've seen true life long love, and what Bella and Edward have (as described by Ms. Meyers) is more like obsession and lust. Perhaps if Ms. Meyers wrote less about marble lips and smoldering eyes and more about what they acutally feel and know about each other I might read this story differently.

p.s. If you want a "true forever love" read that is actually written well, go for for "Outlander" by Diana Gabaldon.



Cheryl I liked this review - - I thought it brought some good points up, particularly when addressing the issue that young people are often far more equipped to be parents than we give them credit for. I think that when one looks at the character of Bella, especially, there is always an "old soul" in her heart - - -she has a mother who is loving but not very competent, and a father who would "rather not know", yet she herself faces most truths head-on.

I will say however, that given my choice, I would rather see my own children wait until they were past the age of 18 to begin a family. However, that may not be everyone's choice, and I for one do not have the right to pass that judgment on them.

And finally, while Meyers may not be a world-class writer, she certainly had more than enough power to suck me into these novels, and I enjoyed them immensely, while still recognizing that the deathless love, eternal devotion and non-ending passion were probably NOT things that most young people were going to encounter in their lives. I think many adults fear that their children, young women in particular, are going to be disappointed when they realize not all of their lives will be spent breathlessly in passionate love with their mate (who by the way can buy them expensive gifts and cars like Ferraris). However, I must also say that there are many of us out here who have been married for many years (like 32?!?) who still find ourselves catching our breath upon occasion when we look at our spouse. If for no other reason than putting forth the idea that a permanent relationship with a permanent love is possible, I enjoyed these works of fiction.


Claudia I agree entirely with this review. I would also like to add - this is a work of fiction, why should S.M. care to make Bella a role model anyway? Bella is Bella, love her or hate her, she's not here to BE a role model. If I wanted to, I could pick Rosalie to be my role model, and that wouldn't be good either.


Nicole Great review! I also loved your review of Eclipse -- very funny. While I do agree with you that it's not right to judge Bella for getting married so young, my problem with the marriage was that she was opposed to it until the ceremony began. The message that I got from that was that it's OK to get married if you're not totally sure you want to. The fact that she's ready to become a vampire and live with Edward for eternity makes this argument a little silly, I will admit.

I'd also take this with a grain of salt: I doubt that many teenage girls would consider a fictional girl who dates a vampire to be a valid role model.

And you're right, there needed to be a battle. I can't believe they ended a disagreement with the most dangerous vampires in the world by chatting for a while and throwing a shield. I'm not surprised, however, as it seems like Meyer wimped out of having to describe the big battle scene in Eclipse by having Edward stay with Bella. But the fight scene between Vanessa/Edward/Seth/Riley was pretty good, so it seems like she could have done it if she really tried.

All in all, I agree with you, and this was still a great book. I couldn't put it down, just like all of the others in the series.


message 14: by Sherry (last edited Jun 11, 2009 07:05PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Sherry I thought this was an excellent and insightful review. After reading it, it reminded why I liked this book SO much. Thank you for bringing to light the wonderful power of love, sacrifice, marriage, family, children. I thought Stephanie portrayed these well. Oh, that we could all be as wonderful humans as the Cullens are to each other. If you look at my review you will see my minor rant. Feel free to comment back if you wish. I would appreciate your take on my concerns.


message 15: by Amy (new) - rated it 1 star

Amy If Stephenie Meyers read your review I think she would respond "yeah, I meant to do that, what he said..." Or something like that. I appreciate that you are giving Meyers the benefit of the doubt, but in no way do I think she deliberately set out to portray the themes your excellent review ascribe to the book; her novels are much too plot driven for that. Nope, she just couldn't figure out how to save the whole clan (which you also allude to above) if there was an actual battle, so NO BATTLE.

I'm not one of those role model worriers, what really bothered me was Nessie. The conflict that was most interesting is to your point: choose love (Edward) or choose children (not Edward/potentially Jacob). Meyers couldn't figure that one out either so suddenly Bella can have both, despite all evidence to the contrary in the first 3 books. She can keep Jacob around too once he imprints Nessie (and how awesome that Bella and Edward get a built-in werewolf babysitter in the bargain!).

I appreciate the effort to be positive, however unwarranted. This book was to be about choices, sacrifices, for choosing the way of life one does. Bella didn't have to choose or sacrifice anything or anyone and that is why I felt so cheated by the book.


message 16: by Amy (new) - rated it 1 star

Amy Loved the Eclipse review, by the way...


message 17: by Danielle (new)

Danielle Oh my- how much your views have changed! I have a feeling that you have gradually (or maybe not so) fallen under Stephenie Meyer's spell...

A little disappointing as i really enjoyed reading your brutally honest reviews for the previous books!


message 18: by Lia (new)

Lia Glad to know the books get better as the series goes, but this also solidifies my decision to stay far, far away from this and other vampire series, actually. I, too, am "Mormon" (we call ourselves L D S) and an avid Jane Austen fan, and I cannot abide the shallow, ill-written, sickly, withered tripe that is so rampant in today's novels. I want substance. I also want morals, and strength of character. I want clean language and, for crying out loud, if I have to read a paragraph describing what someone is eating for breakfast, it better be written by a close peer to Dickens. Why you would care what I want, I don't know, except that you sounded like you might be fancying writing, so...


message 19: by Kim (new) - rated it 5 stars

Kim So what is wrong with happily ever after? It's a feel good story, sometimes that's just what we need. Everyone knows it's fiction.


message 20: by Liz (new) - rated it 2 stars

Liz Wow, I so wasn't expecting this to be a positive review. You didn't even mention Renesmee and the Dea Ex Machina! Lol. I didn't even pick up on it until it was pointed out to me. But your insight really was... insightful. I like this review a lot.


message 21: by Debbie (last edited Dec 02, 2009 12:31PM) (new)

Debbie I 100% agree with your review. Im tired of reviews saying "Vapires dont shine in sunlight" (in my opinion its an stupid argument, because vampires are not real) "Renesmee, what a ugly name" (OMG I know people with worst mixed names like Shaniqua or Carose - mix of Carlos and Rose) "S.M great story teller but bad writer" etc... I like the saga because she break all the "rules or steriotypes" she create a new version of vampires and a different way to show her creation. I discovered these saga because the movie.. when the movie show in teathers I said ok another vampire movie... not interesed... I see a lot of people so excited about the movie but not interesed me.. some day I was bored in my house and i decide to watch the movie and I like the theme then i read all the books. I dont know why people needs characters to be role models.. what about that? everyones feel, think, act different. What its good dont hurt you or hurt others (thats the way I think) People say Bella have everything she want, and I say So what? she always do things for others, she move to Forks because she wants Rene happy... etc she always put her self last. Whatever its a fiction history and its different thats the secret of the succes of the saga. I really like Breaking Down more than Eclipse or Twilight (Its not my favorite type of lecture or the most amazing books i ever read but Its not the worst).. Im glad that I decide to finish the saga because when I read Eclipse I was very upset, and dont want to continue but I did before 3 weeks thinking on it hahaha!

BTW Good review, very intelligent point of view!!


message 22: by Lora (new) - rated it 5 stars

Lora I loved your review and totally agree with just about everything you said. This was actually my favorite book of the series. I found it to be practically non-stop action and I was worried it wouldn't have a happy ending. I thought it would end like Alice's back-up plan.


Jadewik "Mormonism is a faith that believes everything will ultimately be okay. If not in this life, then in the next."

Mmm... No. That statement is highly inaccurate. Nowhere in Mormon doctrine does it say "everything will be A-OK". Some people might think or feel or act in a manner indicative of those sentiments, but it cannot be found in Mormon doctrine. Anywhere. Though, it's likely that someone, somewhere may have come up with that interpretation... but therein lies the human error.

Ultimately, life is what you make of it-- You can choose to be happy or you can choose not to be happy.

As for your review: I enjoyed the original and the follow-up comments. I vehemently agree with you on the part about the Twilight series being "escapist fantasy". It really is. You really did take time to dissect some major points and issues within and about Breaking Dawn and the Twilight saga.

Thanks for taking time to write your review.


message 24: by Ananya (new)

Ananya I really loved your review and I agree with you.


Katie Annalisa wrote: "While I agree with your rant that someone who chooses family over career does not make them a bad role model and appreciate someone saying so, I don't think Bella is good role model. What I think m..."

After reading New Moon I began to see Bella as a poor role model for young girls as well but not because she wanted sex. It was the fact that she completely stopped enjoying life because her "true love" left her. Her inability to function like a normal human being made me think she was in an unhealthy relationship with Edward. If millions of young girls idolize Bella then they might believe that you can't live without your true love...and well, I think everyone should have their own life. Even if you are in a relationship, everyone needs some time away from their partner.


message 26: by Mai (new) - rated it 1 star

Mai Patwardhan Annalisa wrote: "While I agree with your rant that someone who chooses family over career does not make them a bad role model and appreciate someone saying so, I don't think Bella is good role model. What I think m..."

I agree.....Stephnie Meyer is a wonderful author, and though i keep telling my self that i hate the books, i just cant seem to stop reading them!

Bella is a bad role model not because she get married at a young age and chooses family over career but because she is stupidly obsessed with Edward. It's unhealthy! I was about to scream in new moon at the part where she cries over months. Bella should be strong and independent. Stephenie Meyer is telling us that it's ok to obsess over a guy to the point of the thought of committing suicide to him.


Tippy I disagree with the comment that Bella never had to face tough choices and she got everything she wanted. Okay, she did get what she wanted, but she still had to face tough choices. She didn't know that everything would work out. She thought she'd have to give up her family. She thought she'd never be able to have children when she married Edward. She believed she would have to give up the best of her humanity and be a crazed new born. She made the tough choice to be with Edward despite these things. Then it so happened that everything worked out. There is a world of difference. She made the choice to sacrifice everything. I'm glad she didn't have to, but she would have. This is so much more than always having your way and never having to think about the bad things. Also, regarding the "bad example" argument, I think Bella acts like a teenage girl-that is she's probably not concerned with whether or not she is being a good role model for younger kids of her gender. She's living her life and there are plenty of people who make choices similar to hers. So I would say that she may not be ideal, but in a lot of ways, she is real.


James Tippy wrote: "I disagree with the comment that Bella never had to face tough choices..."

Your comment is definitely true if you are focused on Bella as an actual person, which is an appropriate way to do it. If you're focused on the writer, as I chose to be, that's where I get the idea that I want the writer to make some tougher choices, to put her character into more difficult situations. That's what I was yearning for, that Meyer would have progressed as a writer to the point where she was willing to put her character through that kind of struggle. But happy to hear your thoughts, thank you!


message 29: by Cece (last edited Mar 28, 2012 02:17AM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Cece I really like, and agree with your review, with all of the ones you've written on the series so far. I think I remember reading somewhere, on SM webpage or something, that she didn't follow through with a physical battle because she knew that if it started a lot of characters would die. Which is true. I figure she didn't want to kill the characters she's gotten so attached to (I think they're like her children to her) and didn't want to end this book on a doleful note. I had been, in a way, looking forward to a huge fight but I still really liked the ending. It had a much lighter outcome.

Oh and I agree with Tippy about the role model bit. Bella is not a great role model but neither is she a terrible one. She just is. Besides if young adults are going to run around acting exactly like Bella after reading the series, than Bella being a "bad role model" is the least of our worries.


James Thank you, Cece, for the comment. On the idea of role models, you might enjoy my contrasting assessment of Katniss Everdeen, the protagonist in the Hunger Games. http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...


message 31: by Cece (new) - rated it 4 stars

Cece James wrote: "Thank you, Cece, for the comment. On the idea of role models, you might enjoy my contrasting assessment of Katniss Everdeen, the protagonist in the Hunger Games. http://www.goodreads.com/review/sho..."

LOL, I read your review for Catching Fire and I definitely see your point when it comes to role models.


message 32: by Paris (new)

Paris Henry I agree with your review. Though I loved the book, i was left wanting for a "Battle Royale" too. And all your other points-very well made.


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

"I still feel like the saga was worth reading; [...] because it gives me fodder for worthwhile introspection."

Agreed. And all the reviews, now that I've read the books, give me good reference points to what people enjoy in a book, and what disappoints them.


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

Love your review esp this part-Women and men from every culture in every era of history have found a tremendous and peculiar satisfaction in their children. It doesn't matter where you believe this instinct came from, it's real and it manifests millions of times over.


message 35: by Kaede (new) - rated it 1 star

Kaede De Lopez -_-


Liana "...But we're not used to reading fiction in which women get everything they want..." -ever read 50 Shades of Grey?


Evenstar Holy Heck. I'm a Mormon and I was disgusted by the role models portrayed in this book. I don't care what you believe in, it is a fact that bad things happen to good people. People we love die, We don't always get what we want. Character development sucked and there was no continuity of who the characters were, as established in the first three books. For example, Edward, who always took the moral high ground, is ok with his wife, Bella, having sex with Jacob, your neighborhood rapist/pedophile? Right. You're right, not every Young adult fiction has to have deeper meaning and pathos but how about just some better writing in general. One dimensional characters, poor descriptions of events (silky wedding dress, bla bla bla ) Really? that's it? I actually met Ms Meyer at a book signing. She was all smiles until the poor lady next to me said, I understand you sign your books differently than when they first came out. Both she and her sister jumped down this seventy year old ladies throat, you would have thought they were part of James' coven. Yes, her life has been nice, but everyone can find some heartache to use in their writing. It was a cop out.


Isabella Osborne I agree


R贸is铆n Reilly Yes, 10 years later I am commenting on your review, but I had to. Your reviews are brilliant and i agree completely!


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