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Majesty by Katharine McGee
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it was ok
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Edit 12/08/21: There is a God, and we're getting a ! I have the utmost faith in the author that all of the unresolved issues will now get finished!

THIS REVIEW & MORE �

ARC provided by Random House Children's through NetGalley.

1.5 stars �

Buckle up kids, you’re in for one hell of a review.

If I was going to predict my biggest disappointment of the year, Majesty would never have even crossed my mind. I’m a huge fan of Katherine McGee’s books: they’re full of delicious drama, juicy secrets, complex characters, and angsty romance. I absolutely adored American Royals and I was really looking forward to reading this sequel. Reading Majesty felt like I was in the Twilight Zone. This book was not anything close to what I had been expecting and I’m still not sure what the fuck I read.

I’m going to try to try to keep this as spoiler free as possible, but I have to divulge some major plot points in order to explain what went so wrong with this book. So if you want to go into Majesty completely blind, I would just skip this review altogether.

The first major issue with the book are the romances. If you, like me, think you are going to go into this book with the expectation that the characters are going to work through the angst and mend the relationships left broken by the end of American Royals, you will be extremely disappointed. The characters basically play roulette with each other’s partners. This is one of the most frustrating things to me when reading a sequel. Why spend the first book developing relationships and building up the reader’s interest in those relationships only to completely dissolve them all? I’ve already become invested in the relationships introduced in the first book, so not only am I going to be upset with the sudden change of heart, but I’m going to spend my entire time reading actively rooting against them.

My second issue was with the characters. I felt like they all had a major personality make-over. As with American Royals, this book is also told through the four POVs of Beatrice, Samantha, Nina, and Daphne.

� Beatrice � I really loved her in American Royals. I could not stand her in Majesty. In the first book, a majority of her chapters were focused on her struggle between her desires and the expectations of her. All of her chapters here were dedicated to her swooning over Teddy. I will never enjoy reading about a relationship in which the character suddenly develops feelings for their sibling’s ex. Like, it’s a Big No for me when I read. So reading her chapters and her blooming relationship with Teddy was just nauseating. I skimmed most of them. (view spoiler)

� Samantha � Opposite of her sister, I actually enjoyed her chapters much more this time. In fact, I would argue that her POV was probably my favorite. I was definitely more sympathetic towards her and began to better understand her as a person. Of all the romances introduced, hers was the only one I enjoyed.

� Nina � She honestly felt so, blah. There was nothing to her character in this book. First of all, she barely had any page time. And whatever page time she did have was solely dedicated to her romantic feelings. She was my favorite character in American Royals, but I hardly gave her a second thought her because she was scarcely present. (view spoiler)

� Daphne � The only character who remained the same. She’s still horrible. I still hate her. I’m still waiting for her conniving, scheming self to be revealed to everyone who holds her in such high esteem. And her last chapter? What the fuck kind of ending is this? Her shenanigans are never addressed and basically she gets everything she ever wanted? (view spoiler)

Jefferson was basically nonexistent. You honestly could have replaced him with a doormat and it would have made no difference to the story. And when he did appear, he pulled a complete 180 towards the end of the book. After everything he went through to be with Nina, now all of a sudden he believes himself in love with Daphne. Gag me.

And last but not least: the fact that apparently this is the last book? I was under the impression that this was a trilogy, not a duology, but the author herself stated that this was the final book. If this was only the second book of a trilogy, a lot of my complaints wouldn’t seem so severe. However, as a conclusion to the series Majesty feels grossly incomplete, underwhelming, and lacking. I am shocked that this was written the way it was to be the final book. Nothing has been wrapped up plot-wise. There are multiple loose ends, things left unsaid, broken relationships, and incomplete storylines. The reader is left with so many questions.

2020 really did me dirty with this book. Reading Majesty felt like I had wandered into a parallel universe and read a completely different story. Who are these characters? Who are these romances? While I still encourage anyone who enjoyed American Royals to read this for yourself to form your own opinions, I would caution you to curb your enthusiasm and check your expectations.
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Reading Progress

February 24, 2020 – Shelved
February 24, 2020 – Shelved as: to-read
July 18, 2020 – Shelved as: arcs
August 5, 2020 – Started Reading
August 5, 2020 –
page 74
19.79%
August 6, 2020 –
page 122
32.62% "falling in love with your sister’s ex/ex’s sister? that’s a Big No for me 🥴🥴"
August 6, 2020 –
page 192
51.34% "wtf is going on with all the couples/romances. i feel like i’m in the twilight zone"
August 6, 2020 – Finished Reading

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Ariel • The Book View Can't wait to see your full review because I feel like we might be on a similar page


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Lacy 👀👀👀


Breanna Ariel wrote: "Can't wait to see your full review because I feel like we might be on a similar page"

oh i have a WHOLE lot to say!


Breanna Lacy wrote: "👀👀👀"

it was..........something


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Lacy Breanna wrote: "Lacy wrote: "👀👀👀"

it was..........something"


I adored the first book and was dying to read the second but after reading the 75 page sampler I'm already disappointed. 😣


Breanna Lacy wrote: "Breanna wrote: "Lacy wrote: "👀👀👀"

it was..........something"

I adored the first book and was dying to read the second but after reading the 75 page sampler I'm already disappointed. 😣"


the disappointment only grows from there i'm afraid 😔


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Maya Ughh I really want it to be good 😭


Breanna Maya wrote: "Ughh I really want it to be good 😭"

me too! i was really looking forward to this 😭


toe thomas ☾ this summed it up perfectly!!


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chiewtynn someone should write a majesty redo fanfic on wattpad


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Lacy chiewtynn wrote: "someone should write a majesty redo fanfic on wattpad"

Now, that, I'd pay for. 😅


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Loren This. All of this. It’s been a long time since I was this frustrated reading a book. 🤦🏾‍♀�


Kelly Daphne's final chapter seriously made me want to throw the book across the room!


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Breanna Lena wrote: "this summed it up perfectly!!"

thank you! glad you agree and i'm not the only one 😅


Breanna chiewtynn wrote: "someone should write a majesty redo fanfic on wattpad"

this book is feels like fanfic lol


Breanna Loren wrote: "This. All of this. It’s been a long time since I was this frustrated reading a book. 🤦🏾‍♀�"

i'm so glad i'm not alone! it was so hard to get through the whole book without wanting to through my kindle across the room


Breanna Kelly wrote: "Daphne's final chapter seriously made me want to throw the book across the room!"

RIGHT?!


Belle I just finished this and I feel the exact same!!!! I’m so angry and this was before knowing it’s the final book????? What kind of BS!!! So Daphne never gets what’s coming to her? No i cannot deal with this lol


Lois Lane Took the words right out of my mouth. This book was SUCH a disappointment. Why give us Nina & Jeff so heavily in book one and never resolve it. OR THE HIMARI PLOT!!!!


Samantha THANK YOU! I still rated this four stars (for now... the more I think about it the more tempted I am to lower it to at least a 3.5). It was still an enjoyable reading experience. I still love the characters, and I so loved Sam's character growth. But I can't help but think that the reason I am so attached to these characters is completely because of the first book. There was essentially nothing here (except for Sam's chapters) that made me feel more attached to them. In fact, I felt more confused that everything had taken a 180 since the last book. Thank you for putting this into words better than I could!


Maria Garcia YES. I loved the relationships in the first book and now you’re telling me I just spent hours reading the unwinding of those same relationships. I’m most upset with Beatrice and Teddy because they just happen to fall in love. No matter how hard the author tries, it doesn’t make any sense. If this is the last book, I’m extremely disappointed.


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Mysha Thank you for sharing this review, I'm not going to buy this freaking book, I was expecting to see the same couples of the very first book. But my GOD Jeff and Daphne together again?! FUCK NO. I can't stand her xd I hate her sooo much


Breanna Isabelle wrote: "I just finished this and I feel the exact same!!!! I’m so angry and this was before knowing it’s the final book????? What kind of BS!!! So Daphne never gets what’s coming to her? No i cannot deal w..."

It's the fact that this is the last book that makes me so upset. If there was going to be another I'd be okay with some of the choices because we'd have another book to work through but this was just sloppy and poorly done.


Breanna J wrote: "Took the words right out of my mouth. This book was SUCH a disappointment. Why give us Nina & Jeff so heavily in book one and never resolve it. OR THE HIMARI PLOT!!!!"

I don't understand any of the choices made in this book. Why even bother to write a second book like this if it's going to negate everything from the first???


Breanna Samantha wrote: "THANK YOU! I still rated this four stars (for now... the more I think about it the more tempted I am to lower it to at least a 3.5). It was still an enjoyable reading experience. I still love the c..."

Sam is the only saving grace about this book! I absolutely loved reading her chapters and really enjoyed her character growth 💕 The rest was basically garbage lol


Breanna Mahnoor wrote: "OMG I AGREE. I was going to rate this 4 stars because it was entertaining at least but I realise you're right and the book had so many issues. I found it really weird how the characters seemed to S..."

I totally agree, I actually liked Sam and Marshall, I just think they way they got there was poorly written (like the rest of the book and relationships). Everything else in this book was the complete opposite of what we were given in the first and it's both confusing and very disappointing. I think the thing that makes me most mad about the Daphne issue is that she's arguably the "villain" and yet never held accountable for her actions and the rest of the characters are still in the dark about her past and everything she's done to the people they supposedly care about


Breanna Maria wrote: "YES. I loved the relationships in the first book and now you’re telling me I just spent hours reading the unwinding of those same relationships. I’m most upset with Beatrice and Teddy because they ..."

In all honestly, it seems to me that originally this was a trilogy so the "new relationships" in this book (which are all horribly forced and lack chemistry except Sam's) were only written to create angst with the actual relationships, but the last book fell through so the author decided to just force what she wrote. None of the relationships had any hints in Book 1 and they all came out of left field.


Breanna Mily wrote: "Thank you for sharing this review, I'm not going to buy this freaking book, I was expecting to see the same couples of the very first book. But my GOD Jeff and Daphne together again?! FUCK NO. I ca..."

It's bad. I won't be buying a finished copy and I'm just going to pretend the first book was a standalone (even though the couples are separated by the end, that's much more preferable to this atrocity) 🙃


Jbellzzz Thank you for completely capturing how I felt about this book! It was just SUCH a disappointment. It is one thing to throw a plot twist in that may not give the reader exactly what they want, but these story lines were just so out of left field and made no sense whatsoever. I can’t believe there will be no third book to right some of the wrongs done in book 2. Mind blown � and not in a good way!

#justiceforhimari


stani ♡ (in the biggest slump oml) Is there a -7 rating option available here?? Because like where tf was Jeff’s head at? He clearly still had feelings for Nina, even on the wedding day chapter when he saw Nina his world still “stopped� and you tell me he ends up with Daphne and that he’s ready?? Ready to be what? A clown? This book has no substance. Why go through all that character development and relationship building if it all goes to shit in the second book? HOW DID THIS BOOK GET PAST EDITING? Connor just accepting Beatrice’s-goodbye-because-I-love-Teddy-now, and Teddy with the I-wish-u-well-Sam shit is just beyond me. Beyond complete disappointment. BUT NINA THO—she doesn’t even get a good thing for her. She gets played, that relationship gets broken AGAIN by Daphne and she ends up on the Royal Tour—which is full of publicity which we all know she dislikes� I weep for Nina. Can our girl get a happy ending around here? I am mad af pissed. I feel so robbed.


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Kaity I completely agree with you! Bee was my favorite in the first one and then in this one I felt like she’d been body-snatched. The author’s attempt at a ‘girl power� storyline were completely undermined by the fact that Bee’s entire storyline was just get swooning over Teddy. It almost seemed like a schoolgirl crush rather than the genuine love she’d had for Connor? And it Bee and Connor weren’t just in love, they were each other’s best friend. I don’t buy for a minute that Connor would have accepted Bee’s answer on her wedding day that she was happy. I could write a whole essay on Bee’s character and how I don’t think the author understands her lol. This book was so frustrating!


message 32: by Eleanor Smithson (new)

Eleanor Smithson Thanks for this review saving me time and money! My hatred for daphne and love for Connor and Bee were what made me want to read to second book how’re given that daphne gets what she wants AND no Connor and Bee I’ll definitely give it a miss!


Jamie Trotter Am I the only one that thought Ethan was going to end up at as the love child of the king?? I feel like there is still SO much story here left to build on!


Hannah Your review perfectly sums up how I’m feeling right now.. I’m baffled as to why Daphne wasn’t busted & Jeff’s character deserved SO much better.. I’m just in shock right now - I was so looking forward to this sequel and I’m completely disappointed 😑


Melissa This is exactly how I feel after finishing it today. I really wish there was going to be a third book to fix all of this.


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Nesie Thank you for your review - I'm halfway through Royals now, and wanted to see if this was a trilogy... But I think I'll stop at the first book and not bother with the second. Like Sam, I think I'd rather leave halfway and "write" my own sequel in my head.


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Greta Yes I absolutely agree. I was so excited for this book but I couldn’t even get through the second! I got a bunch of chapters in and then when there was still no mention of Jefferson of Connor spoiled it for myself and what the hell is the ending. You think they are going to develop the past relationship but she get rid of Jefferson and Connor in the first few chapters and then it’s like they were never even together.


Sarah Yes! I spent the whole book thinking “where is Jeff?� Why were he and Nina basically nonexistent in this book?!


message 39: by Dana (new) - rated it 1 star

Dana Prisloe I could not have said it better. I am so upset and disappointed by this book.


message 40: by Kris (new) - rated it 3 stars

Kris This post just made me realize there isn’t going to be a third book - what the hell? I’m in the same camp as all of you. PISSED. I will NOT be recommending this duology to my students. If it was a trilogy, then yes, because it would have a chance to redeem itself. WTF??!?!


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Hope Garfield Hey. This is a perfect review for a disappointing book 👏


Meagan Buesing YES!! your thoughts are exactly mine!


Lacey Hautzinger Yes!!! This is exactly how I felt after reading this book.


Miriam Oh my god so true - I loved the first so much and it wasn't like I was expecting this book to win the Pulitzer, I just anticipated some kind of consistency. Any consistency.


Trish Thank you! This book was such a disappointment.


message 46: by Nikki (new) - rated it 1 star

Nikki Completely agree. I anticipated this for so long. It was a total letdown - on brand for 2020 I guess. Now I feel like I need to write my own pages about what should have happened with these characters.


Victoria Mccullouch Ugh, same. The Beatrice and Daphne scene was the last straw for me.


Christine Oh heavens, please don’t tell me this was the end of the series. If this is truly a duology, it was a horrible, horrible ending. I was counting on a third book to redeem the story.


message 49: by Sienna (new)

Sienna This is honestly the best review- I couldn’t have explained it better myself. I’ve never been more unsatisfied by the ending- currently considering going back in time to finish the books midway through book 1.


message 50: by LEXI (new) - rated it 1 star

LEXI I completely agree with your review. I was miserable the entire time reading this book. Teddy and Beatrice’s relationship felt so wrong to me. I couldn’t stand to read about it and I skimmed the last 70-ish pages of the book. This book was such a disappointment, it could have been so good.


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