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Majesty by Katharine McGee
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did not like it
bookshelves: ya-contemporary

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The Old Switcheroo
Imagine reading a first book in a series where you spent the entire book getting attached to the characters and their relationships with each other. Imagine that the focus of the book was the romantic relationships, there are several of them, and they’re all built up over the course of 300 pages. There’s angst, there’s pinning, there’s miscommunication and SO MANY OBSTACLES, but they’re all in love and they have to eventually end up together, right? Because everyone has great chemistry with each other and it works. And it’s fun. That’s American Royals for you.

Now imagine the second book in this series showing you a huge middle finger and doing the old switcheroo with everyone’s love interest. Scrap everything that happened in the first book � the relationships developed? WHO NEEDS THEM. The character arcs? NO ONE CARES. Out with the things that make sense, and in with absolute nonsense. That was American Royals 2.

At the beginning of the novel, all of the previously established pairings and ships just get abolished, and everyone gets paired up with a new person, that was previously someone else’s partner. I think this made the first book obsolete and moreover, it made everything feel incredibly forced and contrived.

I absolutely loved Beatrice and Connor’s relationship in the first book. And we spent the whole of the first book rooting for them. More importantly, it made sense for Beatrice and Connor to fall for each other. It was believable and it felt very organic. Moreover, this relationship was juxtaposed with the fact that Beatrice was supposed to marry Teddy, which she felt absolutely nothing for, which made the whole dynamic really interesting. But for some godforsaken reason, the other decided that is not interesting enough, so Connor was out and Beatrice falls in love with Teddy. WHY? Beats me.

Same goes for all the other characters. Ethan and Nina were an atrociously bad coupling, that had nothing going for itself, and was used as this supposedly juicy and controversial pairing (on the count of Nina being in love with Ethan’s best friend like a week ago). This was probably my least favorite of all the new dynamics we got, because it was so boring, it had no chemistry and I just kept thinking WHY. WHAT WAS THE REASON. Sam got a new love interest at least, which is better than her dating her sister’s boyfriend but still, her relationship was just as uninspired as the rest of them.

I Love When Things Make Zero Sense
This book succeeded at one thing � it made me hate all of the characters. I just think they made zero sense and as if they got a retouch of their personality from someone who has not used Photoshop before and is like gRaPhIc DeSiGn iS mY pAsSiOn.

Beatrice was such an interesting character in the first book, with her inner struggle between everyone’s expectations and her wanting to live her own life, but in this sequel she just became a character that swooned over Teddy and had this meek, annoying approach to everything. The author also decided to sideline Jeff as a character in this book, which was annoying on a lot of levels, since he is important to every other character in the novel. Nina was such a bland, uninteresting PoV, made insufferable by her relationship with Ethan.

Most frustratingly, I hated that Daphne’s character was so bad. She is like a mean girl in the first book, but you keep seeing this complex side to her, and her trying to compensate feeling worthless by becoming someone important. I think she was a really interesting character, and this book said fuck that. Daphne goes through no growth, ends up in the same place, does not learn and she deserved better than an ending in which she ends up with a person she does not love, being unhappy despite finally getting what she wants. It was such a sad ending to her arc. I mourn for her character. There was so much potential for the narrative to give her what she deserves while still letting her grow. Instead, we got her still being awful and yet she gets all that she wanted. But she’s sad. The point eludes me.

An Unsatisfying Ending Is Putting It Lightly
I think it’s obvious that this was supposed to be a trilogy and then something fell through. The ending was so unsatisfying and I really felt like no one of the characters ended up where they were supposed to. Moreover, a lot of them felt like they ended up back where we started, as if they had no character arc at all. There was a tone of stuff that was left unresolved and even the attempts to wrap somethings up were so poorly handled. The dialogue in this book also felt so contrived, and fake and stilted, it was so annoying to read and left such an unsatisfying feeling overall.

If You’re Gonna Do Something, Do It Right
This book also made some really lame attempts to handle some important topics, such as race and feminism. Firstly, the way this book tries so hard to make some supposed feminist statements and then frames them as these amazing, groundbreaking things really hurt my head.

This book also decided to introduce a Black character and did a lot of things poorly in that aspect. First of all, when we meet Marshall, Samantha introduces him by saying that his family was born into slavery and that they joined the kingdom after the abolition of slavery, and the whole discussion ends there. However, it really begs the question who were the slave owners if not the royal family. Supposedly, Washington became king instead of president and there’s a royal family now, but I feel like there was a discussion here that needed to be engaged and it was not. I feel like Samantha had to acknowledge and engage with her privilege there, but that just did not happen. She is also painfully unaware how the press might treat Marshall because he is Black and yet she is also represented as this woke queen that is dragging the monarchy into the 21st century. There was also a bit at the end that where Beatrice applauded Sam for being so inspirational to her people and stressing that it’s nice that she is dating Marshall because it would be nice for their family to represent the nation. As if Marshall is a token to be paraded around for the fucking royal family. It was just kind of gross to be honest.

To Sum Up
One of the most disappointing books I have ever read. I am sad and I might go cry now.

I received an eARC of this novel from the publisher. All opinions are my own.

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Reading Progress

August 24, 2020 – Started Reading
August 24, 2020 – Shelved
August 24, 2020 –
page 1
0.27% "i am ready for DRAMA"
August 29, 2020 –
12.0% "lmao daphne literally said "bonsoir, monsieur" and then thought how thankful she was for all her years learning French

I WISH I HAD THIS KIND OF SELF-ESTEEM"
August 29, 2020 –
15.0% "ughhhhhh that was such a lame attempt to tackle slavery in this alternate reality"
August 29, 2020 –
17.0% "also, first of all, I thought this was going to be a trilogy?? but it's not?? this means this is the final book and i HATE the direction it's going in

also this is reading as contrived instead of fun and dramatic so it's sad hours here"
August 30, 2020 –
40.0% "lmao i can't stand this book"
August 31, 2020 – Finished Reading
January 10, 2022 – Shelved as: ya-contemporary

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message 1: by Sarah (new)

Sarah A-F DAMN


message 2: by Sierra (new) - added it

Sierra I am SO glad you posted this. I regret buying the first book now thinking I’d want to own the duo. Def won’t be reading the sequel.


message 3: by zaraa (new) - added it

zaraa this book should have stayed in the drafts. 🥴


Inside My Library Mind Sarah wrote: "DAMN"

DAMN is correct.


Inside My Library Mind Sierra wrote: "I am SO glad you posted this. I regret buying the first book now thinking I’d want to own the duo. Def won’t be reading the sequel."

i hate being bad press for the book, but I hated it so much lmao


Inside My Library Mind zaraa wrote: "this book should have stayed in the drafts. 🥴"

ooof it was rough


message 7: by Kelly (last edited Sep 02, 2020 06:02PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Kelly I was so looking forward to Nina and Jeff rekindling their relationship, it killed me when basically all her chapters were based around Ethan. AND the fact that Daphne got what she wanted in end after all her scheming!


Katie Casaccia THIS. Sums up exactly how I feel - you are right about it all!


Inside My Library Mind Kelly wrote: "I was so looking forward to Nina and Jeff rekindling their relationship, it killed me when basically all her chapters were based around Ethan. AND the fact that Daphne got what she wanted in end af..."

ugh Nina and Ethan were the worst. Made no sense whatsoever and was so bland on-page.


Inside My Library Mind Katie wrote: "THIS. Sums up exactly how I feel - you are right about it all!"

thank you! i am seeing either 1 or 2 stars reviews or 5 stars reviews, the opinions are really split?? but I feel like it was so bad lol


Barbara Fortune So glad you posted this� glad I’m not the only one who feels this way! I really enjoyed the first book and was excited to see how Beatrice and Connor would work things out and end up together and then she just falls for Teddy?! And Jefferson is sooo boring in this one! By the end, I really didn’t care he was getting back together with Daphne� who had no character growth!! I can’t remember the last time I wanted to throw a book like this.


Inside My Library Mind Barbara wrote: "So glad you posted this� glad I’m not the only one who feels this way! I really enjoyed the first book and was excited to see how Beatrice and Connor would work things out and end up together and t..."

same! I love my Kindle too much but if I had a physical copy it would be flying across my room for sure. It was just a mess


Maria Garcia THIS! I was so looking forward to more of Connor and Bea and the author just sent him away and made her fall for Teddy and it’s MAKES NO SENSE


Inside My Library Mind Maria wrote: "THIS! I was so looking forward to more of Connor and Bea and the author just sent him away and made her fall for Teddy and it’s MAKES NO SENSE"

exactly!! it felt so forced - I even think that it was possible to go down that route but it had to be believable and it just was not, Teddy and Beatrice have no chemistry imo


message 15: by Kelsi (new) - added it

Kelsi Jones Omg seriously. I need a third book to at least help fix some of this. How can Jeff have no plot. Like everyone must hate him in his family and the works to be okay with him and daphne, who is no one like boy step away from this psycho. I hate the plot device if no one communicating and that’s literally the only reason she’s still relevant like blackmailing the queen and getting away with it!? At that point her character was too much.


message 16: by Hallie (new) - added it

Hallie Elizabeth connor and beatrice's romance was one of my favorite parts of the book and having her fall in love with teddy in the second book.... why.... thats so dumb. i guess i will NOT be reading this book even tho it pains me to leave a series unfinished. i honestly did like the first book but this review tells me i am not missing much


Ginger Carpenter I am so happy to find a group that finally agrees with my take on this book. Just what happened? It was a total disappointment and like you the worst read of 2020 and considering I’ve done a lot of reading in 2020 teeheehee that says a lot!!


Inside My Library Mind Kelsi wrote: "Omg seriously. I need a third book to at least help fix some of this. How can Jeff have no plot. Like everyone must hate him in his family and the works to be okay with him and daphne, who is no on..."

it was a MESS. I really think Daphne could have been such an interesting character if she was given a chance but no she was just the mean girl and that was it


Inside My Library Mind Hallie wrote: "connor and beatrice's romance was one of my favorite parts of the book and having her fall in love with teddy in the second book.... why.... thats so dumb. i guess i will NOT be reading this book e..."

I hate being bad press for a book, but it was just such a major disappointment and I honestly would say just skip it, because it totally ruined the first book for me


Inside My Library Mind Ginger wrote: "I am so happy to find a group that finally agrees with my take on this book. Just what happened? It was a total disappointment and like you the worst read of 2020 and considering I’ve done a lot of..."

EXACTLY! I am still sad about it.


message 21: by Kaity (new) - rated it 1 star

Kaity So glad to find others who agree with me on this one! I LOVED the first book, and then this book completely ruined literally every aspect of it? Beatrice and Connor were not only v cute together but also really WORKED together. He was both supportive and fully believed in her as queen while also understanding she was a human being with emotions. He just wanted her to be happy. Then all of a sudden Beatrice seems to forget Connor even exists and proceeds to fall in love with the guy her parents picked out for her. I also hated that we had Sam and Bee reconcile in the first book, but then Sam proceeds to spend 90% of Majesty pissed at Bee again and not speaking to her. Literally what was the point of any of the story in the first book if this is where the characters were heading?


message 22: by Celine (new)

Celine I just really hated Nina's POV. She was so annoying in her "who, me? I don't want to be famous but I'm also at the center of drama" routine. I was soooo much more sympathetic to Daphne than Nina in this book. Nina was EASILY the worst character in this book for me. And, also yeah! She totally sidelined Jeff this whole book, he was so one-dimensional in the end that you forget that he's actually important. I felt like none of the guy characters got fleshed out enough. Ethan completely came out of nowhere in this book for me?? All of a sudden he's mentioned as much as Jeff was in the first book?? And, we never even see him interacting with Jeff who's supposedly his best friend?? That being said, I did like the whole couples switcheroo plot. The first book was really predictable and reminded me a little too much of The Selection. I liked the sequel so much more!


Inside My Library Mind Kaity wrote: "So glad to find others who agree with me on this one! I LOVED the first book, and then this book completely ruined literally every aspect of it? Beatrice and Connor were not only v cute together bu..."

exactly! I loved that Connor thought of her as a person as well as a royal and I really missed their dynamic in there. I also don't think it was in character for him to ask her to run away with him, it was used as this plot device to make her realize she is over him but it was stupid tbh. YES, I hated the reset we got on so many of the relationships WHAT WAS THE REASON


Inside My Library Mind Celine wrote: "I just really hated Nina's POV. She was so annoying in her "who, me? I don't want to be famous but I'm also at the center of drama" routine. I was soooo much more sympathetic to Daphne than Nina in..."

I am glad it worked for you! I liked the predictability and familiarity of the first book, it was so trope-y and one of the reasons I enjoyed it so much. I think the second book is also super predictable if you look at it on its own, but unexpected in conjunction with the first book. YES, Nina's PoV was so annoying, and I did enjoy Daphne way more but I hated that Daphne does not have any character arc whatsoever


message 25: by Duks (new) - rated it 3 stars

Duks I was so excited for this book, and it just completely fell apart. It felt like she didn't know what to do with these characters. Nina got annoying. Daphne pretty much stayed the same. I got tired of Sam's pity party of being in Bee's shadow. I forgot Jeff was even supposed to be an important character, yes he has no POV, but he still a huge plot point in the series and he got diddly squat. And honestly I found myaelf skimming through most of Beatrice's chapters.


message 26: by ftnrsnn (new) - added it

ftnrsnn OMG!!! This is exactly how I felt!! This book make no sense at all, you sum up my thought very well. I mourned for Connor and Daphne! And I hate everyone else!!! Period!!!


Inside My Library Mind Duks wrote: "I was so excited for this book, and it just completely fell apart. It felt like she didn't know what to do with these characters. Nina got annoying. Daphne pretty much stayed the same. I got tired ..."

could not agree more! And Sam's pity party got especially tiresome in light of the fact that her and Beatrice worked through their issues at the end of the first book?? and then we got back to square one


Inside My Library Mind ftnrsnn wrote: "OMG!!! This is exactly how I felt!! This book make no sense at all, you sum up my thought very well. I mourned for Connor and Daphne! And I hate everyone else!!! Period!!!"

IT MADE NO SENSE that's the biggest problem with it


Caitlin I completely agree with everything you said.


message 30: by Seda (new)

Seda Ricci I totally agree with you! The book with most disappointing ending:(


Nickie ★ I know I'm late to comment, but I just finished this book and I want you to know that I share your thoughts. I can't believe I wasted a day binge-reading this only to be screwed over. What an abomination of a book!


Alicia I completely agree with everything said here! Thank you for putting my anger into words lol. Beatrice’s pov really irritated me in the second book, Teddy and her made no sense.


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