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Deep Water
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The Year of Women--in which I'm devoting 2021 to reading female authors only--continues with my introduction to Patricia Highsmith. Deep Water was published in 1957, the midpoint in one of my favorite eras: the 1950s. I'm fascinated by those perfect suburban homes with perfect appliances enjoyed by perfect families in perfect clothes where we'd realize there was something very wrong beneath the surface. This is canvas for a master artist like Highsmith, who surprised me with the level of affection she has for her characters, even ones who harbor morbid self-intentions and when no one's looking, act on them.

Victor and Melinda Van Allen are a thirtysomething couple well-regarded by the community of Little Wesley in Massachusetts. Their extroverted daughter Trixie attends a semiprivate grade school. Vic runs a small local press which has published twenty-six books with only two typographical errors, a distinction that he is proud of. A voracious reader, Vic is quite resourceful, while Melinda has a passionate vitality. Yet Vic sleeps in a room in the garage, where he keeps an aquaria of snails. Anyone in Little Wesley unaware of this arrangement can see Melinda flaunt her love affairs, which Vic tolerates to spare a messy divorce.
Entertaining his wife's new prospect, a traveling salesman, in their home into the wee hours, Vic decides to have some sport with him by confiding that when he dislikes someone, he kills them, someone like Malcolm McRae, a salesman that had been fond of Melinda before he was found beaten to death in his New York apartment. Word spreads around Little Wesley that Vic is a murderer, but the rumor does far less damage to his reputation than it does Melinda's social life, for a few weeks. When McRae's murderer is captured and the town stops whispering about Vic being the culprit, Melinda is able to keep the attention of a new pet, a piano player named Charley De Lisle.
Vic knew what was happening, and he tried to make Melinda admit it and stop it before it got all over town. He simply told her, in a quiet way, that he thought she was seeing too much of Charley De Lisle.
"You're imagining things," she said. "The first person I've been able to talk to in weeks without being treated like a pariah, and you hate it. You don't want me to gt any fun out of life, that's all!"
She could say things like that to him if she really meant them. She could actually stymie him and make him wonder if she really believed what she said. In an effort to be fair with her, he tried to see it the way she told it, tried to imagine that it was impossible that she could be attracted to a greasy, sick-looking nightclub entertainer. But he couldn't see it that way. She had made the same denials in regard to Jo-Jo, and Jo-Jo had been equally repellent from Vic's point of view, and yet "that" had happened. Jo-Jo had been so amusing, a laugh a minute. He'd tried to be nice to Trixie. Now Charley De Lisle was such a wonderful piano player. He was showing her how to improve her playing. He came over a couple of afternoons a week now, after three when Vic had left the house, and he gave Melinda a lesson until five when he had to go to work at the Lord Chesterfield. Trixie was generally home in the afternoons, so what was the harm in his coming over? But sometimes Melinda wasn't home for lunch, and sometimes they didn't play the piano in the afternoon, because an ashtray that Vic had seen on the keyboard at two o'clock would be there when he got home at seven. Sometimes they were up at Charley De Lisle's house, where there wasn't a piano.
Patricia Highsmith writes in a language that lit my mind up like a neon sign. Deep Water, like most of her fiction, is written in third person singular (past) tense. She doesn't write as if she is Vic but as if she were Vic's best friend, or psychiatrist perhaps, tuned in to his thoughts and reasoning logic, presenting a solid case on his behalf that he's smarter than everyone in Little Wesley or anyone visiting there to involve themselves in his affairs. Highsmith made me an accessory to Vic's plotting. I wanted to see him get away with it, due in part to how reasonable he seems, what a good father and employer he is and how well liked by the community. Yet under the surface ...
Why had she said anything at all if she hadn't done anything with De Lisle or didn't intend to? When a woman as attractive as Melinda handed it to them on a platter, why should a man like De Lisle resist? The morals to resist didn't come very often any more. That was for people like Henri III of France, after his wife the Princesse de Conde died. There was devotion, Henri sitting in the library the rest of his life, with his memories of the Princesse, creating designs of skulls and crossbones for Nicolas Eve to put on book covers and title pages for him. Henri would probably be called psychotic by modern psychiatrists.
Deep Water could take place now with only a few modifications. The novel felt to me as if it was written today. Highsmith is expertly tuned in to psychology, to the dynamics of a relationship, be it a friendship or a marriage. The relationship between Vic and Trixie felt remarkably tender to me. Rather than portray Vic as a psycho who must be stopped at all costs, Highsmith had me flipping the pages, hoping he'd get away with his crimes. That is quite a feat. In 2022, a film version directed by Adrian Lyne (Flashdance, Fatal Attaction, Unfaithful) will be released starring Ben Affleck and Ana de Armas as Vic and Melinda Van Allen.
Patricia Highsmith was born in 1921 in Fort Worth, Texas. She took the name of her stepfather and at age six moved to New York City with him and her mother, who despised Highsmith even before it became evident that her daughter was homosexual. Highsmith attended Barnard College and wrote for the student literary magazine. With a reference from Truman Capote she was admitted to the Yaddo arts colony in 1948. Highsmith's debut novel Strangers on a Train was adapted into a hit movie directed by Alfred Hitchcock in 1950. She went on to publish twenty-two novels and numerous short stories. Highsmith died in 1995 in Locarno, Switzerland.
Previous reviews in the Year of Women:
-- Come Closer, Sara Gran
-- Veronica, Mary Gaitskill
-- Clothes, Clothes, Clothes, Music, Music, Music, Boys, Boys, Boys, Viv Albertine
-- Pizza Girl, Jean Kyoung Frazier
-- My Year of Rest and Relaxation, Ottessa Moshfegh
-- Fried Green Tomatoes at the Whistle Stop Cafe, Fannie Flagg
-- The Memoirs of Cleopatra, Margaret George
-- Miss Pinkerton, Mary Roberts Rinehart
-- Beast in View, Margaret Millar
-- Lying In Wait, Liz Nugent
-- And Then There Were None, Agatha Christie
-- Desperate Characters, Paula Fox
-- You, Caroline Kepnes

Victor and Melinda Van Allen are a thirtysomething couple well-regarded by the community of Little Wesley in Massachusetts. Their extroverted daughter Trixie attends a semiprivate grade school. Vic runs a small local press which has published twenty-six books with only two typographical errors, a distinction that he is proud of. A voracious reader, Vic is quite resourceful, while Melinda has a passionate vitality. Yet Vic sleeps in a room in the garage, where he keeps an aquaria of snails. Anyone in Little Wesley unaware of this arrangement can see Melinda flaunt her love affairs, which Vic tolerates to spare a messy divorce.
Entertaining his wife's new prospect, a traveling salesman, in their home into the wee hours, Vic decides to have some sport with him by confiding that when he dislikes someone, he kills them, someone like Malcolm McRae, a salesman that had been fond of Melinda before he was found beaten to death in his New York apartment. Word spreads around Little Wesley that Vic is a murderer, but the rumor does far less damage to his reputation than it does Melinda's social life, for a few weeks. When McRae's murderer is captured and the town stops whispering about Vic being the culprit, Melinda is able to keep the attention of a new pet, a piano player named Charley De Lisle.
Vic knew what was happening, and he tried to make Melinda admit it and stop it before it got all over town. He simply told her, in a quiet way, that he thought she was seeing too much of Charley De Lisle.
"You're imagining things," she said. "The first person I've been able to talk to in weeks without being treated like a pariah, and you hate it. You don't want me to gt any fun out of life, that's all!"
She could say things like that to him if she really meant them. She could actually stymie him and make him wonder if she really believed what she said. In an effort to be fair with her, he tried to see it the way she told it, tried to imagine that it was impossible that she could be attracted to a greasy, sick-looking nightclub entertainer. But he couldn't see it that way. She had made the same denials in regard to Jo-Jo, and Jo-Jo had been equally repellent from Vic's point of view, and yet "that" had happened. Jo-Jo had been so amusing, a laugh a minute. He'd tried to be nice to Trixie. Now Charley De Lisle was such a wonderful piano player. He was showing her how to improve her playing. He came over a couple of afternoons a week now, after three when Vic had left the house, and he gave Melinda a lesson until five when he had to go to work at the Lord Chesterfield. Trixie was generally home in the afternoons, so what was the harm in his coming over? But sometimes Melinda wasn't home for lunch, and sometimes they didn't play the piano in the afternoon, because an ashtray that Vic had seen on the keyboard at two o'clock would be there when he got home at seven. Sometimes they were up at Charley De Lisle's house, where there wasn't a piano.
Patricia Highsmith writes in a language that lit my mind up like a neon sign. Deep Water, like most of her fiction, is written in third person singular (past) tense. She doesn't write as if she is Vic but as if she were Vic's best friend, or psychiatrist perhaps, tuned in to his thoughts and reasoning logic, presenting a solid case on his behalf that he's smarter than everyone in Little Wesley or anyone visiting there to involve themselves in his affairs. Highsmith made me an accessory to Vic's plotting. I wanted to see him get away with it, due in part to how reasonable he seems, what a good father and employer he is and how well liked by the community. Yet under the surface ...
Why had she said anything at all if she hadn't done anything with De Lisle or didn't intend to? When a woman as attractive as Melinda handed it to them on a platter, why should a man like De Lisle resist? The morals to resist didn't come very often any more. That was for people like Henri III of France, after his wife the Princesse de Conde died. There was devotion, Henri sitting in the library the rest of his life, with his memories of the Princesse, creating designs of skulls and crossbones for Nicolas Eve to put on book covers and title pages for him. Henri would probably be called psychotic by modern psychiatrists.
Deep Water could take place now with only a few modifications. The novel felt to me as if it was written today. Highsmith is expertly tuned in to psychology, to the dynamics of a relationship, be it a friendship or a marriage. The relationship between Vic and Trixie felt remarkably tender to me. Rather than portray Vic as a psycho who must be stopped at all costs, Highsmith had me flipping the pages, hoping he'd get away with his crimes. That is quite a feat. In 2022, a film version directed by Adrian Lyne (Flashdance, Fatal Attaction, Unfaithful) will be released starring Ben Affleck and Ana de Armas as Vic and Melinda Van Allen.
Patricia Highsmith was born in 1921 in Fort Worth, Texas. She took the name of her stepfather and at age six moved to New York City with him and her mother, who despised Highsmith even before it became evident that her daughter was homosexual. Highsmith attended Barnard College and wrote for the student literary magazine. With a reference from Truman Capote she was admitted to the Yaddo arts colony in 1948. Highsmith's debut novel Strangers on a Train was adapted into a hit movie directed by Alfred Hitchcock in 1950. She went on to publish twenty-two novels and numerous short stories. Highsmith died in 1995 in Locarno, Switzerland.

Previous reviews in the Year of Women:
-- Come Closer, Sara Gran
-- Veronica, Mary Gaitskill
-- Clothes, Clothes, Clothes, Music, Music, Music, Boys, Boys, Boys, Viv Albertine
-- Pizza Girl, Jean Kyoung Frazier
-- My Year of Rest and Relaxation, Ottessa Moshfegh
-- Fried Green Tomatoes at the Whistle Stop Cafe, Fannie Flagg
-- The Memoirs of Cleopatra, Margaret George
-- Miss Pinkerton, Mary Roberts Rinehart
-- Beast in View, Margaret Millar
-- Lying In Wait, Liz Nugent
-- And Then There Were None, Agatha Christie
-- Desperate Characters, Paula Fox
-- You, Caroline Kepnes
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"Vic didn't dance, but not for the reasons that most men who don't dance give to themselves. He didn't dance simply because his wife liked to dance. His rationalization of his attitude was a flimsy one and didn't fool him for a minute, though it crossed his mind every time he saw Melinda dancing; she was insufferably silly when she danced. She made dancing embarrassing."
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"There wasn't a word for the way he felt about Melinda, for that combination of loathing and devotion. He would show the psychiatrist and the world that the situation was not intolerable and that there would be no divorce. Neither was he going to be miserable. The world was too full of interesting things."
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"He wouldn't object to her having a man of some stature and self-respect, a man with some ideas in his head, as a lover, Vic could visualize a kind of charitable, fair-minded, civilized arrangement in which all three of them might be happy and benefit from contact with one another. Dostoyevsky had known what he meant. Goethe might have understood, too."
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"The likelihood of typographical errors in spite of rigorous proofreading was going to be the subject of an essay that he would write one day, Vic thought. There was something demoniacal and insuperable about typographical errors, as if they were part of the natural evil that permeated man's existence, as if they were determined to manifest themselves no matter what, as surely as weeds in the best-tended gardens."
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"The morals to resist didn't come very often any more. That was for people like Henri III of France, after his wife the Princesse de Conde died. There was devotion, Henri sitting in his library the rest of his life, with his memories of the Princesse, creating designs of skulls and crossbones for Nicolas Eve to put on book covers for him. Henri would probably be called psychotic by modern psychiatrists."
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"The light on the scene was ghastly—the dismal, blanching light of dawn. Nobody could come back to life in a light like this, Vic thought. It was a light for dying. Watching the interns bustling about, asking questions, recommencing the artificial respiration, Vic realized his own fatigue. He seemed to awaken from a trance. He realized for the first time that, if De Lisle were revived, he was doomed."
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"It was very strange. Lying sleepless on the sofa, he had waited for fear to come, for panic, for guilt and regret, at least. He had found himself thinking of a pleasant day in his childhood when he had won a prize in geography class for making the best model of an Eskimo village, using half eggshells for igloos and spun glass for snow Without consciously realizing it, he had felt absolutely secure."
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"Vic slowly filled his pipe, aware that he was being studied by Don Wilson. It was amazing how June Wilson could go on and on about nothing. Now it was dog shows. Vic saw Melinda take a big gulp of her drink. Melinda had no talent for small talk with another woman. Don Wilson was looking the living room over thoroughly Vic noticed, and he supposed that an inspection of the bookcase would come soon."
April 22, 2021
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"Vic felt more cheerful and benign than ever. More and more Melinda was sullenly drunk. On one of her many dashes to see Don Wilson she was arrested for speeding and also accused of drunken driving. She was not very drunk, he saw, not drunk at all comparatively speaking, but the highway officer must have caught a whiff, or he deduced drunkenness from her probably foolhardy counterattack when he had stopped her."
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"She set her glass down hard on the table, and at that instant there was a deep, sleepy roll of thunder, and Vic immediately thought that the rain tonight—and he had noticed that it looked like rain since about four o'clock—would wash away the tread marks of his tires, if any, on the dirt road, and a very good rain would help to wash away the bloodstains on the white rocks."
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By the way, that's a gorgeous cover you featured - was that the first edition? I want one!

Thank you so much, Regina. The worst book I've read this year was a contemporary variation on Gone Girl, although this one didn't have the words "Girl" or "Lie/Liar" in the title, at least. Otherwise, it was very generic, like we expect our fast food to be. I highly recommend Patricia Highsmith as a palette cleanser.

Thank you for the wonderful comment and for the follow, Jayme!

I think we're fortunate Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ is operational this week, Robin, much less could be improved. I like your suggestion, though. Four hearts for Patricia Highsmith. Thank you for reading her this year and recommending this title to me.
I believe the only thing keeping us from murdering someone is the realization that we'd be caught. If you remove that nagging thought, then it's open season. It's ironic how Highsmith makes us feel the most moral character in the story is Vic.
Here's what a first edition hardcover looks like. A copy signed "Very Best Wishes, Pat Highsmith" on the front free endpaper can be yours for $4,800 from Raptis Rare Books.


When I have $4,800 to spare (US, no less), I know where to go! Actually, I have to say, I like the other edition featured in your review more.

There's nothing like a fifty year old book, except perhaps a fifty year old bottle of wine. The book you can pull off the shelf and touch the same pages that HIghsmith did, whereas an expensive bottle of wine tastes the same to me as a two year old bottle of wine. I also don't have $5,000 to spend on either.


Thank you, Anne. If you enjoy suspense, follow the trail your friends have left for you.


That's a really good way of putting it, Candi. No one was killed or injured during the writing of this novel that I know of. I think it's fine to root for the killer to get away with it.

I hate to inform you, but the other author who lights "my mind up like a neon sign" is John Updike. I have used a very similar analogy to describe this experience and I don't want you to overlook the comparison. He does it, frequently, to me, but never more so than he did in The Maples Stories. Just saying. . .
Yes, I must read this. You and Robin have done me in!

I hate to inform you, but the other author who lights "my mind up like a neon sign" is John Updike. I have used a very similar analogy to describe this experience and I don't want you to overlook the comparison. He does it, frequently, to me, but never more so than he did in The Maples Stories. Just saying. . .
Yes, I must read this. You and Robin have done me in!"
I probably did drool a bit, as well as tear up a pillow. What a delightful comment this was, Julie. Thank you so much.
I think it's worth mentioning that Highsmith was a contemporary of Flannery O'Connor. They were both residents at the Yaddo arts colony in 1948. Highsmith's writing is fueled by suspense as well, without being steeped in theology. I'll need to read some more of Highsmith's books but I can see her becoming one of my favorite authors.
I think it's wonderful to discover these authors who light up the neon board for you. If Updike is one of those, I hope you go back to his work and let it inform your own writing. He is not allowed in my Year of Women but I'll try The Maple Stories when I'm ready to give him another try. I might have a better experience with his short stories.





Some of us like pogo sticks. Others like neon signage. We all phone the complaint board. I hope you enjoy this novel, Debbie. Thank you for your awesome comment. A year of anything is kind of hard. A year of silence, a year of beer, almost anything can get tedious. So far I'm really enjoying the time to discover all of these women authors I hadn't made time for: Agatha Christie, Patricia Highsmith, Paula Fox ...



Some authors can blow me out of the water and yet I'm very hesitant to read anything else they've written. I can't say why. Perhaps lack of faith that their body of work will hold up. With Highsmith I can see that she did a lot of terrific work elsewhere. I'd love to push everything else I'm reading aside and spend more time in her world. I'm looking forward to your review, Ebba.

Joe, I can relate to both points. I feel the same way. Sometimes, if a book is extremely good, I am hesitant to read another by the same author. Yesterday I have finished another marvelous story and Patricia Highsmith even answered to me one question I had in the next paragraph. In this story there were 4 characters I liked/rooted for. I liked this story on another level as "Operation Balsam" which I think was my favorite story so far. 6 more stories to read. I have many thoughts about the stories. The last one was so great that I could not go on reading to the next one. I just had to pause and appreciate the good writing.