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Elantris (Elantris, #1)
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Oh, Elantris, why must you torture me so? Why must you force me into conflict with the library, my favorite dealer? They claim I owe them, and they aren't going to leave me alone. I'm afraid to go to the corner dropbox at night in case a librarian is lurking. I've stubbornly held onto their copy of Elantris hoping that I would become inspired to re-read and provide a more thorough review. Alas, no. You will have to read my generalized dislike instead of many specific examples. For no clear reason, I was completely unable to sustain interest in Elantris despite leaving the library copy on my physical 'currently reading' shelf for months. While there is an interesting vision of a magical system, magic isn't enough to save the story, especially as the re-discovering of Elantrian magic is so slooow in the making.
Out of the triplicate storyline, the destroyed Elantrian city was the only plot that really sustained my focus. Perhaps part of it was a difficulty connecting with any of the characters who were mostly out of the Campbellian Mythical Archetype lineage. Prince Raoden has been declared dead, but has actually been thrown into slime-coated Elantris. He has undergone the random but incomplete transformation into an Elantrian. However, he brings his royal training, knowledge of various Arelon citizens and unflagging optimism to the destroyed city and starts gathering the hopeless citizens into a band of survivors. He has a vision--plans to forge them into a populace with pride. He is going to scrub the slime from the buildings and recognize that even the street-sweepers have value in society. He's going to study, at least the books that haven't been eaten by the starving populace. He's going to make friends with aJamaican friend and adviser, Galladon. He's going to fix things.
A second storyline is focused an an annoyingly plucky young heroine, Sarene (subtle much?)--saved from being a Mary Sue because, you know, she can't draw. Or sing. I think. She's been betrothed to the prince of Arelon as part of an alliance between her kingdom and his. She faces somewhat predictable kingdom politics, as well as--gasp--overt sexism from her father-in-law and the generally patriarchal Arelon society. But don't worry--she'll modernize them and teach them that real princess can fight using swords.
The final storyline is focused on Hrathen, a high priest from Fjordell who is in a mission to convert the godless in Arelon before his emperor invades. He's actually one of the most layered characters because he has the zeal of a believer tempered with flawed insight. Though he thinks he knows the politics, he's frequently outmaneuvered by everyone around him, from Sarene, to his recruit, to the emperor. However, the subtlety of his characterization is based on overly-fuzzy political details, so there is a tremendous amount of info-dumping whenever he is in a scene, likely one reason a number of readers label it their least favorite storyline.
I just didn't feel the heart here, ultimately leading it to a two star read for me. It felt a little too self-conscious and 'I'm-avoiding-formula-by-changing-two-things' on Sanderson's part. There are a couple of unsolved questions, at least as far as my half-a-brain effort could tell, but I'm not sure there's anything worth potential conflict with the library.
After all, I have to stay on the good side of my dealer.
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Out of the triplicate storyline, the destroyed Elantrian city was the only plot that really sustained my focus. Perhaps part of it was a difficulty connecting with any of the characters who were mostly out of the Campbellian Mythical Archetype lineage. Prince Raoden has been declared dead, but has actually been thrown into slime-coated Elantris. He has undergone the random but incomplete transformation into an Elantrian. However, he brings his royal training, knowledge of various Arelon citizens and unflagging optimism to the destroyed city and starts gathering the hopeless citizens into a band of survivors. He has a vision--plans to forge them into a populace with pride. He is going to scrub the slime from the buildings and recognize that even the street-sweepers have value in society. He's going to study, at least the books that haven't been eaten by the starving populace. He's going to make friends with a
A second storyline is focused an an annoyingly plucky young heroine, Sarene (subtle much?)--saved from being a Mary Sue because, you know, she can't draw. Or sing. I think. She's been betrothed to the prince of Arelon as part of an alliance between her kingdom and his. She faces somewhat predictable kingdom politics, as well as--gasp--overt sexism from her father-in-law and the generally patriarchal Arelon society. But don't worry--she'll modernize them and teach them that real princess can fight using swords.
The final storyline is focused on Hrathen, a high priest from Fjordell who is in a mission to convert the godless in Arelon before his emperor invades. He's actually one of the most layered characters because he has the zeal of a believer tempered with flawed insight. Though he thinks he knows the politics, he's frequently outmaneuvered by everyone around him, from Sarene, to his recruit, to the emperor. However, the subtlety of his characterization is based on overly-fuzzy political details, so there is a tremendous amount of info-dumping whenever he is in a scene, likely one reason a number of readers label it their least favorite storyline.
I just didn't feel the heart here, ultimately leading it to a two star read for me. It felt a little too self-conscious and 'I'm-avoiding-formula-by-changing-two-things' on Sanderson's part. There are a couple of unsolved questions, at least as far as my half-a-brain effort could tell, but I'm not sure there's anything worth potential conflict with the library.
After all, I have to stay on the good side of my dealer.
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It is nice to hear that Mimi--there are so many Sanderson fans that I was wondering what I was missing. This does not come anywhere near a 5-star for me in terms of engagement or character development.

It felt a little too self-conscious and 'I'm-avoiding-formula-by-changing-two-things'
Heh. It's gotten to the point you can predict all of his plot twists because of this.

Well, that's interesting. I'm not versed enough in religions to catch the parallels. In retrospect, it does feel like a very junior work with overly heavy allegory.




Overall, I enjoyed it, but agree some of your criticisms of the characters (especially Sarene) and some of the plot holes/weaknesses were spot on.
Thanks for taking the time to write such a detailed, well-reasoned and rational review in the face of almost-certain fan outrage.
edit: Missed a few words here and there.

After all, to each their own, right? Glad you enjoyed it.


This book should have either been a novella, or it should have covered more than TWO MONTHS in 600+ PAGES.
Anyway, long rant but thanks for the review which was spot on. I'll totally believe your other reviews from now on ;)

I think it definitely was a first book, but that's okay, we all have to start somewhere, right?


I think Sanderson has a workman-like flair for detail. You know he's got it all worked out and is just dying to show it off to the reader. And to be fair, some readers love and miss that.





Most of the way through the book we're led to believe (by others reactions) that she's tall, gawky, plain, unpleasant, and that's the mental image built up. Then almost at the end of the book, an abrupt volte face by the writer, and we're told she's ackshelly very very beautiful. Very very annoying. I can't remember when I disliked a heroine so much.




Ugh. Not that old, ridiculous thing again. SMH


Unfortunately, I think the fact that you didn't finish the book has hurt your ability to make a fair assessment of what is going on in these characters and in this story,
The book isn't even about the magic, per se, though it plays a role in the climax and resolution of the book. Hraethen goes through his own Sazed-esque crisis of faith, and ends up being very central tot he whole book. Serene is self-conscious about the exact things you mention and tries to cover them up.
All in all, I think the story and characters are a little more complex than you present here. So if that is your reason for not appreciating this book, I would say give it another go! If you simply are just bored with it, then don't' bother. Reading should be fun. haha.

You see, I DID finish it, oh-so-boring as it was. I just couldn't work up the energy to do a review and wanted to give it a SECOND read. Isn't that funny?
Also, reading shouldn't just be fun. It can be a whole lot of other things as well. Don't sell it short.

I stand by my comments about the characters and their complexity, especially when seen in light of Sanderson's other work. But that is just my opinion.
Also, I didn't mean reading should *only* be fun. Of course, it can and should be much more. I'm in agreement with you there.
Thanks for your review and perspective.


I'd pass on Sanderson (view spoiler) Read N.K. Jemisin instead.

Your review is spot on.

They are often long, and often with a lot of minutiae that aren't really necessary to the story. You can tell the man loves his world-building.



Yes, his coming from a D&D background explains it all, doesn't it? Especially the meticulous and methodical creation of that whole universe (I think it's called the Cosmere). It's impressive, but there's just way too much of it.
Margaret wrote: "*makes note to avoid this book*"
*cough* You might also want to add The Way of Kings to that note *cough*