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Before the Coffee Gets Cold (Before the Coffee Gets Cold, #1)
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�I was so absorbed in the things that I couldn’t change, I forgot the most important thing.�
If you could return to the past, but knew you couldn’t change anything, what would you go for? Before The Coffee Gets Cold, the debut novel by Japanese playwright Toshikazu Kawaguchi and translated into English by Geoffrey Trousselot, is a warm and quirky time-travel story all confined into the singular space of a small Tokyo coffee shop. Originally a play, which may have been a better medium as the book occasionally feels like a film novelisation with pacing issues, the story stands on the strength of it’s small cast of characters as they support and empathize with one another and, in turn, win over our empathy. The time travel is complete with its own mythology and a ghost, none of which make all that much sense but it works in order to examine the emotional obstacles that exist between people (if quirky and heartwarming time travel is your thing, though, just watch because it's amazing). It is a unique take on the genre that seems certain of itself as a heartwarming tear-jerker and is successful at being moving although some of the stories are a bit eyebrow-raising (the final story is a theme I dislike). A bit rough around the edges, Before the Coffee Gets Cold is a rather cute and moving idea with plenty of emotional scenes that will certainly charm many despite the execution not quite living up to the premise.
' The truth just wants to come flowing out. This is especially the case when you are trying to hide your sadness or vulnerability.'
The hook for this book is certainly the time travel aspect, the mechanics of which falls apart under careful scrutiny, sure, but this isn’t hard scifi and ultimately it serves as an engaging and charming plot vessel to look at interpersonal relationships. There is a strict set of rules that grow with each stories which makes for some absurd fun as the characters are often bewildered by how restrictive they are to the point of almost rendering the time traveling useless. The biggest one being that �at the end of the day, whether one returns to the past or travels to the future, the present doesn't change.� Add on to this that you can only be back in time until your coffee gets cold or face horrible consequences, and the spacial limitations for traveling seem like a marketing trick to force someone to be a regular at the shop in order for the time traveling to even conceivably be useful.
All of these limitations make sense for a stage production with only one set, and, ultimately, that medium feels better fit for this story. At times it feels like over-direction as well, as if this book is giving notes for what is probably an inevitable film adaptation, with awkward overemphasis on the outfits and colors each character wears. Having it as a novel does give more insight into the characters and provide backstory and context, but so much was already done well with the dialogue it feels almost unnecessary. It might have been more effective had it not made the pacing so jumpy, with flashbacks constantly interrupting the scenes and drawing the tension out in a way that feels like the elimination round scenes in a reality show where you just want to get to the point.
What transpires is frequently moving, with much of the emotional weight pinned on long held secrets or insecurities finally being revealed. The second story is particularly effective and deals with alzheimers, though at this point it seems the novel puts a lot of emphasis on women sacrificing themselves and being expected to give endless emotional labor as a heroic act. Which, particularly in the final section becomes rather annoying. The final story involves sacrificing one’s health for a pregnancy and like, maybe men should cool off the “women dying in childbirth for emotional effect� trope because it’s not awesome, though another story involves a woman giving up her life and business to return to a family business she dislikes. It just feels a bit not great, but he does mine these scenarios for some particularly tearful scenes.
Before the Coffee Goes Cold has a lot of mechanical and thematic issues that didn’t work for me, but overall it succeeds as being a cozy and emotionally taxing read. I suspect a lot of people will be really moved by it and I’m sure will find it very heartwarming. Reading this does make me want to see the play and I quite enjoyed all the time travel aspects, particularly the ghost element that was playful and really worked to add texture to the story. A fun read, though not one I’m particularly fond of, but effectively shows the message that �it takes courage to say what has to be said.�
2.5/5
If you could return to the past, but knew you couldn’t change anything, what would you go for? Before The Coffee Gets Cold, the debut novel by Japanese playwright Toshikazu Kawaguchi and translated into English by Geoffrey Trousselot, is a warm and quirky time-travel story all confined into the singular space of a small Tokyo coffee shop. Originally a play, which may have been a better medium as the book occasionally feels like a film novelisation with pacing issues, the story stands on the strength of it’s small cast of characters as they support and empathize with one another and, in turn, win over our empathy. The time travel is complete with its own mythology and a ghost, none of which make all that much sense but it works in order to examine the emotional obstacles that exist between people (if quirky and heartwarming time travel is your thing, though, just watch because it's amazing). It is a unique take on the genre that seems certain of itself as a heartwarming tear-jerker and is successful at being moving although some of the stories are a bit eyebrow-raising (the final story is a theme I dislike). A bit rough around the edges, Before the Coffee Gets Cold is a rather cute and moving idea with plenty of emotional scenes that will certainly charm many despite the execution not quite living up to the premise.
' The truth just wants to come flowing out. This is especially the case when you are trying to hide your sadness or vulnerability.'
The hook for this book is certainly the time travel aspect, the mechanics of which falls apart under careful scrutiny, sure, but this isn’t hard scifi and ultimately it serves as an engaging and charming plot vessel to look at interpersonal relationships. There is a strict set of rules that grow with each stories which makes for some absurd fun as the characters are often bewildered by how restrictive they are to the point of almost rendering the time traveling useless. The biggest one being that �at the end of the day, whether one returns to the past or travels to the future, the present doesn't change.� Add on to this that you can only be back in time until your coffee gets cold or face horrible consequences, and the spacial limitations for traveling seem like a marketing trick to force someone to be a regular at the shop in order for the time traveling to even conceivably be useful.
All of these limitations make sense for a stage production with only one set, and, ultimately, that medium feels better fit for this story. At times it feels like over-direction as well, as if this book is giving notes for what is probably an inevitable film adaptation, with awkward overemphasis on the outfits and colors each character wears. Having it as a novel does give more insight into the characters and provide backstory and context, but so much was already done well with the dialogue it feels almost unnecessary. It might have been more effective had it not made the pacing so jumpy, with flashbacks constantly interrupting the scenes and drawing the tension out in a way that feels like the elimination round scenes in a reality show where you just want to get to the point.
What transpires is frequently moving, with much of the emotional weight pinned on long held secrets or insecurities finally being revealed. The second story is particularly effective and deals with alzheimers, though at this point it seems the novel puts a lot of emphasis on women sacrificing themselves and being expected to give endless emotional labor as a heroic act. Which, particularly in the final section becomes rather annoying. The final story involves sacrificing one’s health for a pregnancy and like, maybe men should cool off the “women dying in childbirth for emotional effect� trope because it’s not awesome, though another story involves a woman giving up her life and business to return to a family business she dislikes. It just feels a bit not great, but he does mine these scenarios for some particularly tearful scenes.
Before the Coffee Goes Cold has a lot of mechanical and thematic issues that didn’t work for me, but overall it succeeds as being a cozy and emotionally taxing read. I suspect a lot of people will be really moved by it and I’m sure will find it very heartwarming. Reading this does make me want to see the play and I quite enjoyed all the time travel aspects, particularly the ghost element that was playful and really worked to add texture to the story. A fun read, though not one I’m particularly fond of, but effectively shows the message that �it takes courage to say what has to be said.�
2.5/5
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Thank you so much! I'd love to see the play version, all the exposition scenes they added to this almost felt unnessesary? Like you mention in your review, it didn't add any depth beyond scene setting i guess? I feel like this might even be one where a mini-series adaptation would be better than the book too.


Oh nice, I’ll be interested to see what you think!


Hey thanks! Now I need to do my semi-annual About Time rewatch. Glad we both had the same major complaint with this one. I was pretty charmed by it despite some minor gripes but the whole angle in that final story is ugghhhhhh


I’m curious how much of that is a holdover from this originally being written as a play and like, really having a specific visual vision for it. I could see this being a really cool miniseries though, so we will have to see if they use the suggested costume designs haha


Thank you so much! Haha oh no, hope I didn’t deter you too much. I will say Japanese women authors are some of my favorites and a good place to start. Mieko Kawakami is an absolute favorite and I love a lot of Hiromi Kawakami’s books. Especially The Nakano Thrift Shop. oooo and Convenience Store Woman by Sayaka Murata is delightful So hope that helps some!

Thanks for the recommendations. Let me start my Japanese authors' exploration with the aforesaid.

Oh excellent! I hope those are helpful and you find one to enjoy!


Oh excellent, I hope you enjoy! I’ve been meaning to pick up the sequel too

I love your idea of a marketing trick to force someone to be a regular, though given there are only eight customer seats (view spoiler) , I'm not sure that's necessary!
I can imagine it working a little better on stage than page, but I think that's partly because there's an extra degree of magic and willing suspension of disbelief.

I love your idea of a marketing trick to force someone to be a regular, though given there are only eight customer seats , I'm not s..."
Ooops how did I miss this? Anyways, thank you, and yea just too many flaws and a lot of them pretty uncomfortably uncool. And true, I bet this works quite well on stage and the audience goes with the flow without feeling they need to analyze it the way one does with a novel. I see why this was a big hit but meh, just not for me either.

Thanks! Yea there’s a lot of charm but I felt bogged down by a lot of it. Just so much relied on the women giving up everything for someone else, which felt kind of uncool. Do you plan to read any of the sequels?


Thanks! Yea I see why it was so popular but…meh a lot of it rubbed me the wrong way


Thank you, sorry this was a let down for you as well

Thank you so much! yeaaaaaaaa it just felt really clunky right? I can imagine it working well as a play but agreed. Ha yea, SO many rules. I did kind of dig the ghost part in retrospect. Did you end up reading any of the others? I'm surprised how many of these keep coming out!