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The imagery in this scene…it’s like I’m there.
“Over to the windows, where he slides one hand through his hair and fists the other in front of his mouth. I see his reflection blink quickly before his eyes close.�
— Aug 13, 2022 06:07PM
“Over to the windows, where he slides one hand through his hair and fists the other in front of his mouth. I see his reflection blink quickly before his eyes close.�
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Awwwww! This is too cute. 🥰
“Now, the question comes easier than I expected. ‘Can I buy you dinner?�
His flush is back. His Adam’s apple rises and falls. The puck in his hands stills. ‘Yeah.’�
— Aug 13, 2022 04:40PM
“Now, the question comes easier than I expected. ‘Can I buy you dinner?�
His flush is back. His Adam’s apple rises and falls. The puck in his hands stills. ‘Yeah.’�
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Aug 13, 2022 06:14PM
his writing is my favorite. i know it’s purple prose but i love it? it works so well for me that it’s easy to imagine literally everything.
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@elena- It works for me too! At least the newer stuff does. I’m a huge fan of his writing it covers things that usually bother me.
