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Eclipse
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Retreat
�At the core of it all there is an absence.�
When empty, broken, and destroyed, where does one go for solitary reflection? For a few hours, I head to the forest, step confidently off the path, and lose myself among the trees. No wolves round here, so I may wear my blood-red coat. But to live alone for a period, I would seek an uninhabited version of my grandparents� farmhouse: rooms, corridors, and cupboards sheltering deep memories and aromas from a distant age; fur and pawprints of the only dog I ever loved; hidden nooks crammed with curious mementos and friendly phantoms; a fragrant fruitful garden tapping at the leaded windows, and sunlight twinkling through the sheltering shade of the giant cedar, as it sings in the breeze. But would that heal, or hurt?
�When I fled the peopled world I had no one except myself to keep me from coming to grief. And it was to grief that I came.�

After the crisis of corpsing on stage, Alex Cleave retreats to his abandoned childhood home. He leaves his wife Lydia behind, and is out of contact with their troubled adult daughter Cass. As a child, he was familiar with the “alien presences� of lodgers, and once saw his father’s ghost. Returning, he finds there are phantoms still: real, imagined, or both.
Haunted by memories and premonitions, he devotes himself to indulgent introspection, �A way of being alive without living�, until �I catch myself, red-handed, in the act of living; alone, without an audience.� One of many contrasts and contradictions.
Poetic Incongruity
Almost every page is studded with highly-polished gems that distract from unsettling suspicions. There is something ghostly and intangible about the startling, but carefully chosen words, and about the images and ideas they simultaneously conjure and conceal. Read Banville for the language (the plot is sparse and uncertain).
� In the corners of the room brownish shadows thronged. �
The rhythm is perfect, and several of the words carry so much unexpected meaning they’re irreplaceable.
Just as people take on ghostly forms, so light takes on corporeal form.
� Around us the shocked shadows congregated... On the lino... a sunburst streamed and shivered. �
In the examples below (spoilered for brevity, not plot secrets), there is at least one ordinary word that gains heft by incongruity
(view spoiler)
Banville even makes the “desolating rapture� of masturbating to “antique smut� transcendent and almost beautiful.
Voices, Phantoms, and an Unreliable Narrator
Amid a mix of inadvertent and deliberate dishonesty, truth is hinted at, whether Alex realises or not.
When he first met Lydia, he “was not entirely what I pretended to be�. Alex is always a performer; he toys with truth and dodgy memories, “unknown, even to myself�..
When Cass was born, he saw “a host of shadowy ancestors, all of them jostling together�. As a child, she started hearing voices - an inverse of Alex being an actor, something he silently accuses her of being. Seeing phantoms helps him empathise with her “uncertainty as to what is real�, but it makes his account more questionable.
Fathers and Daughters, Mothers and Sons
Alex is an outsider in his own town, in his own family. Like an anthropologist or a vivisectionist, he stalks, observes, and collects strays and “anomalies�. Phantoms are more enticing than his living, breathing family.
He is a lifelong “devotee of the goddess� in various forms� starting with his misunderstood mother. The allure of an older woman is a major theme of his teenage years, told in Ancient Light (my review HERE), and there are strong Oedipal overtones in his marriage.
But Alex was always committed to Cass and her needs - at least in his telling. Lydia sees it differently: jealousy, or something else? Certainly there is always the hint of tragedy to come that reminded me slightly of Emperor Augustus and Julia (see my review of Augustus) and Stoner and Grace (see my review of Stoner).
There is another father and daughter here, initially in the shadows: Quirke the caretaker, and teenage Lily. They have a curious and rather detached relationship. Alex’s arrival disturbs that dynamic, and distorts the lens through which he views his estrangement from Cass. His interest in Lily is overtly paternal. But unspoken spectres hover.
Solar Eclipse

The certainty of an eclipse is that the sun so suddenly extinguished will reappear just as abruptly. But despite the many and glorious mentions of light, this book is shaded by the fearful expectation of darkness, foreshadowing the title of the next book, Shroud.
Near the end, Alex experiences the partial (and cloudy) solar eclipse of 1999: “Peculiar light, insipid and shrouded, like the light in a dream.� I visited Cornwall then, where it was total. Despite the clouds, there was an instant unleashing of visceral, elemental, primordial power that made me eager to experience another, better eclipse.
Quotes about Light

Light is a leitmotif, just as in Ancient Light (and maybe in Shroud, tbc), but where there is light, there are also shadows. Smells, usually unpleasant, are frequently and vividly mentioned, as in The Sea. But sound (except for a wonderful passage about manic seagulls), taste, and touch are secondary.
Spoilered for brevity, not plot secrets. (view spoiler)
Alex’s Aphorisms
Spoilered for brevity, not plot secrets. (view spoiler)
Miscellaneous Quotes
Spoilered for brevity, not plot secrets. (view spoiler)
Notes
Spoilered for brevity, not plot secrets. (view spoiler)
The Cleave Trilogy
The ancient light of the past illuminates the present and future.
The publication order of the Alex and Cass Cleave father/daughter trilogy is Eclipse, then Shroud, and finally, Ancient Light.
However, there’s no need to read them in sequence, as they all have a current storyline intertwined with reflections of earlier events. (My reading order was 3, 1, 2.) The middle one is more about Cass, and the other two focus on Alex.
Hidden for brevity. (view spoiler)
Oedipus, meet Humbert.["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>
�At the core of it all there is an absence.�
When empty, broken, and destroyed, where does one go for solitary reflection? For a few hours, I head to the forest, step confidently off the path, and lose myself among the trees. No wolves round here, so I may wear my blood-red coat. But to live alone for a period, I would seek an uninhabited version of my grandparents� farmhouse: rooms, corridors, and cupboards sheltering deep memories and aromas from a distant age; fur and pawprints of the only dog I ever loved; hidden nooks crammed with curious mementos and friendly phantoms; a fragrant fruitful garden tapping at the leaded windows, and sunlight twinkling through the sheltering shade of the giant cedar, as it sings in the breeze. But would that heal, or hurt?
�When I fled the peopled world I had no one except myself to keep me from coming to grief. And it was to grief that I came.�

After the crisis of corpsing on stage, Alex Cleave retreats to his abandoned childhood home. He leaves his wife Lydia behind, and is out of contact with their troubled adult daughter Cass. As a child, he was familiar with the “alien presences� of lodgers, and once saw his father’s ghost. Returning, he finds there are phantoms still: real, imagined, or both.
Haunted by memories and premonitions, he devotes himself to indulgent introspection, �A way of being alive without living�, until �I catch myself, red-handed, in the act of living; alone, without an audience.� One of many contrasts and contradictions.
Poetic Incongruity
Almost every page is studded with highly-polished gems that distract from unsettling suspicions. There is something ghostly and intangible about the startling, but carefully chosen words, and about the images and ideas they simultaneously conjure and conceal. Read Banville for the language (the plot is sparse and uncertain).
� In the corners of the room brownish shadows thronged. �
The rhythm is perfect, and several of the words carry so much unexpected meaning they’re irreplaceable.
Just as people take on ghostly forms, so light takes on corporeal form.
� Around us the shocked shadows congregated... On the lino... a sunburst streamed and shivered. �
In the examples below (spoilered for brevity, not plot secrets), there is at least one ordinary word that gains heft by incongruity
(view spoiler)
Banville even makes the “desolating rapture� of masturbating to “antique smut� transcendent and almost beautiful.
Voices, Phantoms, and an Unreliable Narrator
Amid a mix of inadvertent and deliberate dishonesty, truth is hinted at, whether Alex realises or not.
When he first met Lydia, he “was not entirely what I pretended to be�. Alex is always a performer; he toys with truth and dodgy memories, “unknown, even to myself�..
When Cass was born, he saw “a host of shadowy ancestors, all of them jostling together�. As a child, she started hearing voices - an inverse of Alex being an actor, something he silently accuses her of being. Seeing phantoms helps him empathise with her “uncertainty as to what is real�, but it makes his account more questionable.
Fathers and Daughters, Mothers and Sons
Alex is an outsider in his own town, in his own family. Like an anthropologist or a vivisectionist, he stalks, observes, and collects strays and “anomalies�. Phantoms are more enticing than his living, breathing family.
He is a lifelong “devotee of the goddess� in various forms� starting with his misunderstood mother. The allure of an older woman is a major theme of his teenage years, told in Ancient Light (my review HERE), and there are strong Oedipal overtones in his marriage.
But Alex was always committed to Cass and her needs - at least in his telling. Lydia sees it differently: jealousy, or something else? Certainly there is always the hint of tragedy to come that reminded me slightly of Emperor Augustus and Julia (see my review of Augustus) and Stoner and Grace (see my review of Stoner).
There is another father and daughter here, initially in the shadows: Quirke the caretaker, and teenage Lily. They have a curious and rather detached relationship. Alex’s arrival disturbs that dynamic, and distorts the lens through which he views his estrangement from Cass. His interest in Lily is overtly paternal. But unspoken spectres hover.
Solar Eclipse

The certainty of an eclipse is that the sun so suddenly extinguished will reappear just as abruptly. But despite the many and glorious mentions of light, this book is shaded by the fearful expectation of darkness, foreshadowing the title of the next book, Shroud.
Near the end, Alex experiences the partial (and cloudy) solar eclipse of 1999: “Peculiar light, insipid and shrouded, like the light in a dream.� I visited Cornwall then, where it was total. Despite the clouds, there was an instant unleashing of visceral, elemental, primordial power that made me eager to experience another, better eclipse.
Quotes about Light

Light is a leitmotif, just as in Ancient Light (and maybe in Shroud, tbc), but where there is light, there are also shadows. Smells, usually unpleasant, are frequently and vividly mentioned, as in The Sea. But sound (except for a wonderful passage about manic seagulls), taste, and touch are secondary.
Spoilered for brevity, not plot secrets. (view spoiler)
Alex’s Aphorisms
Spoilered for brevity, not plot secrets. (view spoiler)
Miscellaneous Quotes
Spoilered for brevity, not plot secrets. (view spoiler)
Notes
Spoilered for brevity, not plot secrets. (view spoiler)
The Cleave Trilogy
The ancient light of the past illuminates the present and future.
The publication order of the Alex and Cass Cleave father/daughter trilogy is Eclipse, then Shroud, and finally, Ancient Light.
However, there’s no need to read them in sequence, as they all have a current storyline intertwined with reflections of earlier events. (My reading order was 3, 1, 2.) The middle one is more about Cass, and the other two focus on Alex.
Hidden for brevity. (view spoiler)
Oedipus, meet Humbert.["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>
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April 20, 2015
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to-read
April 20, 2015
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January 27, 2017
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ireland
January 30, 2017
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Started Reading
February 1, 2017
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16.36%
"You have to read this slowly, as a poem.
'In the corners of the room brownish shadows thronged.'
Ponder that startling and perfect sentence - including its rhythm.
Banville often writes about light (and smells), but where there is light, there are also shadows."
page
35
'In the corners of the room brownish shadows thronged.'
Ponder that startling and perfect sentence - including its rhythm.
Banville often writes about light (and smells), but where there is light, there are also shadows."
February 5, 2017
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30.37%
"A man near death was 'lost inside his clothes... moving wraithlike... a stooping figure flickering from sunlight into shadow... leaving no trace of his passing save a sort of shimmer, a fold in the air, and a coiling question mark of cigarette smoke.' p57"
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65
February 10, 2017
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71.96%
"Just as people take on ghostly forms, so light takes on corporeal form:
'Around us the shocked shadows congregated... On the lino... a sunburst streamed and shivered.'
p142"
page
154
'Around us the shocked shadows congregated... On the lino... a sunburst streamed and shivered.'
p142"
February 11, 2017
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100.0%
"'At the core of it all there is an absence.' p211
I'm going to have to shelve this with ghost stories."
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214
I'm going to have to shelve this with ghost stories."
February 12, 2017
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Finished Reading
February 15, 2017
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February 15, 2017
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Thanks, Fortunr. When I was trying to think of an illustration, I remembered seeing pictures of that statue, so then it was just a matter of tracking it down.



Don't worry about not fitting in a Bonnie Tyler ref, she had a big hit with "Lost in France" and never once did she mention hamsters and elderberries in the song. Shameful! (→_�)



Thank you, Adore, with your axe. It was just as good as Ancient Light, but I confess, I'm not enjoying Shroud quite as much. But I'm only ~20% in.

Thanks, Lizzy. Yes, as you enjoyed The Sea, I'm sure you'd enjoy these three. I'm not yet sure what the best reading sequence is. Few of my friends have read them in publication order, and nor am I.

I'd be interested in your take on this if you did read it. I just hope I haven't overdone the "spooky" aspect. It's not like The Woman in Black etc.
Apatt wrote: "Bonnie Tyler ref, she had a big hit with "Lost in France" and never once did she mention hamsters and elderberries in the song. Shameful! (→_�) "
Bah! I've gone right off her now.

A "character" indeed, and not as nice as he'd like us to believe.
Cheryl wrote: "I think Lydia's unease stemmed from something hinted...
Lovely review, Cecily."
Yes, I agree, and I've tried to hint at it in a couple of places in this review, without giving too much away. There's more in Ancient Light, and probably in Shroud. Thanks, Cheryl.

You're very generous, Agnieszka. It's longer and bittier than I intended, so it's reassuring to know it's appreciated. If I marked up my books or used sticky notes, my copy would be covered, too.


I have two of his Revolutions trilogy books on my shelves, and going through your thorough analysis of themes, symbols and his prose poetry style, you've whetted my appetite to revisit his works soon.


Thanks, TD, and yes, it's true of all those I've read - though slightly less so for Shroud, so far.

Thanks, and yes, the veil becomes less concealing the more one reads. The combination of beauty and possible horror is a delicate skill: Nabokov, certainly, but also reminds me of Burgess' Clockwork Orange.
Dolors wrote: "I have two of his Revolutions trilogy books on my shelves, and going through your thorough analysis of themes, symbols and his prose poetry style, you've whetted my appetite to revisit his works soon."
You've whetted mine for your reviews of them.

Thanks, Alfred. Yes, darkness and shadow dominates the mood, even though light dominates the literal words.


Yes, he does, or is that just the persona Alex Cleave chooses to show? ;)
BlackOxford wrote: "I was on the Pembrokeshire coast during the 1999 eclipse. Another example of a physical event as part of common culture."
I'm guessing it was partial, maybe cloudy, but still dramatic? I was completely unprepared for what on other-worldly experience it would be.

Also loved the line you quoted from Banville about the open door breathing brownly. Something to savour.

Thanks. It's much changed in some ways, but essentially the same. In my mid teens, my grandparents moved to a smaller home and my uncle and his wife moved in and remodelled aspects of the house and garden. Now my cousin is living there, has made a few more changes, and he and his wife are expecting their first child.
Fionnuala wrote: "Also loved the line you quoted from Banville about the open door breathing brownly. Something to savour."
There's a lot of brown in this book. Not usually an inspiring or beautiful colour, but in Banville's hands, it is.

Looking at my copy of this book, I see that I read it in August 2015. Not strictly read as I abandoned it. I don't know why I didn't like this work but... Just one of those things I guess. I seem to either love books with a passion or else they bore me to death. No pleasing me is there...

Thank you, Lynne.
Lynne wrote: "I don't know why I didn't like this work but... Just one of those things I guess. I seem to either love books with a passion or else they bore me to death. No pleasing me is there."
Au contraire. You are pleased, but very selectively. It's frustrating for the things you don't enjoy, but at least you love others with a real passion. I'd far rather that than be luke-warm about lots of things.


If you've tried him twice, I wouldn't suggest trying again. Life's too short, and one's TBR too tall for reading things one doesn't enjoy.
Violet wrote: "I'm not encouraged by those quotes! A lot of 'em read to me like rather hollow aphorisms. "Grief takes the taste out of things.� Isn't that a bit trite?"
That one, certainly - hence I put it in a category of Alex's aphorisms. He likes to pontificate. I'm not sure Banville is claiming that's as profound as Alex would like people to think.
The other quotes may be too florid for some (but you like DHL), but "trite" doesn't seem the right word to me. Still, we all have different reactions; that's part of the rich tapestry of GR.

I really enjoyed your own submission of wistful introspection too!
The author's poetic prose, as highlighted, is very much my thang.

I really enjoyed your own submission of wistful introspection too!
The author's poetic prose, as highlighted, is very much my thang."
Thanks, Kevin. It's a wonderful book that makes it impossible to avoid wistful introspection, as is Ancient Light. (Unfortunately, Shroud is proving less so.)


Thanks so much for letting me know. I've fixed it.

Thanks so much for letting me know. I've fixed it."
:)