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bookshelves: 1st-person-pov, coming-out, contemporary, discovering-sexuality, dual-pov, lgbtq, romance, sports, ebook
Aug 13, 2022
bookshelves: 1st-person-pov, coming-out, contemporary, discovering-sexuality, dual-pov, lgbtq, romance, sports, ebook
|| 2.5 stars ||
This was very sweet, gentle, cheesy and romantic.
Hunter and Bryce obviously share an epic kind of love. They adore each other with all that they are, and it shows. It’s very over-the-top ‘love of my life� kind of stuff.
However, their complete overdose of cuteness and sappiness did start to become very boring over time. They basically get together in the middle of the book, and during the whole second half nothing happens aside from them looking dreamily into each other’s eyes, thinking and talking about how much they love each other, and, of course, they also play hockey together. It’s sweet, but repetitive. The prose is also very flowery.
The beginning of this book was amazing, though. The way they got to know each other and how enamoured Bryce was with Hunter from the get-go was all quite lovely.
It was amazing to see them form a connection, and it was also beautifully sad to see how heartbroken they both were when they had to go their separate ways.
The angst coming from Bryce when he thought he could never have Hunter was one of my favourite parts.
Long story short, I loved the first half of this book, but unfortunately the second half was a complete bore.
Also, fair warning: there is quite a lot of French in this book. I speak it a little, so I didn’t have to use google translate all the time, but I already found it very annoying. I can imagine it being extremely tiresome to have to use google translate for even more of these sentences while reading this book if you don’t understand French at all.
This was very sweet, gentle, cheesy and romantic.
Hunter and Bryce obviously share an epic kind of love. They adore each other with all that they are, and it shows. It’s very over-the-top ‘love of my life� kind of stuff.
However, their complete overdose of cuteness and sappiness did start to become very boring over time. They basically get together in the middle of the book, and during the whole second half nothing happens aside from them looking dreamily into each other’s eyes, thinking and talking about how much they love each other, and, of course, they also play hockey together. It’s sweet, but repetitive. The prose is also very flowery.
Is this what falling in love really is? Finding that half of your heart lives within another? Having all your questions and wonders and worries from before answered through the shape of someone else’s smile?
The beginning of this book was amazing, though. The way they got to know each other and how enamoured Bryce was with Hunter from the get-go was all quite lovely.
It was amazing to see them form a connection, and it was also beautifully sad to see how heartbroken they both were when they had to go their separate ways.
The angst coming from Bryce when he thought he could never have Hunter was one of my favourite parts.
Long story short, I loved the first half of this book, but unfortunately the second half was a complete bore.
Also, fair warning: there is quite a lot of French in this book. I speak it a little, so I didn’t have to use google translate all the time, but I already found it very annoying. I can imagine it being extremely tiresome to have to use google translate for even more of these sentences while reading this book if you don’t understand French at all.
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Reading Progress
August 12, 2022
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August 13, 2022
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August 13, 2022
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1st-person-pov
August 13, 2022
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contemporary
August 13, 2022
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coming-out
August 13, 2022
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discovering-sexuality
August 13, 2022
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dual-pov
August 13, 2022
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lgbtq
August 13, 2022
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romance
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sports
August 13, 2022
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June 13, 2023
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So, well, if you are going to read this only for the so called ‘friends-to-lovers� trope then I fear you are going to end up being a little disappointed🫤








Also, I’m sorry but I haven’t read The Jock, so I couldn’t tell you if it’s similar😬
Thank you❤️ I hope you’ll enjoy this more than I did when you read it😘










With regards to the translating: I really didn’t like having to translate stuff either, but I did it anyway, because almost all of the romantic and sweet stuff is said in French, so I would’ve felt cheated out of the love story if I didn’t google what the certain things meant that I didn’t already know😅😂 It’s interesting that you’ve decided to just ignore all the French loll, I wonder how that would read haha




At least u enjoyed the beginning!
I actually liked that they got together in the middle, not often we get to enjoy a couple being happy together



Definitely try one of Tal’s political thrillers next - they’re very different, and I think they’d suit you better. The Evecutive Office series, The Murder /Grave Between Us� the love story isn’t the biggest focus like Tal’s latest releases. He seems to be experimenting with different themes lately & it’s worked to expand his readership, but they’re more relationship focussed.

I think the French in this book will definitely have lots of different opinions going with it. I can see why some people might like reading bits of “a new language�, others might find it terribly inconvenient and unnecessary, and most will probably just ignore it lol. I’m definitely a bit shocked to hear you say a French speaker said some of the French didn’t make sense, though.. I feel like if you write a book like this then that really shouldn’t happen and the author should at least let a French speaker check your book on the language. But I’m also wondering, could it possibly be that this French speaker is from France or another French speaking country other than Canada? Because French-Canadian does tend to be different from regular French, or so I’ve heard. So that could be it, maybe?
Anyhow, thank you for your recommendations! I’m happy to get some advice with this author, because I’m not sure where to go from here hahah.
I’m definitely glad this book worked so well for you; I wish it’d gone similarly for me, and that I would have loved the whole book as much as I did the beginning!
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To add to the French comments, i’m a French speaker, from Quebec actually, so I speak the exact same dialect thats meant to the be in the book. And the French is pretty fucking awful 😂 Some of it is really badly said and makes no sense, and most of it isn’t at all how anyone would say it in Quebec, which is getting on my nerves � a lot 😂



This was actually my first ever book by TB, so the cheesiness blindsided me a little bit. I’m happy to hear that at least this was OTT even for him😅 I’m sorry this was a miss for both of us🫤



